Ehsaas..Feelings 4 some1 spl.(RN)last udpg164(19/3

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*INTRO*
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Woh soch rahi hai k insano ka sab se bada dushman kaun hai. Haan.. yeh dil hi to hai, hamara sabse bada dushman. Is bachain dil ko hi to le kar sare dard milte hain. Sari paresaniyan aati hai. magar kya is bachain dil ko samjhana itna aasan hai. Agar itna aasan hota to humain dard kyoun sahne padte.
11:30 p.m.....
uski aankhon main neend nahin hai,who gunguna rahi thi,
"Bichara kahan janta hai, khalish hai ye ya khala hai,
Sahar bhar k khusi se yeh dard mera bhala hai,
Jasn yeh raas na aaye, maza to bas gaam main aaya hai.
Maine dil se kaha , dhund lana khusi
Na samajh laya gaam, to yeh gaam hi sahi"
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8:55a.m......
Woh apne room main boxing k practice kar raha tha. Pashine se pura bhiga hua, lekin lagatar apni boxing k practice karta hua. Uska pura concentration apni practice par tha.
Uski well built body bata rahi thi k woh ek aacha boxer hai. Thodi der bad usne apni chehera ghuma kar wall par lagi ghadi k taraf dekha.
OH .....SH*****TT
Kah kar woh apni balcony k taraf bhagta hai. Thodi der woh wahan pe bachain ho kar khada rahta hai. Kuch der bad wahan se kisi ko gujarte hue dekhta hai.
Yeh dekhne k bad uske face par ek haiki si magar pyari si smile aa jata hai. Woh khud se kehta hai "cholo aaj ke lucky charm ka quota to mujhe mil hi gaya."
Tabhi piche se aawaz aati hai-
"VEER.....VEER.....jaldi se niche aaja aur apna breakfast kar le.........."
"COMING........MOM......" woh gungunata hua niche jaata hai.
"Usko ko chupa kar main sab se kahin le chaloo kahin dur,
Ankhon k pyalo se pita rahoon uske chehere ka noor,
Is jamane se chup kar puri kar lun main hasrat ,
Hai tujhe bhi ijazat kar le tu bhi, mahabbat
In dino dil mera mujhse hai keh raha ,tu khwab saja
Tu jii le jara , hai tujhe bhi ijazat kar le tu bhi mohabbt."
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EHSAAS.....feelings for someone special
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1 episode:- pg 2 2 episode:- pg 3
3 episode:- pg 6 4 episode:- pg 8
5 episode:- pg 10 6 episode:- pg 13
7 episode:- pg 15 8 episode:- pg 17
9 episode:- pg 20 10 episode:- pg 23
11 episode:- pg 26 12 episode:- pg 30
13 episode:- pg 34 14 episode:- pg 37
15 episode:- pg 41 16 episode:- pg 46
17 episode:- pg 50 18 episode:- pg 55
19 episode:- pg 61 20 episode:- pg67
21 episode:- pg74 22 episode:- pg79
23 episode:- pg83 24 episode- pg89
25 episode:- pg 96 26 episode:- pg 101
27 episode:- pg 108 28 episode:- pg 115
29th episode:-pg 124 30 episode:-pg 128
31 episode:- pg133 32 episode:-pg138
33 episode:- pg 143 34 episode:-page147
35 episode:- pg152 36 episode:-page 158
37 episode:-pg164
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwww hello cadet! ........ a very warm welcome, hope you enjoy your time in this forum, and now for your fic it sound really interesting .... you should go ahead and continue it.😃

take care

yasmin
Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HII PRIYA THIIS IS PRITI. HOW R U DEAR? NOW ABOUT UR FF, PEHLE TUM THODA SA STORY LINE KA IDEA TOH DO DEAR, KI TUM KIS PAR AUR KYA STORY LIKH RAHI HO, TABHIE MAIN KUCH COMMENT KAR PAUNGI SWEETY, AUR BAAKI SAB BHI, SO PLZZZZZZZ PEHLE TUM THODA SA THEME BATAO APNI STORY KA. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!Awesome!!!!
Boxing practise kar raha tha Veer!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 👏 👏 👏
Aur kisiko bahar jaake dekha jisse woh lucky charm manta hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Great!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Waise yeh lucky charm hai kaun aur ish lucky charm ne lagta hai Veer ka dil bhi chura liya hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HII PRIYA UR STORY IS REALLY NEW AND GOOD I MUST SAY,

AND THE SONG SELECTION IS ALSO REALLY VERY NICE DEAR,
PLZZZZ CONT. SOON
WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
AND GOOD WISHES,
PRITI.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really awesome.........👏

nice way to start.....sounds interesting....


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lipi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritib0

HII PRIYA THIIS IS PRITI. HOW R U DEAR? NOW ABOUT UR FF, PEHLE TUM THODA SA STORY LINE KA IDEA TOH DO DEAR, KI TUM KIS PAR AUR KYA STORY LIKH RAHI HO, TABHIE MAIN KUCH COMMENT KAR PAUNGI SWEETY, AUR BAAKI SAB BHI, SO PLZZZZZZZ PEHLE TUM THODA SA THEME BATAO APNI STORY KA. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.

HI PRITI, U R SUCH VERY PRETTY😊. aur jahan tak kahani k bare
main likhoon to obviously lrl forum hai, to apna hero aur uska love intrest to hoga hi. aab tum guess karo k hero-heroine koun hain?
waise hero k naam se maine ek hint to diya hi hai. thanks & keep
reading.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Boxing practise kar raha tha Veer!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 👏 👏 👏
Aur kisiko bahar jaake dekha jisse woh lucky charm manta hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Great!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Waise yeh lucky charm hai kaun aur ish lucky charm ne lagta hai Veer ka dil bhi chura liya hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
hi dear, ab kahani main veer hai, to uski zara bhi zarur hogi. 😉😉
ab lrl main to ek hi veer tha, aur uski lucky charm ko to tum janti hi
hogi😉😉😉. BATAOON........YA SAMJH GAYI?

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

awwwww hello cadet! ........ a very warm welcome, hope you enjoy your time in this forum, and now for your fic it sound really interesting .... you should go ahead and continue it.😃

take care

yasmin

HI YASHMIN, Thanks 2 cheering me. well yeh fic ek complite
emotional silent love story hai. jaisa k apne raj aur naina k
bich main tha. yeh sab kuch hai, magar
dhishum......dhishum nahin hai.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi!!!
Read your introductory part now....
It seems to be quite interesting.
Please continue.
love
Riya.

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