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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

hey just read this fic

it was so good

Really Nandini ke saath galat hua aur us vajah se Naina ka pyaar se nafrat karna sahi bhi hain

par apna hero hain na use pyaar ka matlab samjhane ke liye

plz continue soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

FROM THE WRITER:-

Aaj pahli baar yeh lag raha hai, k ff padhne aur likhne main kya difference hai! Hum log easily koi bhi ff padh lete hain, lekin sach main guys likhna kafi mushkil hota hai.'Sab se pahle ek accha sa plot imagine karo, uske baad sare imagination ko sahi words, sahi expression aur sahi incidents k sath sab k samne lao.' it's really difficult...yaar. After all this is my 1st ff & i'll just try my best. Plz guys comments karna mat bhoolna.

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PART:-2

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Ab Naina k ghar main Shalini hai, woh bhi us se bahat pyar karti hai, uski care karti hai, use samajhti bhi hai.

Aur Naina kabhi kabhi use apne dil k baat karne k koshish bhi karti hai, lekin kar nahi pati. Kabhi kabhi Naina Shalini se irritate bhi ho jati hai, use lagta hai k kahin Shalini Naina k life main Nandini k jagah lene k koshish to nahin kar rahi hai na!

Phir woh Shalini k pyar ko samajhne k koshish karti hai. Jo Naina k liye Shalini k dil main hai. Phir Naina sochti hai k woh kyoun Shalini se pyar kare..... kahin woh bhi use chod kar chali gayi toh......?

Naina ko is ghar main sirf Alekh se daar lagta hai. Kyoun k Naina har baat aapne dil k aasani se sab se chupa leti hai, lekin Alekh se nahin..

Pata nahin kaise use sab pata chal jata hai! Uski nazar se Naina kuch nahin chupa pati.Nandu di k death k baad Alekh badal gaya tha, chup chap rahne laga tha, lekin..... jab Deepak bhaiya ghar chod kar chale gaye,to Alekh aur bhi jyada change ho gaya tha. Apna jyada time ghar se bahar hi bitata hai. Aur maa baba bhi usse kuch nahin kahte.

IN THE BACKGROUND-

"zindagi tere gaam ne hamain rishte naye samjhaye.

mile jo hamain dhup main mile chaon k thande saye,

la... la.... la....la...la....la....la.....la.....la....la.....la......

tujh se naraz nahin zindagi , hairan hoon main

hairan hoon main.......

tere masoom sawalon se pareshan hoo main

pareshan hoon main"

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NEXT DAY......... AT 9:30A.M

Naina office k liye ghar se nikli. Aaj use thoda late ho gaya hai. Agar time

par nahin pahunchi to SINHA KA BACCHA bahat kuch kahega.

Naina yahi sochte hue ghar se nikli... to... piche se kisi ne us ka naam le kar pukara. Naina mud kar dekha to RAJVEER tha apne bike par.

Woh Naina k hi society main rahta hai, apne parents k sath.

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RAJVEER SINGH-

KRISHN KANT SINGH ka ek lauta beta. K.K Singh ek international company k C.E.O hain.Kafi rich family hai unki. Aur bas 5yrs hue hai unhe is society main aaye hue. Aur naina k ghar se thode hi dur par unka bunglow hai.

Rich family hai lekin kafi acche aur mixing nature k log hain. Rajveer k ghar main sirf teen log hain.Krishn kant singh( his dad), Sudha singh (his mom) aur khud Rajveer.

Bachpan se hi woh boarding school main raha. Uske baad usne Delhi main apna B.com kiya. Phir us k bad uske dad ne CANADA bhej diya M.B.A karne k liye. Jab k woh wahan pe nahin jana chahta tha.

Lekin...apne parents k khusi k liye woh gaya CANADA M.B.A. karne.Lekin M.B.A karne k baad woh jald wapas bhi aagaya.Jab k use Canada main hi acche jobs ke offer mil rahe the,lekin woh wapas aa gaya. Rajveer aapna dil jo chod k gaya tha INDIA main! To kitne din aapne dil se dur rahta woh?

Uske father ne kaha bhi k- "Canada main tumhe itne acche acche jobs k offers mil rahe the, wahin par job kyoun nahin kiya?"

Rajveer thoda udas ho gaya. uski mom cofee bana rahi thi.

Rajveer unke pass jaa kar kahne laga- "mom! na to mera koi bhai hai aur na hi bahen. To main is umra main aap logon ko aakela chod kar wahan pe kaise rah sakta tha? Bachpan se hi aap dono se dur raha hoon mom!... lekin aab aur nahin. tumhe pata hai main aap dono ko kitna miss karta tha!Main to tumhare liye aaya hoon mom lekin dad samajhte hi nahin!" Ek hi saans main itna keh kar woh udhas ho kar chup ho gaya.

(Rajveer ek emotional drama ka situation creat karna chahta tha. Taki uske dad use dubara Canada jane ko na kah paye. Jab k India wapas aane k wajah us k liye kuch aur hi tha.)

Sudha ji bhi chid gayi. Aur gusse main kahne lagi,- "Mere bachhe ko bachpan se hi aapne mujh se dur rakha. Aab jab woh khud hamare sath rahna chahta hai, tab bhi aap use phir se dur bhejna chahte ho! Dekho ji! kehdeti hoon, aab Veer kahin nahin jayega, yahin rahega mere pas.Aur agar abroad main rupaye kamane ka itna hi shauk hai, to aap kyoun nahin jate Canada? Aur waise bhi aap ko to experience bhi hai na!"

K.K ji hairani se aapne wife ko dekh rahe the. Unhone kabhi Sudha ji ko itne gusse main nahin dekha. unhe to samajh main hi nahin aa raha tha k woh kya kahen?

Rajveer chup chap wahan se uth kar aapne kamre main chala gaya.Sudha ji ne phir kaha- "Dekha! dukhi kar diya na mere bacche ko aapne?"

Sudha ji naraz ho kar K.K ji se baat kar rahi thi. Rajveer aapne room main aaya aur door lock karne k baad, apna pet pakad kar jor jor se hanshe laga.🤣. Aaj pahli bar usne apne parents ke bich jhagda karbaya tha isiliye.Use pata tha jab

uski mom gusse main hoti hain, uske dad k bolti band ho jati hai. use apne dad ka woh hairan, pareshan bala chehera yaad aa raha tha,aur use hansi bhi bahat aa rahi thi.

Lekin woh khus tha, kyoun k aab use us k pyar se koi dur nahin kar sakta tha.Kyoun k kahte hai na sacche dil ki mangi hui dua puri hoti hai...........

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PLZZZZZZZ COMMENT KARNA MAT BHULA, GUYS!

Edited by srojaleen - 17 years ago

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

maza aa gaya....................rajveers charachter skecth was tooo good.......

very naughty indeed......

here aalekh seems to b much more interesting.....

updt soon

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362035

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

HIIIIIIII PRIYA MY SWEETY, HOW R U? TUM BILKUL SAHI KEH RAHI HO SWEETY, AB TUM MUJHE BHI SAMAJH SAKTI HO.......... KI EK FF LIKHNE KE LIYE KITNA SOCHNA PADTA HAI DEAR........ AUR MAIN TOH DO-DO LIKH RAHI HOON................ IMAGINATION KE GHODE KAHAN-KAHAN TAK DAUDANE PADTE HAIN.........YEH SIRF HUM WRITERS HI SAMAJH SAKTE HAIN. ANYWAYS NOW ABOUT UR UD................ IT WAS JUST AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME DEAR................. RAJ NAD AALEKH'S CAHARACTER, ARE REALLY VERY NICELY PORTRAYED...................... HATS OFF TO U SWEETY................. FOR SUCH A GOOD FF........................ AB TUM MUJHE BHI APNA FAN BANA LO OK.................... UD SOON.................... WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Bechari Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Shalini ko Nandini ki jagah de nahi sakti!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Uske pyaar ko samajne ki koshish toh karti hai magar issi darr mein hai ke kahi Nandini ki tarah woh bhi usse chhodke naa chali jaye!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Aalekh se Naina kuch nahi chupa paati!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aalekh hai hi aisa ke usse sab pata chal jata hai!!!!😊 😊 😊

Bechara!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭Woh bhi kitna badal gaya Nandini ki death aur Deepak ke ghar chhodke jaane ke baad!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The song was very nice and very apt!!!!!😊 😊 😊

Naina late ho gayi aur Raj ne usse peeche se bike par se pukara!!!😛 😛 😛 😛I hope Naina nakre naa kare aur uski bike pe chad jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I liked Raj's character the way you described it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

He is so naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉Apni mom dad ka jhagda karwa diya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Toh Raj apna dil India mein hi chhod ke gaya tha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛Naina ke paas chhodha tha kya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

KK ki bhi bolti bandh ho jaati hai jab Raj ki mom unse naraz ho jaati hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I hope Raj ki dil ki dua bhi puri ho jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

Vow dear amazing mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap itna accha likh sakti hain.😊

sorry dear mujhe nahi pata tha ki IF me ek aur superb fic start hua hai. so ab mai kar rahi hoon reply naraj mat hona.😲

Superb and excellent too.👏

Rajveer ho, Naina ho, Alekh ho, Nandini ho ,Shalini ho chahe aur koi tum ne itne acche se sab ko describe kiya hai ki absolutely perfect fic.⭐️

I really like ur writing skills .

update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 17 years ago

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: prerna1
hey just read this fic
it was so good

Really Nandini ke saath galat hua aur us vajah se Naina ka pyaar se nafrat karna sahi bhi hain

par apna hero hain na use pyaar ka matlab samjhane ke liye

plz continue soon

HI PRERNA, THANK FOR THE COMMENT DEAR. NANDINI K LIFE MAIN JO HUA, USE LE KAR NAINA PHILHAL JO BHI SOCH RAHI HAI,USE SIRF RAJVEER HI HANDLE KAR SAKTA HAI.... HAINA!!!!!!!😉

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
maza aa gaya....................rajveers charachter skecth was tooo good.......

very naughty indeed......

here aalekh seems to b much more interesting.....

updt soon

TUMHE MAZA AAYA...... YEH JAN KAR AACHA LAGA. LEKIN RAJVEER KA CHARACHTER NAUGHTY NAHIN HAI!!!!!! BALKI BAHAT NAUGHTY HAI. AAGE AAGE DEKHO WOH KYA KYA GUL KHILATA HAI.😛

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Priya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: pritib0
HIIIIIIII PRIYA MY SWEETY, HOW R U? TUM BILKUL SAHI KEH RAHI HO SWEETY, AB TUM MUJHE BHI SAMAJH SAKTI HO.......... KI EK FF LIKHNE KE LIYE KITNA SOCHNA PADTA HAI DEAR........ AUR MAIN TOH DO-DO LIKH RAHI HOON................ IMAGINATION KE GHODE KAHAN-KAHAN TAK DAUDANE PADTE HAIN.........YEH SIRF HUM WRITERS HI SAMAJH SAKTE HAIN. ANYWAYS NOW ABOUT UR UD................ IT WAS JUST AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME DEAR................. RAJ NAD AALEKH'S CAHARACTER, ARE REALLY VERY NICELY PORTRAYED...................... HATS OFF TO U SWEETY................. FOR SUCH A GOOD FF........................ AB TUM MUJHE BHI APNA FAN BANA LO OK.................... UD SOON.................... WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.

HIIIIIIIII PRITI! THANKS FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT DEAR. MERI TO YAHAN PAR EK HI FF MAIN HALAT PATLI HO RAHI HAI, AUR TUM TO DUBBLE UNITS MAIN KAAM KAR RAHI HO!!!!!!!!!!!. LAGEY RAHO.........

BEST WISHES------- Priya

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 17 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!
THANK U DEAR.

Bechari Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Shalini ko Nandini ki jagah de nahi sakti!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Uske pyaar ko samajne ki koshish toh karti hai magar issi darr mein hai ke kahi Nandini ki tarah woh bhi usse chhodke naa chali jaye!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Aalekh se Naina kuch nahi chupa paati!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aalekh hai hi aisa ke usse sab pata chal jata hai!!!!😊 😊 WAISE ALEKH KA CHARACHTER AAGE CHAL K AUR BHI CHAMKNE BALA HAI....

Bechara!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭Woh bhi kitna badal gaya Nandini ki death aur Deepak ke ghar chhodke jaane ke baad!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔HAAN... BUT DON'T WORRY USKA ILAAZ AAGE HOGA!😉😉😉

The song was very nice and very apt!!!!!😊 😊 😊THANKS...........

Naina late ho gayi aur Raj ne usse peeche se bike par se pukara!!!😛 😛 😛 😛I hope Naina nakre naa kare aur uski bike pe chad jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊NAINA TO TABHI RAJ K BIKE PAR BAITHEGI NA... JAB RAJ USE LIFT DENE K BAAT KAREGA! WAISE RAJ NAINA KO EK SHOCK DENE AAYA HAI.... IS SE TUMHE BHI JHATKA LAGEGA, IS K GUARANTEE MAIN LETI HOON.

I liked Raj's character the way you described it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

He is so naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉Apni mom dad ka jhagda karwa diya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆SACH KAHOON..... YEH IDEA MUJHE APNE GHAR SE MILA HAI😆

Toh Raj apna dil India mein hi chhod ke gaya tha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛Naina ke paas chhodha tha kya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳HAAN.... EK CHOTA SA INCIDENT JO RAJ K DUNIYA BADAL DI.

KK ki bhi bolti bandh ho jaati hai jab Raj ki mom unse naraz ho jaati hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆HAAN..... MAIN BHI YAHI SOCHTI HOON K HAR WOH AADMI JO AAPNE WIFE SE JYADA PYAR KARTA HAI, USKI JYADATAR JUBAN BAND HI RAHTI HAI😆

I hope Raj ki dil ki dua bhi puri ho jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 HOGI DEAR.... JAROOR HOGI. LEKIN USKE LIYE USE ABHI BAHAT PAPAD BELENE HAI. AUR WAISE MAIN HOON NA........UNHE MILANE K LIYE.