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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyyy hiiiiiiii all

I was just thinking of starting a new fanfick related bv and wanted to know whether its a good idea.

sorry if i shouldn't have sent this question here but i thought it a best place to know the interest and comments from bv fans themselves.
plz tell me shud i start this ff or not.
it will have:
anandi and jagdish ofcourse
jagu and anandi's parents
dadisa
tauji
and some new ones(let 'em be secret)
I'll be eagerly waiting for bv fans' replies
-JiNiShA
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey good idea to start an ff here itself😛 you should go ahead with it😳😛 would be waiting to read:):P
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u for ur response aditi. Will Definitely start soon. But is it allaowed to start a ff here.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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waiting eagerly for bv's 1st ff......................
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Posted: 17 years ago
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we have fics in loads of sections its all allowed so we can have it here as well you can also post the same fic the fan fiction section.you can have it in both the places. so would be waiting for you to start up with it:P
well what happened in dmg section if that was what makes you ask if its allowed or not was that there were toooo many fics and what happened was the discussions thread were not getting much of response since they found lagging behing 5th or 6th pgs and the fics tolling up so there all the fics were transfered in fan-fiction section.so there the case was all different.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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why aren't rest of the bv fans replying are they not interested.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shona80

why aren't rest of the bv fans replying are they not interested.

all r interested but i thnk they r lazy to reply😆😆😆 ....even i was lazy to post replies..but now i m tryin to b'com an active member...u start writing......looking forward to read ur ff😊😊
Edited by sparkling.star - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyyyy Friends nice to hear from ya
kkkk i'll start ma ff here in this topic itself.
But before starting i want or shud i say i need to tell all that i m writing a ff for a first time so donno whether u'll like it or not. And yes i wud like to apologize for the mistakes i m gonna made in advance.
Here we go..
BaLiKa VaDhU.... a child bride
(the story is starting after anandi's entry in jaggu's house and after all the rasams)
All the rasams are over and anandi, and sumitra are sitting together, trying to make anandi eat something. When anandi fired so many questions in one go.😲😲😲
Anandi(in a very cute and innocent voice): Sasuma.. main aapse kuch poochun
Sumitra(with all her motherly affection): Haa beta poocho kya poochna chahti ho.
(Anandi then started her chain of questions)
Anandi(totally confused at what all is going on after her gauna😕): Sasuma rasamein kyun hoti hain? Hamesha ladki ko hi kyun saasre jaane hota hai? Dadisa kabhi bhi jagdishya ki galti kyun nhi nikaalti? unhe kya sirf daatna hi aata hai? Aur mujhe itne saare tofe(presents) kyun mile hain? Mera toh aaj janmdinn bhi nhi hai. Mujhe hi kyun apne saasre aana pada maa- bapu ko chod ke jagdishya kyun nhi mere maayke aaya?..............
Sumitra(smiles at hearing sooo many questions in one go from anandi):bass bass bass... kitne sawaal poochti ho tum. .....(trying to escape from anandi's questions) Thik hai hum tumhare saare sawaalon ka jawaab denge par abhi toh tumhe neend aa rahi hogi na..
Anandi(🥱sleepy indeed🥱): haa mujhe neend aa rahi hai
And she slept on her sasuma's laps. And Sumitra with a great motherly love saw her sleeping for a long time and then with gentle hands made her sleep comfortably on bed. And slept beside her.
MORNING
It's morning now Anandi's very first day in her saasra. And she was comfortably sleeping on her bed with nothing to worry about types and smiling in her sleep. She was actually dreaming herself in her maayka playing with dolls and friends.
Everyone, Hitler of the House Dadisa, Bhairav(jaggus pa), Tauji, Jaggu, Sugna and Sumitra serving them all. Seeing that Annandi was not yet on the table she asked Sumitra.
Dadisa: Bindani, woh moyi anandi nahi dikh rahi abhi tak so rahi hai kya maharani.
Sumitra: Woh Maasa Anandi bahut thak gayi thi kal toh isliye...
Dadisa: Toh kya maharani soti hi rahegi bhagwaan jaane kya sanskaar lekar aayi hai. Hum sab bhi toh uthe haina.
Sumitra: Main abhi usse jakar uthati hun.(Sumitra moved to go)
Dadisa: Acha agar tu hi jaaygi uthane toh khaana kaun parosega ruk main hi uthati hun us maharani ji ko.
ANANDI'S ROOM
Anandi was having nice time in her dreams just when her sleep was broken when she dreamt of her biddai. Then she remembered that she is in her saasra and she have to get ready. Then wasting no time she rushed towards the washroom but there was no water and she thought of taking it from the adjoined room. She took the bucket and went to fetch water.
Dadisa went to wake Anandi. Just when she entered Anandi's room she was too shocked to see that anandi was not in her bed. Then she was like ohhh god yeh kaha gayi kal maayke kehne keh rahi thi, bhaag toh nhi gyi chhori.
And just then entered Anandi on her back. and as bucket was heavy that little gal was holding it low her eyes closed and then she collided with dadisa and she was all wet. Then Dadisa gave Anandi how dare u kinda looks and li'l gal was looking too scared. she was looking at her with those innocent scared eyes. But evil dadisa holded her with her hands and threw her on floor and asked her to clear ground and punished her to clear whole gal alone and said that shez not gonna have any food today.
Poor gal wept wept and wept and did what was said....
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Next Part: Anandi went out to play, returns late.
Well.. That was all for today. Please please give ur worthy comments and tell me should i continue. Did u like it? Waiting eagaerly for your replies.
-JiNiShA
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Posted: 17 years ago
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excellent work 👏👏 loved the way u r writin with all dat rajasthani accent in between...please continue...and yes too loved the nick name for dadi sa HITLER 😆😆...would like to read on further
Edited by sparkling.star - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkling.star

excellent work 👏👏 loved the way u r writin with all dat rajasthani accent in between...please continue...and yes too loved the nick name for dadi sa HITLER 😆😆...would like to read on further

Well I tried my best and thnk god u liked it

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