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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
wow good start.👏loved the way you described everything😳 ahhh poor anandi have to face dadi sa!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
You get these 👏

Its mind-blowing and please do continue soon or later

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Posted: 17 years ago
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too good 👏

Look forward to read the next...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kkk here comes the next epi. of ma ff

BALIKA VADHU....a child bride

Poor Anandi had to do all the housework. She didn't even got anything to eat that day. Sumitra also was forbidden to meet her.

She while cleaning floor was remembering all before her marriage. How she used to play, read books, she didn't even had to do any work. She remembered playing with her friends Phuli, Kisna, Rashi and all her other friends. And she was and all time.

After doing this she went to do dishes. No one was there. So she just started her work when Jaggu came in, looking back at every step to ensure dadisa wasn't there. He was a little scared. He came and stand on her side.

Jaggu(in a very slow pitch, to be audible only to Anandi): Eeee Bandariya

Anandi(in a tired tone): Kya hai?

Jaggu(taking a potli out of her kurta): tune subah se kuch nhi khaaya hai na le main tere liye kachoriya laya hun (looked at door to ensure no one is coming) jaldi se kha le dadisa ne dekha toh maar padegi.

Anandi(very innocently): Na baba na dadisa ko pata chla toh hum dono ko maar padegi. Main nhi kha rahi.

Jaggu: Dekh main tera beend hun na.

Anandi: Haa hai toh.

Jaggu: toh agar tune apne beend ki baat nhi maani toh bhagwaan paap chadayega isliye tu jaldi se kha le.

Anandi: Tune toh mujhe sankat main daal diya re . Khaya toh maar padegi , nhi khaya toh paap chadega. Thik hai la de main khaati hun par tu dadisa ko mat batana.

Jaggu(like a loving friend and hubby)(puts his hand on her shoulder): tu chinta mat karr dadisa ko kya kissi ko nhi bataunga. Abb jaldi se kha le.

And both of them sat there on ground in a typical rajasthani style. Jaggu served Anandi. And sat there and kept on staring her till she finished. Then she hurriedly went on in cleaning her dishes. And jaggu went out.

After that she went in her room (which she shared with her sasuma) to relax herself. Then in the night her sasuma came in and she had her dinner).

And the day passed by and anandi had to suffer only half of the punishment.

NEXT DAY

Anandi was carefull enough to get up and bath early the next day. She started her day with prayers and went to her dear motherly sasumato help her in the kitchen. There she was told to help jaggu in packing his bags and all the help he needed. she went there.

JAGGIYA'S ROOM

She went in jaggu's room and quietly stood at the back to see his books, after all she loved them. Then he saw and called her for help.

Jaggu: Waha ke khadi thi. Chal madat kar meri.

Anandi(very innocently): Kya karu?

Jaggu: Mera basta laga

(Anandi went on to do the same moving her hands over his books as if they are the only thing she wanted)

Jaggu: Tujhe kitaabein bahut pasand hain na.

Anandi: Nahi... haa

Jaggu: thik hai tu meri kitaabein pad sakti hai par haa kissi ko bataiyo mat.

Anandi(gets veryyy happy): tu toh bahut acha hai re. thik hai main kissi ko na kahungi.

Then he went away to his school. No sooner that he went jaggu's massiya came and took anandi with her. At massiya's house anandi enjoyed a lot with there children. And after some time came a very special person, Aayan. Anandi's very good friend. With whom she had shared every secret of hers and who had to move here just half year before Anandi's marriage. And then they talked a lot with each other. About there previous days, school and village. And then he took her out to play. They were soo bussy in playing that they didn't noticed time and it was already 8:00 very late for a new bride or a gal to be out.

Massiya

Massiya entered jaggu's house shouting....

Massiya: Sumi sumi gajab ho gya teri bahu kalmuhi pta nhi kha gyi.😭

Sumitra: kya matlab kha gyi jiji tere saath hi toh thi.

Massiya: Ab nhi hai issi baat ki toh mujhe fikr ho rhi hai, kalmuhi pta nhi kha apna moh kala kar rahi hogi.

Sumitra: Jiji(in a loud voice) Anandi aisi nhi hai.

Massiya: Woh dikh rha hai laado. Ki teri bindani kesi hai.

Just then Anandi reached the main gate of the house all running and there she met someone and guesss who was this someone none other than jaggu. He was shocked to see her out soo late.

Jaggu: Tu itni derr tak bahar kya kar rahi thi.

Anandi: woh.... main...ab main kya karun dadisa to mujhe bahut dategi

Jaggu: thik hai tu chal aur kahyo tu mere saath thi and he cut his hand and wrapped it with anandi's dupatta(very cleven on his side👏👏)

Anandi: yeh kya kiya tune

Jaggu: tu bas chup rahiyo.

And they entered the house. Everyone was shocked to see Anandi with jaggu. And then horrified Sumitra came and nearly shouted at anandi and asked where she was.

And then jaggu said that she was with him nursing his wounds. And then all attention went on to him and Anandi was simply saved.

Then after everyone went on to there room and Anandi thanked jaggu.

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The end for now. looking forward to have your replies.

-JiNiShA

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Posted: 17 years ago
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verrrrrrry sweet ...jagdhish and anandi (JaAn)...make a reallly good couple jaggya is so sweet..u hv wriiten it very well shona...please continue 👏

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