Kuch Iss Tara ~ P-4/Pg 8 ~ 10-17-08

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Posted: 16 years ago
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True Love Always Meet Again...

Kuch Iss Tara...!


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For those who don't know me... I am Kinjal and I recently joined here. And I love Hussain and Juhi's on-screen chemistry. So I decided to write a mini fan-fic after viewing September 5th, 2008 episode - where Kumkum see's Sumit everywhere...

So basically... my fan-fic starts off from today's episode - where Chanchal is trying to brainwash Sumit's family against their daughter-in-law Kumkum.

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Prologue...

"I can't believe that Sumit and Kumkum hid this from us?" said by Sumit's Mother (with tears)

"I don't think we should come to a conclusion without making sure if this report is 100percent correct" said by Amma (who always supported Sumit and Kumkum no matter what)

"I think Amma is right" said by Kommal (who always as faith in Sumit and Kumkum)...

Kumkum and Mini return from the mela with a disappointed look - because they had to go with Surjan Singh and his pal Lakhan.

"How was your day at the mela?" said by Kumkum's mother

"How can it be?" answered back Kumkum (who was still pis by Surjan's comment about Sumit's personally in-front of her)

"Why don't you all freshen up while I make dinner?" said by Kumkum's Mother

"As you wish... Maa" said by Kumkum (who is dying to take a bath after Surjan held her hand in his hand for a stupid photograph)...

Kumkum is busy taking a shower while Sumit's father kept on calling Sumit's cell and each time it would say "Please try again because they person you are trying to reach is unbelievable... due to bad connection please try again... thank you"

"What happen?" said by Sumit's mother (who is worried like hell)

Sumit's Father: Your son isn't picking up

Everyone gathered around the family room and Kumkum's mother asked Mini "Before I sever dinner... Where is the picture I gave you to frame?"

"Right here" Mini told her and pulls out the picture frame of Sumit and Kumkum together.

Kumkum's Mother looks at it and few tears fell on it...

"Maa, what's the matter?" Kumkum asked her (with a worried look)

"Nothing really, but just missing Sumit now a days" Kumkum's mother told everyone

Surjan Singh was feeling a-little jealous and wondering of Kumkum and Sumit are really married or not...

"Me too" answered back Kumkum (looking at Surjan Singh's face and his funny looking mustache)

"Think of the devil and the devil is here" said by Mini's Mother

Everyone turns around and look at the person Mini's mother is pointing at...


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Guys... I need at least two or more replies to continue further and also I hope you guys liked it...

Also please forgive me - if there is any mistake and please do let me know - how I did.

Thank you to all those people who will take their time in reading my fan-fic...

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi & welcome 2 KK Forum.................well i must say that it was a good start..............i would want 2 know what happenes next so do continue sooooooon.......................also i'm happy that i'm the 1st one 2 c ur ff.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Kinjal first of all Welcome to our Kumkum family
I must say it was an outstanding start
Loved your work
It was brillaint
Will wish to see what happens next
👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Welcome to the forum!!!
Hope your story comes true very soon.
Think of the devil and the devil is here - I'm sure its Sumit there😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear welcome to this forum firstly
and yeah nice beginning of ur ff
keep it up!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi kinjal its great starting dear u must continu..................😉
devil Su hai kya?😛.....................voh tho humara angel hai!! lets see!!
we are all waiting for the next part😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pearl29

Hi & welcome 2 KK Forum.................well i must say that it was a good start..............i would want 2 know what happenes next so do continue sooooooon.......................also i'm happy that i'm the 1st one 2 c ur ff.............



I'm glad that you liked the starting of Kuch Iss Tara and I promise you that you will love this fan-fic.... Also I already feel welcome.... Thanks 😛

Originally posted by: Fan of Juhi

Hi Kinjal first of all Welcome to our Kumkum family

I must say it was an outstanding start
Loved your work
It was brillaint
Will wish to see what happens next
👏



I'm glad that you liked my work... Also I'm please that you liked my fan-fic, but please forgive me... I won't be able to update until Thursday night 😭... Sorry about that...

Originally posted by: coorg.japan

Welcome to the forum!!!
Hope your story comes true very soon.
Think of the devil and the devil is here - I'm sure its Sumit there😊



Even I hope my story comes true in the show cause I am missing Sumit a-lot... now-a-day.
Anyways, thanks - I already feel welcome by your guys reply...

And it could be Sumit 😉 or someone else...

Originally posted by: jasmine chhabra

hey dear welcome to this forum firstly

and yeah nice beginning of ur ff
keep it up!!!!



Thanks and I promise that I won't disappoint you or anyone else.

Originally posted by: mdtafan

Hi kinjal its great starting dear u must continu..................😉

devil Su hai kya?😛.....................voh tho humara angel hai!! lets see!!
we are all waiting for the next part😉



Indeed... i'll continue after getting such a response also I am thrilled to see many people excited to read next part... even I am dying to write next part... But I can't for now but Thursday night for-sure.

Indeed... our Sumit is a "angel" but you can never gust who he will turn into a devil for Kumkum 😉...

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Got-to-go... now! So I'll see you guys later 😛

Peace Out

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal

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Posted: 16 years ago
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welcome Kinjal to the kumkum forum
and the start of your fanfic is really wonderful
so keep up the good work
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy kinjal!
Welcome to the kk forum.
I loved your ff so far.
I can bet you that the devil is sumit. 😆
But he's no devil. He's an angel. 😳
Plz do continue, & if you can, can u plz pm when u do update? 😳
I hope to hear more from you. 😃
Durga
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyyy nice ff cont soon cant wait to read the next part..........

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