The Destiny updated pg. 145 part 23 - Page 3

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey Vertika dear,

G8 that u started a new fic too.😃😃

Starting is superb, concept bhi accha hai pehle se alag.😊😊

Cont soon.😛😛

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

Hello Suhana darling😊😊😊

This is ypur 5th Fiction i think so in dis forum..How do u come up with such brilliant story ideas..I cant think of 1 plot n u r dealing with 5 simultaneuosly..👏

Yaar ab aa jaate hai mere is chote se dimaag me ideas to mai sochti hoon kyoun na us ko develpo kar k koi story likhi jaaye😆😆😆. Filhaal Eternal khatam ho gaya ab bus 4 fics hain par ek aur idea aa raha hai mere dimaag me😉😉😉. Let's see may be u get a nice fic again.😛😛😛

Believe me i love your fictions very much ..B it Zindagi,Unknown Desires,(Inhe bhi update kar diya karo frequently) Eternal,Chahat etc etc...😆

Karti hoon par idhar kuch dino me mera focus Eternal par jyada tha ab sab ko siml. karoongi ud.😃😃😃

Update was really gud n story is little different but i have read something of this sort in LRL threads..

Haan Andera, Priyanka aur Anjali ka ek fic tha aisa hi but is ki story bilkul alag hone waali hai.😕😕😕

Do update soon

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
update soon...........

Originally posted by: yyyy

wow one more ff..i would love to read that..the concept sounds interesting....i am waiting for more

Originally posted by: srojaleen

HIIIIIII VERTIKA, main yeh soch rahi thi, k tum pagal ho ya genus......... kyoun k kahte hain k har scientist pagal hota hai, tabhi woh genius hota hai. tum kya ho ...yaar,😊 yahi samajh main nahin aaraha hai !!!!!!!!!!! matlab yahan par ek hi fic ne mera band bajaya hua hai😕. aur tum 4/5 fics ko kaise handle kar rahi ho... yaar? woh bhi ek sath!!!!!!!!!

Yaar mai to bahut choti se insaan hoon kahan tum genius scientists se mujhe compair kar rahi ho😳😳😳. Bus idea aaya aur likh daala.😉😉😉

uper se sab fics ek se badh kar ek DHAMAL ke...........👏bole to mindblowing!!!!!!!!👍🏼 ideas kahan se milte hai tumhe.........yaar !!!!!!!! koi spl. tonic leti ho kya??????

ab is fic k bare main kahoon.............nahin..... yaar.... main nahin kahne bali !!!!!!!!! pahle TONIC ka naam batao!!!!!!!!!!

Pata nahi kaise dimaag me aa jate hain kabhi kabhi😆😆😆.Nahi koi special tonic nahi hai yaar ab mujhe sharminda mat karo yaar.😳😳😳

LOVE & WISHES

PRIYA

Originally posted by: TaNia2008

hey nice start.👏 👏

Thanks Tanu darling😊😊😊

Raj is not ready to marry Naina...😭 😭

Haan us ka guilt nahi karne de raha hai us ko aisa.

but i think raj's mom is right....his dicision will be changed after meeting Naina...

dekhte hain kya hota hai?😕😕

waiting for the next.

update soon.

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII VARTIKA SWEETY SO WHAT'S UP DEAR

AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME

START

CONTINUE SOON DEAR

WITH LOVE

DEEP.

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hi!!!Vertika!!!

Read the intro portion now......awesome dear...

very interesting....

Continue soon.

Take care.

love

Riya.

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing concept Vertika...darling u r a star in writting ffs.....i think this is ur 5th ff na...and i know that till now i haven't commented in others...SOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRYYYY.....i have started with this ff....please please update soon dear...can't resist to read further....i love the concept......a huge round of appalause for such beautiful concept and title is beautiful.....👏...love u for this new RN ff....all the best for the next update.....

Here is the next part guys:-

"Kaun hain aap aur kis se milna hai aap ko?" the girl asked.

Raj was looking at her speechless. She was too beautiful as much as fresh morning dew, as much as rays of rising sun, as much as moon light, as much as a first drop of fresh rain. He remained stunned by her beauty but there was something which was disturbing him that was her eyes which were indicating him loneliness. Her face was dim yet pretty. For a moment he lost somewhere after seeing her.

"Excuse me for whom u r looking for?" she asked again.

"Who's there Naina?" her mom asked.

"I don't know mom please come n see." She said.

"Are beta tum aao na kab aaye?" Naina's room recognizes Raj.

Now he comes out from his dreamland n bends n touches her feet with teary eyes.

"Aap kaise hai aunty?" he asked.

"I am fine beta, come n sit." She made her sit in dining room.

The room was filled with all over Naveen's photos n medals. Raj had a look the room it seems it's walls were not been painted for a long time. The house was looking dull as Naina.

"Would u like to have anything beta?" Naina's mom asked.

"No aunty, actually mom has given me this to give u; I just came to give it to u." he handed over a packet to her.

"No beta no more helps now. She n your father has already done a lot for us." Naveen's mom replied with gratitude filled eyes.

"She gave me this letter too to give u." he handed over a letter.

She opened the letter and started reading it.

Mrs. n Mr. Ahluwalia,

Aap sab kaise hain?

Maine Raj ko ek packet diya hai jis me shagun ka samaan aur Naina k liye saari hai.

Ab aap sochengi ki maine ye sab kyoun diya kyounki mai chahti hoon ki Raj aur Naina shaddi kar lein.

Par ye baat maine abhi tak Raj ko nahi batayi hai kyounki mai chahti thi ki pehle Raj ek baar Naina ko dekh le.

Mujhe pata hai ki Naina ko dekhne k baad Raj haan jaroor kahega kyounki humari Naina hai hi aise ki kisi ko bhi pasand aa jaaye.

Mai Raj k lautate hi aap ko inform kar doongi aur tab tak aap shagun ka ye saaman apne paas rakh lijiye.

With a lot of blessing for our would be daughter in law.

Mr. n Mrs. Shekhawat.

She closed the letter n smiled.

"Kya hai aunty is me?" he asked pointing towards letter.

"Nothing serious beta just ladies talks." She replied.

"Ok", he sighed.

"Naina bring some thing for Raj ." she called Naina .

"Yeah mom bringing." She replied.

Naina came inside with some eatables n tea.

"Have it beta," Mrs. Ahluwalia requested politely.

"Maa it's time for dad's medicine." Naina reminded her.

"Oh yeah, excuse me beta I will be just back." Naina's mom said n left.

'Jaisa naam vaise aankhein Naina kitna accha naam hai is ka. Naveen often told me about his sis but I never met her before otherwise it was shure that I have fallen for her' Raj thought in his mind.

"Kya hua aap kuch le nahi rahe hain ." Naina said .

"No it's ok." He paused, "vaise aap k dad ko kya hua hai?" Raj asked really concerned.

"Vo bhaiya k jaane k baad dad ko paralysis ka attack aaya tha bus tabhi se vo chal fir nahi paate hain." Naina's eyes were teary now.

"It's ok I didn't mean that." Raj felt sorry for giving her tears.

"It's ok Mr??." She stopped.

"My name is Rajveer Singh Shekhwat." He told her.

"I think I know u." Naina said thinking.

"Yeah I was Naveen's best friend." He told.

"Haan yaad aaya bhaiya aap k bare me bahut saari baatein karte the Veer aise hai, Veer vaise hai aur????.." Naina was crying ultimately

There was a pin drop silence after that. Naina was still crying but Raj can't do anything.

"Sach kaha tha dad ne ki mai hi hoon in sab k aanson ki wajah. Meri hi wajah se aaj in ki ye haalat hai." Raj thought.

"Please Naina ro mat tumhare bhaiya ko kaisa lagega jab vo uper se dekhnge tum ko aise rote hue batao." Raj was also in tears now.

"Pata nahi kyoun mai apne ansoon rok nahi paati hoon jab bhaiya ki koi yaad dilate hai."she was sobbing now.

"Mai samjhta hoon Naina but tum apne mom dad k samne aise kamjor nahi pad sakti." Raj tried to console her.

"Haan sach keh rahe hain aap. Aap ko pata hai mom heart patient hai mai un k saamne isiliye ro bhi nahi paati.Mujhe yaad hai jab bhaiya ko arrest kiya gaya tha tab mom ko first heart attack hua tha. Phir hum ne us se kuch nahi kaha aur jab un ko doosre logon se pata chala ki bhaiya traitor the tab un ko doosra heart attack aaya tha. Is k baad mai kabhi bhi un ko sab k beech nahi jaane deti hoon aur koshish karti hoon ki humseha khayal rakhoo maa ka aur papa ka." Naina was feeling better now to tell her heart out.

Raj was unable to find the words now. Tabhi Naina ki mom ne enter kiya, "Kya hua Naina?" her mom asked worried about her tears.

"Kuch nahi maa bus vo thoda bhaiya ki sharatein yaad aa gayi to aankh bhar gayi meri." Naina tried to hide.

"Beta please try to calm down now. U know Raj ye mujh se humesha kehti hai ki maa ro mat, mat socha karo itna par khud kitna roti hai Naveen k liye I know. Mere saamne kuch nahi kahegi par akele me??????" her mom said with heavy heart.

Raj got up immediately n said, "Aunty I will take ur leave now. It's getting late."

"Par beta tum ne to khana bhi nahi khaya abhi. Vaise bhi itni der ho gayi hai kaise jaoge?" Naina's mom confused at his behavior.

"Nahi aunty mai chaloonga abhi." He resisted.

"Beta meri baat suno mai nahi chahti hoon ki tum aaj jao. Aaj ruk jao kal jaana. Vaise bhi abhi koi bus ya train nahi milegi tum ko." She said.

"Par aunty??????.." before he could complete a loud scream echoed the room.

Naina screamed, " Papaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa".

So how's this part guys.

Wait to here it from all u .

Pls reply soon.