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The Palace of secrets Season3 Part 6

Shiv stared at Radha and said:Radha...you are the mental patient who dances at night.

Radha and Shakti were shocked.

Radha:Me?

Shiv:That's what Mohan thinks.

Radha was shocked.

Radha:Mohanji thinks that I am that dancer?

Shiv:Yes.

Radha:But why would Mohanji think like that about me?

Shakti:Yes.Why does Mohan bhaiyya think like that?

Shiv:Radha...please have the strength to hear what I say.

Shiv told them about Radha's parents informing Mohan about her childhood mental illness.

They were shocked.

Radha was in tears.

Radha:I remember meeting a doctor frequently in my childhood.But I didn't know that he was a psychiatrist and I was mentally ill.I can't believe that I am the trouble maker in this palace and I didn't even know that I was dancing here.Poor Mohanji suffered a lot because of me.He is trying hard to protect my image.

Shakti felt sad.

Shiv:Relax Radha.After knowing your medical history purposefully I befriended you.That day purposefully Mohan lied that he cannot drop you to the temple,so that I can drop you to the temple and thus I can spend more time with you to know you better as a part of the treatment.

Radha was shocked.

Shiv:After talking to you I became sure that you are mentally normal and like your doctor and parents doubt your childhood disease has not popped up again.So you are absolutely fit mentally.

Radha and Shakti were stunned.

Radha:Then how can I be the mysterious dancer?

Shakti:Yes.We are getting confused Dr.Shiv.You only said that Radha bhabhi is the mental patient here.

Shiv:I said that's what Mohan thinks.Not that Radha is the patient.

They were surprised and relieved.

Shakti:Then who is that patient Dr.Shiv?

Shiv: Mohan.

They were shocked.

Radha:No.This can't be true.I won't believe it.

Shiv:I know that it's hard to believe it.That day when Mohan requested me not to tell others that the earring which I got from the locked room belonged to Radha,I was observing husband facial expressions.That time itself I doubted whether it's Mohan.

Shakti:No Dr.Shiv.You are misunderstanding him.The dancer was singing while dancing.It was a female voice.

Shiv:I also had the same doubt.Now I have an answer for that too.Remember we discussed about the programmes we should have for our sangeet function?



Flash back...

(Refer to Part 4)

Shakti:We will discuss about the programmes we will have for our Sangeet.

Shiv smiled:Sure.

They discussed.

Shakti:Dance...music...

Shiv showed thumbs up:Done.

Shakti:My suggestions are not over yet.

Shiv:Okay..continue.

Shakti:Then mimicry.

Shiv:Mimicry?

Shakti:Yes.That will be a variety.Somebody imitating other's voice.It will engage the guests.They will enjoy it.

Shiv:But who will do it?

Shakti:Obviously Mohan bhaiyya.

Shiv:Mohan imitates others?I don't believe it.

Shakti:Yes.He is excellent at imitating other's voice.He can speak in the voice of celebrities.He used to fool others on the phone by talking like Amitabh Bachan,Shah Rukh Khan etc.He has won many prizes in college for mimicry.I will show you his certificate.

Shiv became dull.

Shakti showed him Mohan's prize certificate which he got for Mimicry in college.

Shiv became upset as it got confirmed that Mohan is the mental patient who dances at night.

Present....

Shiv:Mohan who knows mimicry well was singing in female voice while dancing.Radha's earring was found in the locked room as Mohan wore Radha's earring to dance.But he thinks that Radha danced there wearing her own jewellery.

Radha and Shakti were shocked.

They were in tears.

Radha:I won't believe that my Mohanji is...

Shakti:Even I won't believe it.

Shiv:I know that it's hard to digest the truth.But you both have to accept the truth.

They became upset.


Shakti informed this to Vishwanath and Kadambari.They were angry.

Vishwanath:How dare you accuse our son of doing this Shiv?

Kadambari:You called our son a psycho.Who made you a doctor?

Shiv became upset.

Shiv:I know that nobody believes me.But I have removed the key from the door of the locked room.I have also kept the window open.Tonight we will see who is dancing there.

They all became dull.



Hearing the sound of the anklet all of them went towards the locked room.They looked inside through the window which was kept open by Shiv.They could not believe their eyes.


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Part 6

Dynamic update.... brilliantly written


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Posted: 3 months ago
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Mohan is the dancer? That's why he revealed to Radha and Shakti.

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Did they see Mohan through the window? It must be the case.

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The Palace of secrets Season3 Part 7

Mohan was dancing there wearing a traditional dance costume.He was singing in female voice while dancing.All were in tears seeing that.

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Mohe rang do laal
Mohe rang do laal
Nand ke laal laal
Chhedo nahi bas rang do laal
Mohe rang do laal

Dekhu dekhu tujhko main hoke nihaal
Dekhu dekhu tujhko main hoke nihaal
Chhu lo kora mora kaanch sa tann
Nain bhar kya rahe nihaar

Mohe rang do laal
Nand ke laal laal
Chhedo naahi bas rang do laal
Mohe rang do laal

Marodi kalaai mori
Marodi kalaai mori
Haan kalaai mori
Haan kalaai marodi.. kalaai mori
Churri chatkai ittrai
Toh chori se garwa lagai

Hari ye chunariya
Jo jhatke se chheeni (x2)

Main toh rangi hari hari ke rang
Laaj se gulaabi gaal

Mohe rang do laal
Nand ke laal laal
Chhedo nahi bas rang do laal
Mohe rang do laal

Mohe rang do laal(Bajirao Mastani).


All were talking about it.

Shiv asked Mohan's parents:When exactly did his mental illness start?

Vishwanath:I swear.I did'nt know about it.

Kadambari:Mohan did not have any problem before.

Radha:Then when did Mohanji become like this?

Shiv:How come own parents failed to notice their son's mental illness?

Shakti:Even I had not noticed it.Bhaiyya was normal.Recently only this dance started here at night.I can't understand why all of a sudden bhaiyya started dancing like Bani at night.

Shiv went to deep thoughts.

Shiv thought:What happened recently which changed Mohan?



Radha visited her parents and told them everything.They were shocked.

Mandira:How is it possible Rajesh?We expected this from our daughter,but our son in law ended up being a mental patient.I can't understand anything.The only relief is that Radha is perfectly alright and we don't have to worry about her mental health anymore.

Radha requested tearfully:Mumma...please don't call Mohanji a mental patient.

They became upset.

Rajesh:Mandira...Radha is right.Don't say like that about Mohan.No wife will be able to bear it if something like this is said about her husband.

Mandira:I am sorry my bachi.I should not have said like that.But you don't worry.Like you got cured,Mohan will also be cured.

Radha hugged her crying.Mandira caressed her.




Shiv asked Radha:Radha,before these incidents took place,where all did you and Mohan go?

Radha:We went to Munnar for honeymoon.

Shiv:Did anything strange take place there?

Radha:Nothing like that happened there.

Shiv:You did'nt go anywhere else with Mohan?

Radha:We went to the temple of serpents.

Shiv:What?You mean the abode of serpents?

Radha:Yes.

Shiv thought:Bani was a shape shifting serpent.Is this serpent temple visit connected to Bani?Unfortunately I am becoming superstitious.

Shiv:Did you see any serpent there?

Radha:I did'nt notice any serpent there as my concentration was on puja.

Shiv:Radha,now onwards your eyes should be always on Mohan.You should follow him wherever he goes.I will also accompany you.

Radha nodded.




Mohan and Radha were sleeping.Radha was actually pretending to be asleep.

Radha opened her eyes and thought:Will Mohanji dance tonight also?

She closed her eyes restlessly.

At midnight Mohan opened his eyes and got up from the bed.He went out of the bedroom.Radha too opened her eyes and noticed Mohan going out.

Radha:Mohanji is going to the locked room to dance.

She was upset.

She went out of the room.Shockingly she saw Mohan stepping out of the house.Shiv who was awake to observe Mohan saw this.He went near Radha.

Shiv:Mohan is going out.That means something else is also happening with Mohan which is unknown to us.

Radha:What is happening with Mohanji?

Shiv:I don't know.We have to follow him now.

Radha:Yes.

They followed Mohan without his knowledge.

They reached the place where Mohan went.They were shocked.


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Is Mohan under some influence of someone or something? Where did he go at night?

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Part 7

Grand update.... splendidly written


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The Palace of secrets Season3 Part 8

Shiv and Radha reached the place where Mohan went.They were shocked.

A serpent appeared before Mohan and changed into a human.

Shiv:Icchadari Naag!

Radha:So such shape shifting serpents exist now also.But how is Mohanji connected to him?

Naag to Mohan:Glad that my sammohan (Hypnosis) is working on you.When you came here with your wife for puja I was also present there.You wife who was deeply involved in the puja did not see me.But you saw me.You looked at me.That time itself I had done hypnotism on you with my magical eyes.We icchadari naag naagins have that power.Because of that every night you are coming here to meet me as my sammohan works only during night time.I am so happy that you are following my instructions and dancing in the palace to scare your own family.But I don't know why..no one is scared or dying out of fear.So tonight instead of dancing, to fulfil my revenge you need to kill your own family.

Your ancestors killed my sister Bani.I will destroy the whole family.

He smirked.

Mohan who was under hypnosis said:Yes Jay.I will obey you.

Radha and Shiv were shocked.

Radha:Oh no...Mohanji will kill his own family.

Shiv:We need to stop it.

They rushed to the Palace.

Radha and Shiv informed everything to Mohan's family.They were shocked.

Shakti:What?

Shiv:Yes Shakti.Sometimes superstition becomes reality.Mohan does not have any mental problem.He is behaving like this because he is under the shape shifting serpent Jay.He is taking revenge for his sister Bani.

Shakti:How come Bani's brother is alive even now?

Radha:I have heard that shape shifting serpents have a long life time.

Shiv:There is no time.Before Mohan reaches here,you all should leave this palace for one night.Till morning Mohan is under Jay's hypnosis.Otherwise he will attack all of us.

Kadambari cried:Our own son will try to kill us.

The sad Vishwanath embraced her to console her.

They all left to Shiv's house by car immediately.

After that Mohan reached there.He took a knife from the kitchen and went to every room in search of his family members.When he saw no one he roared.Then he fainted.

In the morning Mohan woke up.He noticed that he was lying on the floor.

Mohan:Why am I on the floor instead of the bed?

Mohan got up from the floor and looked for his family.He did not find anyone.

Mohan:Where are others?

Suddenly the car reached there and all his family members including Shiv came out.

Mohan:Where did all of you go?

Shakti:We went to Dr.Shiv's house for safety.

Mohan:I can't remember anything.What safety?How come I was alone here?

Shiv:Because we left before you reached the Palace.

Mohan:Why did'nt you all wait for us?

Radha was weeping silently.

Shiv:Because we needed to save ourselves from you Mohan.

Mohan:What do you mean?

Shiv:Mohan,I was not superstitious at all.You know that.But now I am also like that.

Shakti:Me too bhaiyya.Because we had an experience.

Mohan:What are you all saying?I can't understand anything.Radha...atleast you say something.

Radha was crying:Mohanji..how can I tell you that painful truth?

Shiv:I will tell you the truth as it's difficult for Radha to tell you the truth.

Mohan:What truth?

Shiv told him everything.

Mohan was shattered.

Mohan:I can't believe it.I was going to kill my own family.

He looked at Radha and said:How did you live with a dangerous person like me Radha?Please forgive me.

He started crying.Radha became upset.

All of them cried seeing him in tears.

Mohan embraced Radha while shedding tears.

Radha embraced him to soothe him.

Radha:Mohanji...don't be upset.It's not your fault.It's all done by Jay.

Kadambari:Yes beta.We have a solution now.We went to the temple.The priest gave us a thread.If you tie that thread around your wrist,no serpent can hypnotize you.

Mohan was relieved.

Radha took the thread from the bag and tied it around Mohan's wrist.Everyone smiled.



At night....

Jay was frustrated as Mohan did'nt visit him.

Jay:Why Mohan did'nt reach here yet?Since he is under my sammohan he is supposed to reach here.Did'nt he kill his family yesterday?

Jay was becoming restless.

Jay:I have to go to the palace to see what's happening there.


Jay entered the palace as a serpent.




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