FF: Kismat Konnection: Ch 6 -Pg 16:Read!!

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

Hello,

I am sooo sorry for discontinuing my other FFs, but I can't seem to find the links to my FFs😭 but this time, I am storing this link in the Mansion under FFs.

Note: Please NO PMs about me continuing or not, I know I am really bad at leaving everyone stranded but here are a few reasons why:

1. Not many comments

2. I get busy...I have a life too

3. I don't have any ideas to take it forward...

NO MORE PMs please about continuing please.

My this FF is titled: Kismat Konnection

This story is a romantic comedy but may include horror, emotional scenes aswell. Just as it's title goes, this is about how Prem and Heer meet unknownly and from then on how Premeer fall in love and their life after marriage.

The story starts of with

Running after girls...

and

Running from marriage...

What happens when they run into each other?

This is what we call Kismat Konnection!

Please take your time and watch this video mix by KIMMU not me. All credit goes to her!!👏👏

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yx4RsQqE9OU[/YOUTUBE]

Characters -

Prem Juneja -

Every girl's dream. He is cool, cute, sweet, handsome...anything that you can describe. He lives life on his own wishes, but when it comes to family, he is the 1st one to stand up for them. Prem doesn't like falling in love due to something that happened with him 1 year ago. Prem is an out and out flirt who doesn't care about any girl's feelings but life takes a turn when he meets Heer, and falls in love with her...true love.

Heer Mann -

She is blunt, cute, and fast. She isn't one of those girls who will stay quite in the hardest times, she will say what she feels like. She loves to take up new challenges and thats one of the main reasons why she decides to run away from home...doesn't want to get married.

Other characters are the same as the show, except Heer's mom and dad are alive, and all of them live in Mumbai...while Heer lives in Shimla.

Updates -

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6

Edited by *Shifali* - 16 years ago

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Howlarious

@Howlarious

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

Okay me first..grr yeahh I know about your other FFs..me not gona say anything abt them 😆😆..ish okayy..😃😃 hehe and oyee you could have asked me for ideas 🤔

Hmm well forget Prem's characterization😆😆 not too fussedd 🥱🥱

This Heer is quite good..except for the running away part 😆

Update soon gadheri..Me wanna read part 1 😃

Edited by *VaVaVoom14* - 17 years ago

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Megha

@ashah2004

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

Awww....Finallly heer speaks up for herselff....yess i wantt dis character...nd ofoursee our premm....samee cute,handsumm....nd ilooovehimm😳

Awsumm start Shifali di,lukinn forwardd to diss👏

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks for the comments, will reply to them induvisually later.

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago

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Salma

@salma_786786

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

okay i ain't gna mention your other FF... especially the shaadi one that was going sooo well....

Kismat Konnection... loveeee the title... everything sounds kool and wooowww Heer speaks in this one... nice... we definitely need some words from her that is not a lecture... why she run away???? will stay tune to find out.....

All the best with this one!!!!

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

Kismat Konnection?!?! As in KK??? Awww were you inspired my my JANNU!!!!!!!!!!! tehe☺️

Anyway, moving on, greaat concept....seems interesting.....can't wait to read it......that's one more FF.....ufffff.....so many talented writers!!! ohhhh what happened with prem? one yr ago??? i wanna now.....! Ahh well.....can't wait!!!

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Kiran

@kimmu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

OMG! Finally I can read one of your FF's! Hehe like I've been hearing about them everywhere but never ever read one... So now i can... yipeee..

Coming to the character sketch.. Prem's a flirt.. and Heer bold.. 😲 This is going to be fun to read! Can't wait to read the first part now..

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

Part 1 - Run Heer run!!

Heer ran as fast as she could, a backpack cliped to her shoulder. Heer ran as fast as she could in her pencil heels and her heavy wedding outfit. Her heart skipped a beat everytime she ran. She didn't have time to back away now, she had made the 1st move and now it was too late. Her wedding was tommorrow, and if she didn't want to get married right now, not her fault. She was not going to get married to that jerk, NEVER. It was 1pm at night and the coach from Shimla to Mumbai left in 10 minutes. She had to catch that coach for she would be stuck here, and getting married to that jerk...Manmeet. The sad part about Heer running away at 1 past midnight was that her dumbo sister could not arrange anything before 12am. Great, just great. Running away from home, 1 past midnight and that too, wearing heels and a wedding outfit. Superb! Mindblowing...actually it should be MINDBLASTING!😡🥱

Heer was never used to watching Indian soap operas, and as she was wearing her wedding outfit she questioned herself "I am only wearing this thing for 1 day, god knows how those actress whatever can carry wearing out heavy embroided sarees for 29 whole days!!" Heer ran faster and faster and her heart skipped beat after beat...and she FINALLY made it! The coach was standing right there, infront of her. YAY Heer. Heer started to slow down to catch her breath. She was tired. Heer sat on the nearest bench she could find and dosed off just after a second she sat there. Next thing Heer knew was that the coach was moving away, slowly and slowly while catching speed. Heer started to shout..."Rokoooo...wait!" "Damn!" "Waitttt!" Heer ran as fast as she could to catch the coach, Heer was just near the coach when a guy saw her running. The guy kept staring at Heer, she looked beautiful but what got him wondering was that she was wearing a wedding outfit looking something like this:

The guy was hanging onto the coach not letting the doors to close, Heer ran as fast as she could. The guy, Prem took his hands out for Heer to hold but Heer having a big ego of proving herself to catch the coach herself didn't pay any heed to Prem's hand and kept strugling to catch it herself.

P: Need a hand?

H: Just shut up and mind your own business
P: But this is my business to help a poor girl.

H: Hey mister, don't try to act over smart, I don't need your help.

P: This is the last offer, hold my hand.

H: No thank you.

Heer kept running and strugling to get a hold of the coach. Prem kept waiting for Heer to hold his hand but Heer kept running, avoiding Prem's helping hand. And to Prem's suprise, Heer got onto the coach without his help. She held onto the coach bars, and walked into the coach. Heer turned around to see Prem shocked and mouth open. Heer didn't say a word and started walking to find every seat filled with a passenger except the window seat which had a black bag, almost the same as Heer's laying beside that window seat. Heer ignored that bag and sat near the window.

Just than Prem came to that aisle, picked up the backpack beside Heer and sat on that seat. Heer tried to ignore Prem but was it really that easy?

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago

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guju_angel

@guju_angel

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

oh my daiz.. this is d best 13th ov a month ov my life u kno... (13 is my EXTREMELY unlucky number.. n the whole day todai went gud) lol.. hmmm.. interesting ff u goht ere.. une ov d things tht made me appie tudai lol.. on this '13th' lol.. hahaha.. do update soon shifali!.. lol.. hmmm.. even i have heard ov ur ff's being knocked off tu no wer land too lol.. so i hope this one doesn't go like tht.. heheheh.. do tell me apx wen u will do each update so i kno wen tu look for it lol =P .. oh btw.. wer u in d dmg forum b4??.. or was it sum otha shifali tht did an ff n disapeared?? =S

x. Radhika.

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: guju_angel
oh my daiz.. this is d best 13th ov a month ov my life u kno... (13 is my EXTREMELY unlucky number.. n the whole day todai went gud) lol.. hmmm.. interesting ff u goht ere.. une ov d things tht made me appie tudai lol.. on this '13th' lol.. hahaha.. do update soon shifali!.. lol.. hmmm.. even i have heard ov ur ff's being knocked off tu no wer land too lol.. so i hope this one doesn't go like tht.. heheheh.. do tell me apx wen u will do each update so i kno wen tu look for it lol =P .. oh btw.. wer u in d dmg forum b4??.. or was it sum otha shifali tht did an ff n disapeared?? =S

x. Radhika.

Hehe, I myself have no idea Radz😆😆😆Maybe some random day😆😆and ahem...can we not get into DMG😳😆