The Palace of secrets Season3 Mohan-Radha,Shiv Shakti SS - Page 5

Part 8

Gripping update.... brilliantly written

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Part 3

Itni tension mein Shiv is busy with romance lolll

I think that dancer is Radha and Mohan is trying to protect her.

The family went away so Mohan could not get to them. How will they break this hypnosis cycle?

Since Mohan did not go, Jay is coming over to check. Why didn't he get revenge when the people involved were living? This generation was not to blame.

The people involved were already killed.It was mentioned in part2.Thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: coderlady

Since Mohan did not go, Jay is coming over to check. Why didn't he get revenge when the people involved were living? This generation was not to blame.

The Palace of secrets Season3 Part 9

Jay entered the palace as a serpent.All the family members were present there without sleeping.

They saw the serpent and guessed that it was Jay.

Shiv:Jay...you can come to your human form now.

Jay was shocked.

He thought:How did they know about me?

Jay took his human form.

Shiv:We came to know everything.Why are you punishing innocent people?Your sister was killed by their ancestors.You and your family already killed the King who killed Bani.Now why are you after their blood?

Jay:Only if I kill the entire family my sister will get peace of mind.Me too.

Jay turned towards Mohan.

Jay:Mohan,why did'nt you kill your family like I ordered?Its still night.You can kill them now.

Mohan:Stop it.I am not under your hypnosis anymore to obey you blindly.

Jay thought:I will do sammohan again.

Jay tried to trap him again,but nothing worked.

Mohan and others smirked.

Mohan:You cannot influence me again Jay.

Jay saw the sacred thread on Mohan's hand and got shocked.

Jay:I thought of using Mohan and killing the entire family.But it's okay.I myself will kill all of you.

Shiv:Before that you will be finished Jay.We won't spare you.

Jay laughed.

Jay:How can ordinary human beings like you all defeat me?

Radha:We had enquired about you Jay.You had tried to kill the entire generation of the King Hriday too.But the famous Tantrik Devraj trapped you in a cave.Recently some ignorant tourists opened the cave for fun and thus you escaped from there.That's why after many years you are back with the motive of revenge.Tantrik Devraj's family's current generation is blessed with the powerful Tantrik Aakesh.He will destroy you.

Jay was shocked.

The tantrik Aakesh came from inside.Jay got scared.

Aakesh:Your end is near.

Jay:No...

Jay took his serpent form

and tried to bite them.Suddenly Aakesh took a weapon from his bag and threw it at Jay.Jay got injured and became weak.

Aakesh took a bottle which contained magical water.He poured it on Jay.Jay screamed out of pain and vanished.

Aakesh:This is the end of Jay.Now you don't have to worry about him.

All were very happy.

Radha:Thank you so much for saving our family.

Aakesh just smiled.

Radha:But Bani's soul is still in the room where she was trapped before.Right?Will she escape from there and attack us?

Mohan:That should'nt happen.

Aakesh:Do you know where exactly her soul is trapped in that room?

Vishwanath:We know that it is in the room.But we don't know the exact area.

Aakesh got inside the locked room.

Aakesh:I can sense where she is.

There was a painting on the wall.It was Bani's painting.

(The credit for this painting goes to vishaka_world).

Aakesh:Like you all think it is not Bani's painting.It is Bani's soul which we see.

They all got scared.

Aakesh poured magical water at the painting.After that there was only a white board on the wall.Bani was not seen there.All were stunned.

Aakesh:Bani's soul got salvation and she has gone to the place of souls.So she will never come back to trouble you all.This room does'nt have to be kept locked also as there is no danger anymore.

All were very happy.

Mohan held Radha's hand and said:Thank you Radha for not leaving my hand when I became abnormal.

Radha:You also did'nt leave my hand when you thought that I was having mental illness.We both are holding each other's hands always to protect each other Mohanji.

They smiled.

Shiv and Shakti were walking together.

Shiv:Shakti,I was busy till now.Before I get busy again,let us get married.

Shakti was surprised:Really you are in a hurry to marry me?

Shiv:Yes.I am fed up of waiting.Will you marry me?

Shakti:Of course yes.

They embraced each other romantically.

The preparations for Shiv-Shakti's pre-wedding ceremonies started.

Shakti went near Imlie.

Shakti:I always taunted you by saying about you dancing at the bar.I am really sorry.If you have forgiven me please start dancing again as dance is your passion which you suppressed.Please dance at my sangeet function.

Imlie smiled emotionally.

Shiv-Shakti and Radha-Mohan danced together at the Sangeet function.

Ghunghta Utha Ke Mila Le Tu Akhiyaan
Kehne De Kehti Hain Jo Teri Sakhiyan

Ghunghta Utha Ke Mila Le Tu Akhiyaan
Kehne De Kehti Hain Jo Teri Sakhiyan

Yeh Preet Hai Puraani
Main Raja Aur Tu Raani
Aa Tere Mere Janmon Ke Waade
Oh Radhe, O Radhe
Oh Radhe Radhe Radhe

Radhe Radhe Radhe
Oh Radhe Radhe Radhe
Tere Bina Krishna Toh
Lage Aadhe Aadhe

Radhe Radhe Radhe
Oh Radhe Radhe Radhe
Tere Bina Krishna Toh
Lage Aadhe Aadhe

Radhe Radhe Radhe
Oh Radhe Radhe Radhe
Tere Bina Krishna Toh
Lage Aadhe Aadhe

Poori Bhi Hai Adhoori Bhi Hai
Hum Dono Ki Kahaani
Poori Bhi Hai Adhoori Bhi Hai
Hum Dono Ki Kahaani
Yeh Prem Toh Rahega Amar
Kehta Hai Jamuna Ka Paani
Karte Hain Chalaaki
Ye Karke Taaka Taaki

Haan Nain Tere Nain Seedhe Saadhe
Oh Radhe, O Radhe
Oh Radhe Radhe Radhe

Radhe Radhe Radhe!
Oh Radhe Radhe Radhe!
Tere Bina Krishna Toh
Lage Aadhe Aadhe

Radhe Radhe Radhe!
Oh Radhe Radhe Radhe!
Tere Bina Krishna Toh
Lage Aadhe Aadhe

Radhe Radhe Radhe!
Oh Radhe Radhe Radhe!
Tere Bina Krishna Toh
Lage Aadhe Aadhe

Radhe Radhe Radhe!.(Dream girl).

Imlie did a solo dance.

Naino wale ne.O.

Nainowale ne chheda mann ka pyaala

Chhalkai madhushala

Mera chain rain nain apne saath le gaya

Nainowale ne aha

Nainowale ne.

Naino waale ne chheda mann ka pyala

Chhalkai madhushala

Mera chain rain nain apne saath le gaya

Pag pag dolun re.ho.

Pag pag dolun re dagmag si main chalti hoon

Jagmag lau si jalti tere naino ki kaisi madira

Tharr tharr kaanpu re tere peer se chipti

Chandan pe naag si lapti

Main behosh tu nasha

Aisi moh ki dasha

Mere chain rain nain apne saath le gaya

Nainowale ne aah

Nainowale ne.

Nainowale ne chheda mann ka pyala

Chalkaai madhushala

Mera chain rain nain apne saath le gaya(Padmaavat).

Mohan entertained everyone through mimicry.

Shiv-Shakti had haldi ceremony.

Shiv-Shakti got married.

Shiv-Shakti danced romantically at the reception party.

Tu chaanv hai so jaun main
Tu dhundh hai kho jaun main
Kho jaun main

Teri aawargi ban jaun main
Tujhe dil ki zuban samjhaun main
Tu chaanv hai so jaun main
Tu dhundh hai kho jaun main

Tu woh nasha jo sar chadhe
To aasmaano mein udd jaun main

Tera yeh ishq mera fitoor
Tu jo bhi kahe ban jaun main
Chhaya hai yoon tera suroor
Jis rang kahe rang jaun main

Tere nashe mein hoon main choor
Jis jog kahe ram jaun main
Tera yeh ishq mera fitoor
Tu jo bhi kahe ban jaun main

Yeh ishq ki baarish huyi
Mujhko teri khwahish huyi
Lagta hai aaj ki bepanaah
Mohabbat ki ek numayish huyi

Yeh ishq ki baarish huyi
Mujhko teri khwaahish huyi
Lagta hai aaj ki bepanaah
Mohabbat ki ek numayish huyi

Yeh ishq ki baarish huyi
Mujhko teri khwaahish huyi
Lagta hai aaj ki bepanaah
Mohabbat ki ek numayish huyi

Bewajah baaton mein kho na jaye
Is pal ka jaadu sun lo mere huzoor
Aalsi raatein yoon beet jaayein
Phir chali jaaun to na mera kusoor

Tu ruk zara farmaaun main
Thehar to ja dohraaun main
Mera vajood hai tu hi
Tujhi mein khudko dhoondh laaun main

Tera yeh ishq mera fitoor
Tu bhi kahe ban jaaun main
Chhaya hai yoon tera suroor
Jis rang kahe rang jaaun main

Tere nashe mein hoon main choor
Jis jog kahe ram jaun main
Tera yeh ishq mera fitoor
Tu jo bhi kahe ban jaun main
Ban jaun main

Yeh ishq ki baarish huyi
Mujhko teri khwaahish huyi
Lagta hai aaj ki bepanaah
Mohabbat ki ek numayish huyi

Yeh ishq ki baarish huyi
Mujhko teri khwaahish huyi
Lagta hai aaj ki bepanaah
Mohabbat ki ek numayish huyi(Shamshera).

Shiv-Shakti romanced passionately

and lay in each other's arms.

Shakti prepared a sweet for the kitchen ceremony in Shiv's house.Though everyone else ate it,Shiv did'nt eat it.Shakti felt bad.

Shakti:Dr.Shiv,why did'nt you have the sweet which I made?You think that I am a bad cook.So you refused to eat it.

Shiv:I am not scared to eat your sweet.I am irritated because the day after the wedding itself you became unromantic.

Shakti was stunned.

Shakti:What did I do for you to be so angry?

Shiv:You did'nt do anything.That's why I am angry.Before serving the sweet to my family members you should have fed it to your husband first.Right?

Shakti giggled.

Shakti:This is why you were angry?

Shiv:Yes.I will eat the sweet only if you feed me with your hand.

Shakti pulled his cheeks and said:You are childish.

Shiv:No.This is not childishness,but romance.

They smiled.

Shakti fed the sweet to Shiv and Shiv enjoyed it.

Shiv:This is already sweet.When you fed it to me it tasted sweeter than before.

She smiled.

Mohan got ready to go to the office.

Radha:Mohanji,don’t go to the office today.We have not spent peaceful time together since a long time.

Mohan:But I have work Radha.

Radha:I want to spend time with you Mohanji.

Mohan held her hand and said:Sorry Radha.I have work to finish.

Radha became dull.

She said in her mind:I won’t allow Mohanji to leave.

Purposefully she slipped over Mohan.He lost balance and he fell down.Radha fell on top of Mohan.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

They both got up from the floor.

Mohan:Purposefuly you made ourselves fall down to stop me from going.Right?You know that I have work.

Radha became dull.

Radha:Then go to work.

Mohan:But now I have more work here.

He pecked her cheek.

She got surprised.

He pulled her closer and they got melted in romance.

Mohan-Radha and Shiv-Shakti attended a couple puja.

The priest blessed them:No evil eyes will fall on you all.God has blessed you all to lead a peaceful happy married life.

They smiled.

The end

Thank you everyone for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,favourite jodi,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

Jay got defeated finally. Even after killing the responsible people, he was not happy.

Bani's spirit got her release too.

Both Mohan and Radha supported each other through the problem. A lovely couple.