Kuch Iss Tara ~ P-4/Pg 8 ~ 10-17-08

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poorvi

@sweetpoorvi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

hiiii kinjal...welcome here....great start dear....waitin for d next part...

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Asm

@Angel-A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

welcom kinjal..n thanx alot for the fanfic

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Eesha Virani

@Tumhari Eesha

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Welcome Kinjal, And please do continue soon

Eesha

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Prachi Shah

@Prachi_Shah

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Welcome to Kumkum's Forum Kinjal, and please continue soon ars you can...

Prachi

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Kasamm

@Kasamm

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Guys... I would love to thank you all from bottom of my heart and also thanks for understandig my problem. And I Promise that I'll post the next part tomorrow

Edited by Kasamm - 16 years ago

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Priya

@Pearl29

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Hay Kinjal.....................waiting 4 the next part..............continue soon......

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Ruhi gandhi

@Ruhihutijufan

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

hey kinjal welcome here and hope u r having fun....hmm yup hu-ju chemistry is like no words for me and great start up keep it up .....and continue soon

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Kasamm

@Kasamm

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Um... I don't know what to say but I am touch by your guys' response I have received from you guys. And I would like to share something with you guys I have created for Sumit and Kumkum.

My Creation For You Guys to use!

And now here is the next part...

Part ~ One

"Think of the devil and the devil is here" said by Mini's Mother

Everyone turns around and look at the person Mini's mother is pointing at...

And it is none other than Sumit with Gaurav...

Both Mini and Kumkum had a smile on their face... mostly Kumkum cause now she didn't have to do anything for Surjan Sight because Sumit is here...

And to make him more pissed she goes running and hugs Sumit even gives him a tiny peck on his cheek...

Surjan Singh who was watching got jealous and sick-out-of-his-mind and leaves from there with tears in his eyes...

(Sumit whispering in Kumkum's ear)

"What was that for... Kumkum?" Sumit asked with a smile on his face

Kumkum: Because I was missing you (said with a smile on her face)

Sumit: In that case... I bought you a gift

Kumkum: A gift!

Sumit nods his head

Kumkum: Where is my gift?

"Look over there" Sumit points at Kumkum's gift

"It's so cute... Sumit I love it" Kumkum told him

Than Sumit asked her "You really like it and if you do than what's his name?"

Kumkum looked at the dog carefully than said "I think i'll name it... Scooby Doo"

Even Scooby licked Kumkum's face and Sumit's face...

Everyone else welcomed them in and told them to freshen up while dinner is getting ready.

Kumkum's Mother was setting up the table while Mini's Mother warmed up the food... Even Scooby was getting hungry by seeing the food.

Surjan Singh sat in his room and looked at himself in the mirror and asked himself "what is wrong with his personalty that KuKi loves someone else?"

Guys... I'm kinda tried right now so here is a mini update and I promise next time it will a long one... for now enjoy this sort one...

Thank You

Apnki Pyari

Kinjal

Edited by Kasamm - 16 years ago

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Annie

@Annie4Juhi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Kasamm

I'm glad that you liked the starting of Kuch Iss Tara and I promise you that you will love this fan-fic.... Also I already feel welcome.... Thanks 😛

I'm glad that you liked my work... Also I'm please that you liked my fan-fic, but please forgive me... I won't be able to update until Thursday night 😭... Sorry about that...

Oh Oh dear it was fantabulous

And dont worry u can update whenevr u want😳

Luv

Annie😉