Kuch Iss Tara ~ P-4/Pg 8 ~ 10-17-08

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@mirza_ajju

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

hi kinjal i am late but welcome to the forum a ver nice ff i loved it reading all parts together

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Kasamm

@Kasamm

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Thank you so much guys and here is the next part.... I hope you guys will like it and its going to more likely focus on Sumit and his new friend...

Part Two

Next morning... Sumit wakes up and see Kumkum brought him cup of tea. Sumit gets happy and asks her to come with him somewhere - if she trust him...

Kumkum placed her hands on top of his hands and told him "Sumit, I always trusted and always will... So where are we going?"

Sumit: Its a surprise

Kumkum: What kind of surprise?

"Kumkum, if I tell you the surprise than what's the point taking you" he told her

"Alright... I won't ask anymore questions but what should I wear?" she asked him

"Anything that your heart say but it has to be something in red?" he told her

She smiled at him than leaves because with Mini because her mother was calling her since past ten minutes but she couldn't hear anything because she was so lost in Sumit's eyes...

"Kumkum, why are you blushing?" asked by Mini (on the way to the kitchen)

"I'm not blushing" Kumkum told her

Mini: Yes you are
Kumkum: I'm not
Mini: Yes you are
Kumkum: I'm not
Mini: Yes you are
Kumkum: I'm not
Mini: Yes you are
Kumkum: Fine! I'm blushing because Sumit is taking me out...

Mini smiled at Kumkum than hugged her saying "I think its time you and Sumit tie the knot before anyone finds out about your contact marriage..."

Kumkum blushed even more...

"Please Beta, will you marry my daughter after I die?"

Aryan looked at Divya's father who was taking his last breathe... even Divya stared at her father with tears in her eyes... and told him "Papa, nothing will happen to you... I assure you"

"Its easy for you to say that nothing will happen to me but as a doctor... I know their is no hope left for me"

"Papa have faith in yourself and nothing will happen to you" Divya again repeated herself

Aryan: Uncle, Divya is right.... Nothing will happen to you Uncle.

Later that evening... Kumkum was dressed in a beautiful red sari...

The moment Mini walked in she smiled at Kumkum and told her "think about what I said earlier about you and Sumit"

"What should Kumkum think about me and herself?" Sumit asked them

Kumkum quickly said "nothing" before Mini could answer...

The moment Aryan says "yes" her father pass away with a smile knowing her daughter is in good hands...

Divya cried her lungs out...

Next day... Aryan burned Mr. Khanna's dead body while his mother and sister tried controlling Divya who cried non-stop.

Kumkum sat in her room and thought about her date with Sumit... last night.

Sumit was also dressed in red sherwani with white stood on it.

Kumkum smiled at him than they both leave toward his jeep...

Before she sat in the jeep, Sumit cover her eyes with a cloth so she can't peak...

"Sumit, what are you doing and why are you covering my eyes?" she asked him

"Kumkum, if you trust me than you won't ask any questions in what I'm doing or where we are going?" he told her

She just smiled at him...

Soon as they reach there... Sumit unties the cloth from Kumkum's eyes...

The moment Kumkum see's the place she hugs Sumit saying "I always wanted to come here but never had the guts, but today you made it possible. Thank you so much Sumit"

Sumit just smiled at her than takes her inside the cruise that was decorated with flowers and balloon everywhere...

"Kumkum, you must be wondering why I brought you here... right" he asked her

Kumkum just nods her head

Sumit takes her hand in his hand and asks her "for the past few days their have been several misunderstanding between us ad after going far away from you I realizes that I can't live without you so will you marry me"

Kumkum didn't know what to say or what to do...

"Kumkum, what are you thinking and I'm not Sumit but I am Mini your sister?"

Kumkum snaps out of her thoughts and hugs Mini saying "I am getting married in three days from now with Sumit for real"

"I'm so happy for you guys" she told Kumkum

"Who is getting married in three days from now?" asked by Mini's mother

Guys... I think i'll stop here! And please do let me know how I did...

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal

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poorvi

@sweetpoorvi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

great part kinjal.....sukk getting married in real...cool

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Priya

@Pearl29

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Kinjal..................superb part dear...............but please do write soon this time..........

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noorya

@...Noorya...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

great part kinjal

but mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai that su wants to marry his new friend😕

i just hope im wrong

but cont soon

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sonia

@miss.sonia

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

ooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

i hate it soo much when some one stops at the

exited momment anyways great part update soon

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Kasamm

@Kasamm

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi
great part kinjal.....sukk getting married in real...cool

G Indeed they are but there are going to be some sort of problems in their life before they get married.

Originally posted by: Pearl29
Kinjal..................superb part dear...............but please do write soon this time..........

Thanks.... I will try to.... write soon as I can.... 😳

Originally posted by: mdtafan
great part kinjal
but mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai that su wants to marry his new friend😕

i just hope im wrong

but cont soon

s Thanks
Maybe Sumit wants to marry his new friend or he still wants to marry his Kumkum (and for that you will have to keep on reading.... to find out more about what is going to happen). 😉
Maybe your right or maybe your wrong "who knows"
I will try to continue soon as I get time...

Originally posted by: miss.sonia
ooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i hate it soo much when some one stops at the

exited momment anyways great part update soon

I'm extremely sorry about that but I needed to stop there or else it would have ruined next part.... Anyways I promise to update soon as I get time until than please do enjoy this part...

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal