Originally posted by: WhimsicalMind
That's not how people write a love story, this akal kam writer should just visit women at night so other can get the money
Bilal is obsessed with Sadaf - 1 He could have gone to the birthday party
2 He could have visited the house for Mirza and the bucket which Sadaf threw on Amar would have fallen on him
You have to involve leads in the story, it is 3rd episode and they haven't met
Bhai sahab... Iss kaddu uncle se better script toh main likh sakti hoon
.... Matlab imagine, first episode bilal goes to his father's grave, drunk, sad, and wants to kill himself bec aur dukh nahin bardasht nahin ho raha
Sadaf stops him.. She is there to visit the kabar of xyz... He is enchanted, mesmerised, she has come as a ray of hope... First episode and the leads meet
She then leaves without telling him her name... You have him searching for her and she instead joins his office... Boom!!! Office romance with bilal tadofying her everyday...
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Yeh toh maine abhi type karte karte socha... Actually koi paise de raha Hota toh kamaal hi kar deti
Seriously.. What is an epic love story without the leads even meeting for 4 episodes ????... Instead we have extended scenes about zeher and that slightly psychotic girl
Edited by bips - 9 months ago
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