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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART:-3 **************
9: 00 A.M.
Subah subah Rajveer apne room se nikla. Woh gungunate hue apne room se nikla,
" Tera mujhse tha pahle ka nata koi ,
Yuhin nahin dil lubhata koi,
Jane tu ya jane na .........................
Mane tu ya mane na......................."
Woh aaj apne balcony main khade ho kar Naina ka wait nahin karna chahta tha. Aaj use Naina se milna hai, kisi bhi keemat par ! Waise aaj use naina ko 440 volt ka JHATKA jo dena hai ! Yeh soch kar uske chehre par ek pyara sa smile aa gaya.
Leken samne dekha to k.k ji khade the, aur use bade gaur se sar se lekar pair tak dekh rahe the. Jaise k uska x-ray le rahe ho.
Rajveer to himself- "Baap re! dad ne agar yeh puch liya k kahan ja raha hoon, to kya jawab dunga?"
Usne dil hi dil main kuch socha , aur age badha. K.k ji ne pucha- " Is waqt kahan ja raha hai?"
Rajveer- "Thoda kaam hai dad, 1/2 hours main aa jaunga."
K.k ji ne idhar udhar dekhte hue dhire se kaha- " Kabhi to aapne life ko seriously lo veer ! Abhi tumhare kaam karne k din hain, ghumne phirne k liye to sari zindagi padi hai . Aur.......
Woh aage kuch kah pate , us se pahle Rajveer ne unhe piche k taraf dekhne ka ishara kiya. K.k ji turn kar k dekhte hain k Sudha ji unhe ghur k dekh rahi thi.
Aur phir woh boli- "Shuru ho gayi aapki subha subha k mahabharat. Jab dekho mere bacche k piche pade rahte ho! Aap ko aur koi kaam nahin hota kya?"
K.k ji thoda ghabra gaye, aur kahne lage - " Are nahin... nahin, tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho ! Main to sirf us se yeh puch raha tha k itni subha subha kahan ja rahe ho?"
Sudha ji chid k boli- " Meri bahoo se milne ja raha hai, aap ko koi prob. hai kya?"
Rajveer chaunk gaya. to himself" mom ko kaise pata chala k main Naina se milne ja raha hoon?" Phir usne gaur se aapne mom ko dekha, to use pata chala k yeh baat uski mom ne gusse main aa kar kahi thi. Woh chup chap wahan se nikal gaya.
Naina k ghar k bahar Rajveer kareeb 1/2 hours chakkar kat raha tha.
Naina ghar se nikli nahin hai aabhi tak............................!!!!!
Rajveer tensed hokar khud se kahta hai- "Yeh aabhi tak bahar kyuon nahin nikli yaar.....? Tabiyat to kharab nahin hai......?? Nahin yaar.....kal tak to thik thi......! Ander ja kar dekhon.....? Nahin.....thodi der aur wait karta hoon. Waise bhi jo jhatka main use dene aaya hoon, use akele main dena jyada behetar hai."
Tabhi woh Naina ko ghar se bahar aate hue dekhta hai.
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Naina kafi jaldi main thi kyoun k aaj use late ho gaya hai. Late pahunchegi to woh idiot sinha kafi kuch bakega aur aapni purani kasar nikalne k koshish karega. Tabhi piche se...............................
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NAINA.............
Naina piche mud kar dekhti hai, to Rajveer tha, aapne bike par. As usall apni cute sa smile pass karte hue. Jis smile ko le kar Naina hamesha apne ander ek ajeeb sa ehsaas mahsoos karti hai.
Rajveer usi tarah hanste hue naina se kahta hai- "Office ja rahi ho? lekin 9:00 to kab ke baj chuke hain? Waise tum lucky ho naina, jo tumhe itni jaldi itni acchi job mil gayi. Hum to M.B.A k baad bhi bekaar hain!"
Naina thoda sa smile karte hue kahti hai- " Aap ko nahin pata, yeh job karna bhi kitna mushkil kaam hai! jo karta hai, bas wahi janta hai."
Rajveer k chehre par ek mischievous smile aa gaya, aur woh kahne laga- "Aacha! chalo thik hai, jab main tumhare office aaunga , tab dekh lunga k kitna mushkil hai !"
Naina ko sach main jhatka lagta hai. to herself " Yeh mere office main kyoun aayega?"
Phir woh hairan ho kar Rajveer se puchti hai, "Aap mere office kyoun aayenge?"
Rajveer in same mischievous smile le kar kahta hai -" Mujhe tumhare office main job mila hai. Aur main kal join kar raha hoon."
Naina hairani se Rajveer ko dekh rahi thi. Use is baat ka yakeen nahin aa raha tha. Rajveer Naina ko is tarah hairan dekh kar dil hi dil main kahta hai - "LAGA JOR KA JHATKA"
Phir Rajveer kahne laga - " Kyoun tumhe khusi nahin hui?"
Naina - "Nahin......
Rajveer - "WHAT.......!!!!!!!!!!
Naina thoda sa ghabra kar boli," Nahin......nahin......mera matlab hai k ,yeh to aachi baat hai k aap ko job mil gaya hai. congrats....."
Rajveer- "THANKS"
Phir Naina hairan ho kar puchne lagi- "Lekin interview kab hua? mera matlab hai k mujhe pata tha k interview hone bala tha. Magar kab hua......!!!!!!"
Rajveer- "Tum kaise janti ? Aab hamesha tumhari aankhen computer screen par lagi rahti hain, to tumhe kaise pata lagega? Tumhe khabar bhi hai k aas pas kya ho raha hai tumhare?
.....GOSH..........
Us din kitni baar main tumhare samne se gujra....., Lekin majal hai jo tum ek baar bhi meri taraf dekhti !.... Waise... ek baat ki khusi hai mujhe, k chalo naye office main ek purana dost to hai ! Isliye mera daar thoda kam ho gaya hai, aur khusi thodi jyada badh gayi hai."
Naina- "Yeh mat sochiye k ek hi office main hain, isiliye aap bhi hamare sath baith kar kaam karenge! Aap officer k post par appoint hue honge, aur aap ko alag se cabin milega. Hamare sath aapka koi link nahin hoga."
Rajveer- "To kya hua? Is ka matlab yeh to nahin k main is baat se khus hi na hoon k hum ek hi office main kam karenge!"
Naina ne aapni nazrain jhuka li. Rajveer use kuch der tak dekhta raha.
Phir bola-"OK! main chalta hoon, kahin tumhe office jane main late hogaya to mujhe hi gali dogi! bye........!"
Rajveer itna kehkar smile kar k wahan se chala gaya.
Naina wahin par khadi use jate hue dekh rahi thi.....
IN BACKGROUND:- {FROM NAINA'S HEART}
"Har mulaqat pe mahsoos yahi hota hai (2)
Mujhse kuch teri nazar puch rahi ho jaise,
Koi fariyad tere dil main dabi ho jaise,
Tune aankhon se koi baat kahi ho jaise,
Jagti jagti ek umra kati ho jaise,
jaan baki hai magar , saans ruki ho jaise"
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*end of part 3*
plz friends, comment karna mat bhulna.
Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
it was fabulous.............loved raj.......naina ko vakai mein jatka laga.....

i like his charachter here
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
that was so good really zor ka jhtaka laga
but i was thinking that he is going to propose her
byt anyways nice part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
HII PRIYA KAISE HO DEAR? THE UD WAS AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME....... REALLY MARVELLOUS.................... WONDERFUL.................................... BEAUTIFUL.................................. I ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF IT SWEETY......................... U R REALLY DOING A FANTABULOUS JOB..................... KEEP IT UP.......................... WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!
The song was very nice and very apt that Raj was singing!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
K.K. Raj ke peeche pad gaya par Sudha ne bhi aakar unki bolti bandh kar di!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Raj toh shock ho gaya hoga Sudhaji ki bahu waali baat sunke!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
Bechare Raj ko Naina ke ghar ka chakkar adhe ghante tak katna padhta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 Pyaar mein kya kya nahi karna padhta!!!!😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
Raj ka smile dekhkar Naina ke andar bhi kuch hota hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Raj ko Naina ke office mein job mili hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great news!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yehi woh jhatka tha jo Raj Naina ko dena chahta tha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
Naina ka reaction toh dekhne layak tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Pehle kehti hai nahi phir haa!!!😆 😆 😆 😆
But she is confused about her feelings!!!!😊 😊 😊
The song was very nice and so touching!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

First i would say u are really a sweet heart ;the song u choosen is one of my fav yaar.🤗

I really love the song and emotions in this song.👍🏼

Good accha jhatka tha Naina k liye ki ab Raj aur Naina ek hi office me kaam karenge superb.😛

Update was really cool.👏

Raj kitna shaitaan hai jab us k dad us ko bhasan de rahe the to us ne un ko ishare se bata diya ki us ki mom peeche hi khadi hain.😆
Aur to aur us ki mom ne kaha ki beta bahu se milne jaa raha hai to Raj kaise shock ho gaya tha ki mom ko kaise pata chal gaya.😉
He is sooooooooo naughty.😛
Kaise 16 saal k ladko k jaise Naina k ghar k chakkar laga raha tha, how sweet.😳
update soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
hey simply super sweety,hats of 2 u,

do contn fast,

awesum n wonderful,




Aarthi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
lol jhatka zor se parra 😆 😆 😆 ... so my Raju is going to work in the same office as Naina's woopie!!!!! 😃 that's a great news .... Raj really loves her doesn't he ....

aur yeh KK humesha mere Raj ke piche kyn parre hain ... i guess he'll be happy once he finds out that Raj has a job 😃 and i love his mom, how she shouts at KK and how KK gets scared 😆 😆 😆

sweet update hun 👏 👏

take care 😃

yasmin
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
Hi!!!dear.
Firstly a biiiig sorry for the late reply....
Now theupdate was mind blowing.......
Raj and Naina in the same office!!!wow!!now this is going to be interesting!!!!
Brilliant.
Continue soon dear.
Take care.
Love
Riya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

it was fabulous.............loved raj.......naina ko vakai mein jatka laga.....

i like his charachter here

THANK U SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH.

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