The Palace of secrets Season3 Mohan-Radha,Shiv Shakti SS

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The Palace of secrets Season3 Part 1


Long ago Heavenlybliss and Salley had asked me to write something like the movie Bhool Bhulaiyya.This SS is not based on the movie Bhool bhulaiyya.But it comes under the genre of Bhool bhulaiyya.So I dedicate this SS to Heavenlybliss and Salley.

Thank you very much Sydell for the lovely cover page.




Mohan twirled around Radha in his arms.

Suddenly Radha became dull.

Radha:Mohanji...I am scared whether papa and mumma will agree for our marriage.

Mohan:Don't worry Radha.I will talk to your father.He has no reason to reject me.

She smiled.



Mohan met Radha's parents Rajesh and Mandira.

Mohan:I really love your daughter Radha.I promise to look after her well.Please let me marry your daughter.

Rajesh:Why should we have a problem with this relationship?

Mohan smiled with relief.

Rajesh:But I doubt whether you will have a problem with going ahead with this relationship.

Mohan got confused:What?Why should I have a problem with Radha?

Rajesh:Because Radha has got a secret.After knowing the secret I don't know whether you will marry her.

Mohan was stunned.

Mohan:What are you saying Uncle?What secret does Radha have?

Rajesh and Mandira were tensed.

Rajesh and Mandira told him the secret which left Mohan shocked.

Mandira asked him tearfully:Are you going to leave Radha?She will be shattered.

Mohan:No.I will never leave Radha.I really love her.

Rajesh and Mandira became very emotional and happy.

Rajesh folded his hands and said:We don't have words to thank you.

Mohan:Don't say like that.I am not doing any favour.I love Radha.That's why I am marrying her.

Rajesh and Mandira smiled.

Mohan:But please don't tell this secret to my family.If they come to know it they won't let me marry Radha.So let the secret remain in me.

Rajesh and Mandira nodded.



Radha ran into Mohan's arms happily.

Radha:I am so happy Mohanji that my parents agreed for our marriage.

Mohan:I told you that they will not reject me.And my parents like you already.

Radha smiled.



Mohan-Radha's Sangeet function...

Mohan-Radha danced gracefully.

Teri mithi mithi main ta gal suneya
Tere sohne sohne mukhde te rabb vekheya
Teri mithi mithi main ta gal suneya
Tere sohne sohne mukhde te rabb vekheya

Teri mithi mithi main ta gal suneya
Tere sohne sohne mukhde te rabb vekheya
Teri mithi mithi main ta gal suneya
Tere sohne sohne mukhde te rabb vekheya






Kabhi tu judaai wali gall na karna
Sang jeene marne ka iraada ho gaya
Dhadka toh pehle bhi dil yeh mera
Shor iss vaari thoda zyada ho gaya

Teri mithi mithi main ta gal suneya
Tere sohne sohne mukhde te rabb vekheya
Teri mithi mithi main ta gal suneya
Tere sohne sohne mukhde te rabb vekheya

Mai teri teri ankhan baajon
Jee nai sakda mar nai sakda
Ki karaan teri raahan chhadd ke
Chal nai sakda rukk nai sakda

Tol tarazu mein dil mera
Tull nai sakda tull nai sakda
Rani meri tu hai tere bin
Jee nai lagda jee nai lagda

Teri meethi meethi
Teri meethi meethi

Mujhe dheere dheere tera ho jaane do
Zara baahon mein bhar lo na aaj tum
Tujhe roka hai kya maine pehle kabhi
Chalo apna bana lo na aaj tum

Teri neeli neeli aankhon ke ishq mein
Mujhe doobne doobne doobne de
Tere sang sang rehna hai mujhe
Sab chhootne chhootne chhootne de

Kabhi tu judaai wali gall na karna
Sang jeene marne ka iraada ho gaya
Dhadka toh pehle bhi dil yeh mera
Shor iss vaari thoda zyada ho gaya

Teri mithi mithi main ta gal suneya
Tere sohne sohne mukhde te rabb vekheya
Teri mithi mithi main ta gal suneya
Tere sohne sohne mukhde te rabb vekheya

Teri meethi meethi

Tu bhi yahan main bhi yahaan
Hone lage saare armaan jawan
Had se guzar jaaye dono sanam
Yeh dooriyan karde saari khatam

Kho jaane do mil jaane do
Jo na hua aaj ho jaane do
Chalta rahe bas chalta rahe
Yeh ishq gir ke sambhalta rahe

Girne sambhalne ki baat na karna
Main hoon tera tu hai meri
Yeh vaada ho gaya
Dhadka toh pehle bhi dil yeh mera
Shor iss vaari thoda zyada ho gaya

Teri mithi mithi main ta gal suneya
Tere sohne sohne mukhde te rabb vekheya
Teri mithi mithi main ta gal suneya
Tere sohne sohne mukhde te rabb vekheya

Teri meethi meethi
Teri meethi meethi(Music video Meethi Meethi

sung by Jubin Nautiyal & Payal Dev )



Radha and Mohan's sister Shakti danced together.


Albela sajan aayo ri
(Albela sajan aayo ri
Mora, ati mann sukh paayo ri) * 2
(Albela sajan aayo re) * 2



(Chauk puraao, mangal gaao) * 2
Ati mann sukh paayo ri
Albela sajan aayo ri
Mora, ati mann sukh paayo ri
(Albela sajan aayo re) * 2







(Ang sugandhit, mann anandit) * 2
Chahun aur rang barsaao


Chahun aur rang barsaao ri
(Albela sajan aayo re) * 2
Mora, ati mann sukh paayo ri


(Albela sajan aayo re) * 2

Albela, albela, albela…(Bajirao Mastani ).



There came a guest.

"I am here".

They all were happy to see him.

Shakti:Dr.Shiv!

They walked towards each other.

Radha:Who is he?

Shiv apologized to Shakti:Sorry...I became late.

Shakti:You should have come earlier.

Mohan:Radha...this is Dr.Shiv.He is Shakti's fiance.

Radha:Nice to meet you Shiv.

Shiv:I am also feeling nice to meet you Radha.

They smiled.

Radha asked Shakti:When is your wedding?

Shakti blushed:Very soon.

Everyone smiled.



Mohan-Radha got married.

Pyar Ka Pehla Naam Radha Mohan | Ep 815 | Shabir Ahluwalia | Zee TV UK #shabirahluwalia - YouTube

Their bedroom was decorated with lit candles and flowers.

Radha:This room looks so beautiful Mohanji.

Mohanji:Yes.But you are more beautiful.

She blushed.

Dheere Dheere Mera
Ishq Badhta Gaya
Aur Mujhse Kaha Na Gaya

Main Tera Ho Gaya
Kya Se Kya Ho Gaya


He pulled her closer.


Aur Mujhko Pata Na Chala

Dil Ko Kaun Ab Samjhaye
Tere Pichhe Pichhe Jaaye
Naam Tere Likhi Har Khushi

Dhadkan Saans Rukk Jaaye

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Jab Tu Saamne Aa Jaaye
Meri Samjho Zara Bebasi

Dheere Dheere Mera
Ishq Badhta Gaya
Aur Mujhse Kaha Na Gaya

Main Tera Ho Gaya
Kya Se Kya Ho Gaya

Mohan leaned towards her face to pamper it with his lips.


Aur Mujhko Pata Na Chala

Mere Shaamon Shehar
Tere Dil Ke Shehar
Mein Hi Guzre
Dua Hai Meri

Baat Yeh Jaan Lo

They embraced each other passionately.


Chahe Jo Kuchh Bhi Ho
Jaan Tujhme Basi Hai Meri

Aadhi Raat Ko Jag Jaaye
Jab Tu Khwaab Mein Na Aaye

Meri Samjho Zara Bebasi

Dil Ko Kaun Ab Samjhaye
Tere Pichhe Pichhe Jaaye
Naam Tere Likhi Har Khushi



(Ishq Badhta Gaya).

Radha was cooking in the kitchen.Mohan entered the kitchen.

Radha:What are you doing Mohanji?It is my first cooking in this kitchen.I have to concentrate.

Mohan:Let us have our first kitchen romance too.

He pulled her closer and romanced.

Mohan showed the rooms of his house to Radha.

Radha:This looks like a palace.

Mohan:It is actually a Palace.Our ancestors were Kings.

Radha:That's interesting.

She noticed a closed room.

Radha:Why only this room is closed?

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Posted: 2 months ago
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I wonder what Radhas secret is...does she have a personality disorder like split personality?

And I think Mohan is also hiding some secret

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thanks for the pm


Part 1

Amazing update.... greatly written

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Thnx for the dedication. Hope like Mohan says, Radha's father will accept him. Wondering what's the secret. Dance was nice. Their first night scenes were romantic. Oh so here comes the locked room. Perfect pics. Waiting for next

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Radha comes with a secret. What is it? Does she know?

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A closed room in the palace. Even his family holds a secret of their own it seems.

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Thank u very much for the support friends.


The Palace of secrets Season3 Part 2

Mohan showed the rooms of his house to Radha.

Radha:This looks like a palace.

Mohan:It is actually a Palace.Our ancestors were Kings.

Radha:That's interesting.

She noticed a closed room.

Radha:Why only this room is closed?

Immediately Mohan's father Vishwanath said:Actually there is a backstory.

Radha:What is the backstory?

Vishwanath:Actually our ancestor Hridayeshwar was a King.There were many dancing girls who used to dance for him.

Mohan's mother Kadambari:His favourite was the dancer Bani.



Flash back....

The King Hridayeshwar was enjoying Bani's dance.

bani tandav | naagin 5 | surbhi chandna |

Present...

Kadambari:A snake charmer landed in the Kingdom.His charming tune exposed Bani.She turned into a naagin.

Bani was actually a shape shifting serpent.

Radha was shocked:What?

Vishwanath:The King Hriday who hates serpents was shocked to know that Bani was a serpent.He ordered his people to kill Bani.



Present...

Bani was shocked to hear the King's order to kill her.

She pleaded him folding her hands:Maharajji,please do not kill me.What is my fault if I am born as a serpent?

Hriday:You hid such a big secret from me.I will not forgive you.

Present....

Kadambari:Though Bani requested him a lot,the King did not have any sympathy towards her.He killed her brutally.After that Bani came as a spirit and killed the King.She was adamant to destroy this palace.

Vishwanath:But King Hridayeshwar's wife Alekha brought a tantrik.The tantrik trapped Bani's soul in that room.Even her belongings such as the accessories etc are kept there.That is why the room is locked.

Radha was shocked.

Kadambari:After killing Bani,this palace is said to be cursed by the snake clan.So every newly wed couple goes to the Abode of snakes which is a temple and do puja.You both also should go there and do the puja.

Radha:Sure Maa.We both will go to the temple soon.

Mohan looked at her in disbelief.



In the room...

Mohan:I am surprised that you agreed to do puja in the temple which is an abode of snakes.

Radha:Because I am scared whether the serpent's curse will affect our married life.

Mohan:Are you crazy Radha?You believe all this?This is a stupid superstition.Should our generation believe it?They think that Bani's soul resides in that locked room.Seriously?I don't believe this nonsense.

Radha:But we have to follow the family tradition.When it comes to our own life,I tend to be superstitious Mohanji.

Mohan:Whatever!I agreed to go there only for you,not because I believe in it.

Radha nodded.



Mohan and Radha did puja in the temple.

Radha:Now I feel relieved Mohanji.I feel that we will be free from the curse of the serpents.

Mohan:If this puja gave you relief,I am also happy.

She smiled.

Mohan and Radha went to Munnar for honeymoon.

In the cold place they sat near the hearth.

Haan Aa Aa..

Mere Kareeb Tujhe, Mere Kareeb Tujhe
Mere Naseeb Tujhe Aana Hi Tha
Har Ek Haal Tujhe Har Ek Haal Tujhe
Mera Khayal Tujhe Aana Hi Tha

They sat close to each other romantically.

Tujhse Mohabbat Jo Karne Laga
Aisa Lage Main Sanwarne Laga
Khaali Sa Tha Main Khayalon Ne Tere Bhara
Tere Jaisa Toh Jahaan Mein Nahi Doosra

Oh Apsara Hoye
Hai Behtareen Behtareen Apna Kal
Behtareen Hai, Haan Aa Aa..

They had sweet romance in the beautiful resort.

Sukhdaanvith Sukrutham Gandham
Dharmaangam Premadhara Sukhdaanvesham
Madhuraaathar Madhumakarandham Maangalyam
Sumanohar Supadam Cha Shubham

Kalyaan Kamaneeyam
Shubha Sakhyam Ithi Gamyam
Madhurya Makarandham
Vadhu Waryam Sukhamsyam

Sneham Ch Sthira Keertiyanvitha
Daampatyoh Sukhavardhanam

Unexpectedly it rained.Mohan and Radha romanced in the rain.



Kahin Tujhe Lage Dhoop Toh
Wahan Banun Tera Saaya Main
Jahan Mujhe Tu Aawaaz De
Wahin Main Kahun Ke Aaya Main

Tujhe Sambhal Ke Hai Rakhna Pyar Se
Tujhi Se Toh Yeh Jannat Sa Ghar Basse

The same time Shakti and Shiv were romancing in the rain.


Oh Apsara Haaye Oh Apsara Haaye

Hai Behtareen Behtareen Apna Kal
Behtareen Hai, Haan Aa Aa..

Mere Kareeb Tujhe, Mere Kareeb Tujhe
Mere Naseeb Tujhe Aana Hi Tha
Har Ek Haal Tujhe Har Ek Haal Tujhe
Mera Khayal Tujhe Aana Hi Tha

Haan Aa Aa…(Baby John).

After the rain romance,Shiv and Shakti stood under a shed.Shakti:I really had fun in the rain with you.Then why did you suddenly bring me here?

Shiv smiled.

Shiv:Rain romance's Rani...I am rain romance's Raja.But if we enjoy too much in the rain,we both will fall sick and we won't be able to romance.

They both giggled.



After the honeymoon,Mohan and Radha returned to the Palace.



The next day....

After jogging when Mohan reached home he saw Shakti arguing with the servant Imlie.

Kadambari and Radha were seen shocked.

Mohan:What's happening here?

Shakti:Mohan bhaiyya,yesterday night I heard the sound of anklets.Somebody was dancing.I am sure that it was Imlie who was dancing at night.

Mohan was shocked.

Imlie:Mohanji,I swear.I didn't dance.

Shakti:Stop lying Imlie.It's you who danced.I am sure.After all whenever you get a chance, you do dance at the bar.

Imlie looked down in shame.

Imlie:I agree that when my father was really sick for his treatment I had danced at the bar.But after I lost my father I have never danced.

Radha:Shakti,I think Imlie is telling the truth.

Shakti:Bhabhi,you are too innocent to believe her.If she was not the one who danced how did I hear the sound?I really heard someone dance.

Kadambari said with fear:Bani's spirit.It's Bani's spirit who danced.

Shakti:Oh please Maa...I can't be superstitious like you.There is no ghost here.It's Imlie who did that.Imlie deserves punishment for fooling us.She is cunning like most of the servants who do not leave a chance to steal.

Imlie started weeping.Radha felt sad for her.Imlie ran away crying.

Kadambari:Poor girl!Imlie is innocent Shakti.She is not cunning.

Radha:I also think that Imlie is not cunning.Even if Imlie is doing it,I don't think she is doing it purposefully. What if it is a mental disease?

Mohan:Yes,that's possible.

Shakti:Why did'nt I think like that before?Then I will call Dr.Shiv here.Let him find out whether Imlie is the real dancer.And if he confirms that Imlie is the one let him start the treatment.

Vishwanath:What?Then Shiv will have to stay here.

Shakti:Yes.

Vishwanath:How can he stay here before marrying you?Right?

Kadambari:Exactly.Before marriage,how can he stay with you here?

Shakti:Oh papa Maa...Dr.Shiv is going to stay here as a psychiatrist, not as my lover.We are not going to live in.So don't worry.Please agree papa.Otherwise we won't be able to solve the mysteries.

Vishwanath:I also heard the sound of the anklet and some song.But I think it's Bani.It was expected.It is not a mystery beta.

Shakti:Papa,I don't want to hear this ghost story of Bani.Trust me.There is no ghost here.Dr.Shiv will come here to solve this issue.He will prove the truth that there is no ghost and it's Imlie who is behind it.

Vishwanath and Kadambari were silent.

Mohan was tensed.

Mohan thought:Shiv is an intelligent psychiatrist. If he stays here,the truth which I hid will also come out.What to do?



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Shocked to know how Bani was killed brutally. Good that Mohan agreed to do puja for the sake of Radha. Honeymoon and rain scenes were romantic. It's not Imlie but Radha dancing I think. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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Part 2

Majestic update.... finely written


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