SS - Ankheen Part 3...4/26/09

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I doubt i'll ever get to finish my last FF Kyun ki... https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/883635/ff-kyon-ki-pt-10-pg-7-update-5-2

Here is a short story i was working on for June 19th ff contest but I never entered the contest. Sorry if the hindi is hard to understand...if any1 need translation please let me know. And please do coment...i don't want to beg for input.

Thanks,
Rose


Here is part 1 of Ankheen.


"woh ullu ka patha..kya samja ta hai apne apko" Bani yelled as she slammed he files on to her desk.

"kya huwa ms. jr vp...uncle nai datdiya" said her best friend/coworker Sonam who sat in the ajacent office. Bani looked up from her desk to see Sonam looking at her as she took the empty cair in front of her.

"kuch nahi Sonam use budha phirse shooru hogaya"

"tumhne mere uncle ko phirese budha kaha"

"nahi na Mujhe kya Phuskar ki dat kahni hai kai mein unke papa ko budha bulawungi" Bani explained.

Sonam's face fell as soon as she heard Bani mentioned Phuskar's name.

'Why is it so hard for Bani to forget that Pushkar Sharma, Sonam thought. Sonam's cousin is never coming back.

Pushkar Sharma, Bani Dixit and her Sonam Chopra had been friends since their pre-school day. They had done everything together. Even after they graduated from High school they attended the same University in the same field. Somewhere down the line Bani and Pushkar's love had flurished. Bani had wanted Pushar to ask her parents for her hand as soon as they had graduated but Pushar had said one last vacation before he joined Mr. Sharma at Sharma industries. "Kuch naam kamalu, Bani. mein sirf Mr. Sharma kai beta kai naamse tumhare parents kai pass nahi jana chahata tuhara haat mangne."

Little did any of them know that Pushkar's trip to London would have been his last. He died in a seven car pile up when a big rig truck had over turned. Sonam had been the only surviour out of the five people in the car Pushkar was driving. That was two years ago. Since that Bani hadn't come to terms with Pushkar's death. She had joined Sharma Industry with hope that she could help Mr. Sharma hold up fort until Pushkar returns.

"So Kaunsa Ullu ka pathe ki Baat karrahi ho tum, Bani?" she asked getting out the past.

"Wo stupid sa budha..Mr Jai. He is the head of the callaboration commetiee. Na jane WGI nai kya ladoo use kiladiya hai"

"So the whole collaboration has gotten you upset. when is it stated for"

"June 19" Bani whishpered

*ring ring* Inturupeted the phone on Bani's desk.

"You answer that mein tumse baad mein baat karti hoon" Sonam spoke as she quickly exited Bani's office closing the door behind.

Bani looked down at the blinking LCD screen of her desk phone and picked it up saying " Haan Maa, kya huwa abh?"

"Beta, when r u coming home?"

"Maa it's only 2pm. You know mein 5 baje yahase nikalti hoon aur mujhe ghar ane mein 6 baje jate hai"

"I know beta but you know Pia use nai ek nayi musibaat more liye hai...uski pregnancy confirm huvi hai...aur vo ladke kai parents ahrehe hai 7 baje... shaadi ki baat karnai kai liye...tum ghar jaldi ajana..rakti hoon"

Not again this Pia. She is three years younger then me and look at her.

***

It was close to 6 when she gotten home. She went up to Pia's room. "so maharaniji...college iske liye jate hai."

"Di you think maa-baba nai kam sunayahai jo apbi suru hogayi hai"

"ok baba tumhai nahi tang karoogi...let me get ready. looks like you are all ready."

Promptly at 7 The ladkewale had come. The ladka it's self for was Ranveer Bali, Pia Senior in college. Along with him were his parents Aditya Bali and Jigyasha Bali. They had aslo brought Ranveer Paternal grandmother: Dadi, Jigyasha's Brother and Maternal Aunt, Masi. Kiran Dixit had opened the door and had showed them to the living room where Nishikant Dixit was already present.

He ushered everyone to their seat and with his hands joined together he appolized "Mujhe bahot sarmindagi mehso horahi hai kai humhai asse milna par rahah hai"

"Is mein sarminda hona ki koyi baat nahi" said Jigyasha's brother who was trying to make the whole situation a little lighter.

Part 2 Pg 2

Part 3 pg 3
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start!!
I would love to read the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing part
sounds really intresting
pia and ranveer are defiantly fast
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great beginning!!! can't wait for more!!! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ........nice start...........waiting for next part
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its really gd plz continue
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that was an awesome start.
cant wait to read more

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2
Really sorry for the delay her eis the next part.

'Ladka ladki nai to humhari izzat kya kuch bi kayal nahi kiya, magar humko to issi Society mein rehna hai na?' snorted Jigyasha Bali. Ranveer butted in and asked Nishikant 'Pia dikhai nahi dai rahi'

Nishikant got up walked toward the stairs and called out 'Bani, come and bring Pia'

A few seconds later Bani walked in with Pia. Pia bowed down to Dadi, Masi, Jigyasha, Aditya and Jigyasha's brother. Then Dadi took Pia and said 'kitni soni hai mere pote ki pasand, beth mere nal'

'Adityaji, this is my elder daughter Bani' Nishikant said addressing Bani to the whole group. Bani said her namaste to the Bali Clan and the she saw Jigyasha Bali's brother Jai. Who she said a quiet Namaste Sir and under her breath said 'Yeh Budha yahan bi agaya' just then Ramukaka, their servant appeared with a tray of tea and snacks. 'Ramukaka yeh mujhe dijiye mere serve karti hoon' with that she took the tray and served everyone.

Bani couldn't still get over the fact that Jai was here and was Ranveer's Mamaji, darn now I have to be nice to him 'jeeto karta hai ka iss budhe kai sare bal nochlu' She thought as she saw him talking quietly to his Masi.

After sometime Jigyasha Bali stood up walked towards Pia and put two kangans on Pia's wrist. 'Yeh sagun kai kanga hai jara sambhal kai rakhna' with that she turned to Aditya who spoke up 'Mr. Dixit hum jaldi hhi murat dekhe kar Shaadhi ki date aap ko baata denge'

'Ek minute' Masi said 'Nishikantji aap ko nahi lagta kai Pia kai saath Bani ki bi Shaadhi kar deni chahiye. Acha nahi lagtaa badi ben ko ghar mein bitha kar choti ki Shaadhi kardijaye.'

'Mein aapki baat se sehmaat hoon magar yeh baat to alag hai na?'

'Mera ek prashtav hai asha karti hoon aap sehmaat ho. Yeh mera beta hai na Jai, uske saath Bani kai phere hogaye to kessa lagega.'

As on que Kiran Dixit took Bani by the hand to her room 'Put this on' She said as she gave Bani a light pink zardooshi embroidered sari.

'Maa'what is this? Ek ben kai saath ek free'yeh koyi General Store nahi hai'

'chup kar you don't know anything'

'Haan haan I know nothing. That's why aap mujhe ek budhe kai pallu band rahi hai'

'seriously Bani the age difference its not that bad. Papa aur mujhe bi dus sal ka fasla hai'

'I know maa and you both love each other but look at him he looks like he is fifty'

'he is only thirty-eight, beta'

'Wow you say thirty-eight as it is the new twenty-one. Aur phir bi why do you think he waited this long. Shayaad usme kuch kami hogi'

'Chup kar, Aur sari pehen aur nache chal. Samja kar Jai Walia of WGI wants to marry you'

Bani let it sink in Jai budha was Jai Walia of WGI not some Sharma Industry employee working on the Sharma-WGI merger. She just hate him ever more than a second ago.

***

'Hello Sonam mein kuch din kai liye office nahi arahee hoom. Uncle sai mein chuti leliye hai. I be back to look after the collaboration'

'What? Are you going on vacation babes.'

'Haan vacation to jail KALAPANI'

'Ha ha ha very funny. Such baat where you going'

'Actually no where darasal meri aur Pia ki Shaadi ka murat do din badd hai June 3rd ko'

'Maadamji tum shaadi kar rahi ho aur mujhe aab bata rahi ho'

'No Sonam it's not like that' bani narrated everything that had happened earlier that evening to Sonam.

'Sorry babes wish I could help'

Bani put the phone down. 'Pushkar tumhai do din ka waqt hai ajawo na'

Aaaja reh mahi tera rasta udekhdi ya''Movie: Heena

Edited by white_rose - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwnn.. bani pushky is dead.. anywayz great part hun.. gret SS.. conitnue sooon.. JB wedding and wow pia with ranveer.. htat sounds like a funny pair..nonethe less a good one.. heheh..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wonderful SS... Loved it...
Please continue soon..

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