Living in an illusion Raghavendra Siya Abhi SS

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Living in an illusion Part 1

I dedicate this SS to RameshParab who wants a Harshad Sriti Abhi story from me.I dedicate this to Naina_Writes who suggested me to write a HarshIti Shabbir story on Atrangi re.This SS is loosely based on Atrangi re.

A railway station...

A man got out of the train.He was Raghavendra.Suddenly his eyes fell on a woman there.She looked worried as if she was feared of something.

He:Why does she look upset?What is bothering her?

The credit for the edit goes to the real editor.

Suddenly he thought:Why am I even thinking too much about her?Since I am a psychiatrist,maybe I over think whenever I see a person upset.Leave it.

He walked away.

Suddenly the goons ran towards that woman.She got scared.She tried to run away.They ran after her and caught her.

She yelled at them:Leave me.I will kill you all.

She was forcefully brought to a big house.An old lady stared at her.

The young woman:Dadi,why did you send these goons to catch me?

Dadi:Siya!How dare you ask this question to Geetanjali Oswal?You tried to elope with your lover shamelessly and asking me why I send people to catch you?How can a grandmother like me tolerate my grand daughter eloping with a guy?

Siya:What mistake did I do?You are not letting me live with the person I love.That's why I tried to elope with him.If these people had not caught me,I would have gone to my Abhi's place.

Geetanjali:Stop it.Don't utter that person's name.I will never let you go away with him.

Siya:Why dadi?Why?

Geetanjali:Because he is not yours.I will find a better person for you.

Siya:You have a reason to think that Abhi does'nt match me.But I love Abhi and I will marry only him.

Geetanjali:Then listen...you can't defeat Geetanjali Oswal.I will get you married to the man of my choice.

Siya was irritated.



Some goons barged into Raghavendra's room and caught him.

Raghavendra was shocked.

Raghavendra:What are you guys doing?Why are you taking me with you?

The goons did not say anything and took him to Geetanjali.Raghavendra was shocked to see her.

Raghavendra:Geetanjali Deviji!You sent goons to bring me here?

Geetanjali:Sorry.I had to do this.

Raghavendra:But why?

Geetanjali:I want you to do something.

Raghavendra:What?But why to send goons?You could have sent me a message.I would have come here to meet you.

Geetanjali:If you had known why I called you here,you might have refused.That's why I sent them.

Raghavendra:What do you want me to do which I will refuse?

Geetanjali:I want you to marry my grand daughter Siya.

He was shocked.

Raghavendra:What?Why did you choose me for that?

Geetanjali:You were my son's psychiatrist.That's how we know each other.I know you quite well.So I think you are the best for Siya.

Raghavendra:Sorry.But I am already committed.I am going to get engaged to her.

Geetanjali was shocked.

Geetanjali:You are only committed,you are not married.So marry Siya.

Raghavendra:How can you say like that?How can I break my engagement to marry the woman I have not even seen?You have no right to order me.Understand?

Suddenly Geetanjali took a gun and aimed at Raghavendra.

Geetanjali:I said..marry my grand daughter.Otherwise you will be killed.

Raghavendra was shocked and scared.

Siya was brought there forcefully.Raghavendra was shocked to see her.

He thought:She is the same lady I saw at the railway station.Guess she was upset because of her Lady Don grandmother.

Geetanjali was holding the gun and threatening them.

Geetanjali:Get married to each other.

Siya:No,i won't.You are free to kill me.

Geetanjali:I will not kill my grand daughter.But I will kill this guy if you don't marry him.Do you want an innocent man to get killed because of you?

Siya wept helplessly.Raghavendra felt sad for her.

Siya:Don't kill him dadi.What's his mistake?

Siya took a garland and put it around his neck.

Raghavendra thought:She is so innocent to agree to marry me to save a stranger like me.

Geetanjali raised her voice:Doctor!

Immediately he put the garland around Siya's neck.He filled her hairline with vermilion.

Geetanjali created fire with a match stick.They took saath phere too around the fire.

Geetanjali smiled happily.

Geetanjali:Take her with you doctor and make sure that she does'nt elope.

Raghavendra could not open his mouth due to fear.



Raghavendra took Siya to his house.She was crying.

Raghavendra:Why are you crying?I am also a victim like you.Am I crying?

Siya:This is equal to death for me.Because I love someone else.

Raghavendra was shocked.

Raghavendra:Who do you love?

Edited by jasminerahul - 2 years ago
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Nice start dear

Just loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon

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Oh This Lovely Nice Start.

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Congrats on the SS!


Part 1

Wonderful update... nicely written

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part 1


Fabulous Start


Beautiful Cover Page

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Siya wants to marry a guy but her grandmother has other ideas.

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Geetanjali has already planned the match. Without any consent from anyone.

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Who does Siya love? Why doesn't her grandmother like him?

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Thank u so much for the lovely comments friends

Living in an illusion Part 2

Siya:I love Abhi.He is an upcoming singer.He does small stage shows.He came to this place for a small stage show.I was impressed with his musical voice.

Flash back….

Abhi was singing on the stage while Siya was lost in him and his voice.

Aaya Aaya Baaga Baaga
Baaghi Chhora Aaya Re
Gali Gali Taanka Jhaanka
Baaghi Chhora Aaya Re

Aaya Aaya Baaga Baaga
Baaghi Chhora Aaya Re
Gali Gali Taanka Jhaanka
Baaghi Chhora Aaya Re

Apni Gali Ka Hero
Ladka Kamaal Hai
Surname Puchho Toh Ji
Apna Bhuchaal Hai

Aankhon Se Udhaar Kiya
Hothon Se Vyapaar Kiya
Prem Padhati Yeh Bas
Sala Garda Uda Diye

Arey Garda Uda Diye

Beta Garda Uda Diye

Aaya Aaya Baaga Baaga
Baaghi Chhora Aaya Re
Gali Gali Taanka Jhaanka
Baaghi Chhora Aaya Re

Chhore Mein Jaadoo
Jaadoo Mein Chhora
Re Baaga Re Baaga
Re Baaga Baaga Baaga

Ho Jaadoo Taqdeeron Ka
Hathon Ki Lakeeron Ka
Khud Maine Badla Hai Pyar Se

Paaya Jo Tha Paana
Maine Yahan Rozana
Hai Jeet Ko Chheena Haar Se

Ho Hai Yeh Tareeka Pyare
Samjho Ishaare Saare
Tu Hi Jaane Tere Baare
Samjho Ishaare Saare

Dale Dora Dale Dora
Gora Gora Baaghi Chhora

Dale Dora Re
Baaga Gora Gora Re
Baaghi Baaghi Chhora Re
Sala Garda Uda Diye

Dale Dora Re
Baaga Gora Gora Re
Baaghi Baaghi Chhora Re
Beta Garda Uda Diye

Aaya Aaya Baaga Baaga
Baaghi Chhora Aaya Re
Gali Gali Taanka Jhaanka
Baghi Chhora Aaya Re

Apni Gali Ka Hero
Ladka Kamaal Hai
Surname Puchho Toh Ji
Iska Bhuchaal Hai

Aankhon Se Udhaar Kiya
Hothon Se Vyapaar Kiya
Prem Padhati Yeh Bas
Sala Garda Uda Diye

Dale Dora Re
Baaga Gora Gora Re
Baaghi Baaghi Chhora Re

Dale Dora Re
Baaga Gora Gora Re
Baaghi Baaghi Chora Re

Arey Garda Uda Diya Re

(Atrangi re).

Siya went to meet Abhi in person.

Abhi:I am sorry,I did’nt recognize you.

Siya:You did’nt recognize me as you don’t know me.I know you as I watched your stage show.

He smiled.

Siya:Hi..I am Siya.I must say that you sing very well.I am impressed.That’s why I found your address and came here.

He smiled.

Abhi:Thank you.

Another day Siya visited Abhi again surprising him.Abhi was catching his guitar.

Abhi:Siya!

Siya:You may be wondering why I am here.I came here to listen to you sing.

Abhi was surprised.

Siya:You are already holding a guitar.Please sing for me.

Abhi nodded with a smile.

He sang for her.

Tak Tadak Bhadak
Dil Dhadhak Dhadhak
Gaya Atak Atak Na Maana

Latt Gayi Re Ulajh
Gaye Kaise Koyi Hatt Gaya
Man Se Lipat Anjana

Woh Neel Ang Sa Roop Rang
Liye Shagun Samadhi Prem Bhang
Chadhe Ang Ang Phir Mann Matang
Aur Tar Badan Mein Sang Sang
Aur Kanha

Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike
Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike
Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike

Siya imagined dancing romantically with Abhi.

Dhun Saans Saans Mein Bunn Ke
Dhun Saans Saans Mein Bunn Ke
Karde Prem Ka Geet Ka
Monh Ka Shagun

Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike

Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike
Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike

Ho Aana Jo Aake Kabhi
Phir Jaana Jaana Nahi
Jaana Ho Tune Agar
Toh Aana Aana Nahi

Tere Rang Ranga
Tere Rang Ranga
Mann Mehkega Tan Dehkega

Tere Rang Ranga
Tere Rang Ranga
Mann Mehkega Tan Dehkega

Tere Rang Ranga
Tere Rang Ranga
Mann Mehkega Tan Dehkega

Aana Jo Aake Kabhi
Phir Jaana Jaana Nahi
Jaana Ho Tune Agar
Toh Aana Aana Nahi

Tere Rang Ranga
Tere Rang Ranga
Mann Mehkega Tann Dehkega

Tere Rang Ranga
Tere Rang Ranga
Mann Mehkega Tann Dehkega

Tumse Tumko Paana
Tann Mann Tum, Tann Mann Tum
Tumse Mann Ko Jaana
Uljhan Gum, Uljhan Gum

Tumse Tumko Paana
Tann Mann Tum

Jiya Re Naina
Chupke Chupke Hare
Mann Gum Sum Mann Gum Sum

Dori Toote Na Na Na
Bandhi Naino Ne
Jo Sang Tere Dekhe Maine Toh
Sab Rang Tere Sab Rang Tere
Feeke Na Ho Chhoote Na Yeh Rang

Siya and Abhi met each again and again.Whenever they met,Abhi sang for Siya.

Once Siya opened her heart before Abhi.

Siya:I will come straight to the point.I love you and I want you to be my life partner.

Abhi was very happy.

Abhi:I love you too.

She became very happy.

Tere Rang Ranga
Tere Rang Ranga
Mann Mehkega Tan Dehkega

Tere Rang Ranga
Tere Rang Ranga
Mann Mehkega Tan Dehkega

Tere Rang Ranga
Tere Rang Ranga
Mann Mehkega Tan Dehkega

Tere Rang Ranga
Tere Rang Ranga
Mann Mehkega Tan Dehkega

He pulled her closer and rubbed his nose with hers romantically.

Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike
Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike
Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike

Dhun Saans Saans Mein Bunn Ke
Dhun Saans Saans Mein Bunn Ke
Karde Prem Ka Geet Ka
Monh Ka Shagun

Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike
Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike
Murli Ki Yeh Dhun Sunn Radhike(Atrangi re).

Abhi went to Oswal Mansion to meet Geetanjali Devi with the marriage alliance.

Abhi:Siya and I..

Geetanjali:I know.Siya had told me about you.

He smiled.

Abhi:I would like to marry Siya with your blessings.

Geetanjali:But why have you come alone with the marriage alliance?Usually the boy brings his parents too.

Abhi and Siya became dull.

Abhi:I had only a mother.She passed away last year due to cancer.

Geetanjali:That’s sad.What about your father?

Abhi:I don’t have a father.My father betrayed my mother and left her.I have not seen my father at all.

Geetanjali:You have not even seen his photograph?

Abhi:No.

Geetanjali:Are you born out of wedlock?

Abhi nodded:Yes.

Geetanjali stared at Abhi and Siya.

Geetanjali:Siya…you got only an illegitimate boy to marry?Abhi…being an illegitimate,how did you get the courage to love Geetanjali Oswal’s grand daughter?Get lost.If you stay here for a moment,I will take my gun.

Abhi was shattered and went out.

Siya ran out following Abhi.

Siya:Abhi…I apologize on behalf of dadi for insulting you.

Abhi:It’s ok Siya.I have been taunted by the society always.So it’s not new for me.You deserve a better person who is from a good family,not an illegitimate like you.I did a mistake by forgetting my dirty birth secret.

Siya:No Abhi.It’s not your fault if you are born out of wedlock.It’s your father’s fault.One more thing.I want only you.Siya is only Abhi’s.Be ready tomorrow.We will get married in the temple tomorrow.

Abhi was shocked:Siya!

Siya:Don’t say any excuse.

Siya walked away while Abhi looked at her deeply.

Abhi and Siya got ready to marry each other in the temple.They smiled at each other.

They exchanged garlands and smiled.

But shockingly Geetanjali Devi came there with her goons.She faced them holding a gun in her hand.

Geetanjali:How dare you both try to get married without my knowledge?

Siya:Because you tried to separate us.

Geetanjali:Abhi..you trapped my grand daughter.

Siya:He did not trap me.I only approached him first.Because it was love at first sight for me.

Geetanjali got angry:Stop it.I will not let this wedding happen.Abhi…now onwards you will not stay in this place.My people will take you to some other place.I could have killed you for killing my grand daughter.But I am showing mercy by shifting you to some other place.

Abhi:No,I can’t leave Siya and go.

Siya smiled emotionally.

Geetanjali:So arrogant!

Geetanjali ordered her men:Take him away.

They took him to the jeep forcefully and drove away while Abhi and Siya kept screaming.

Siya stared at Geetanjali:You separated us physically.But you cannot separate our hearts which have joined together.

Present….

Siya:Later I found out where Abhi was taken to and that’s why I went to the railway station to go there.But dadi’s goons caught me.Somehow I tried to contact Abhi.I did not get him on the phone.But his music team member told me that Abhi has gone to Delhi for a music show.

Raghavendra:Never thought that Geetanjali Deviji was such a big Don.This is shocking.

Siya:We both don’t want to live with each other.But till Abhi return please let me stay with you as I will be safer with you than staying with my dadi.

Raghavendra:Ok..you can stay with me.

Siya:Thank you.

The next morning…

A maid was cooking in the kitchen.Raghavendra was also chopping vegetables.Siya came there.

Raghav:Good morning Siya!

Siya:Good morning!Well..why are you cooking when the maid is there?

Raghav:Just for fun.I love cooking.

Siya:I also love cooking.Can I also join you?

Raghav:Sure.

The trio did combined cooking.

Later Raghavendra got ready to go to hospital.He saw Siya sitting alone with a gloomy face.

Raghavendra:I am going to the hospital.Before that I want to have breakfast.You also have breakfast.

Siya:No thanks.You eat.I don’t feel like eating food.

Raghavendra:I know that you don’t feel like eating food because of the current situation.But skipping food is not a solution.It can only harm your health.You need to be healthy before going to Abhi.Right?So have food.

Slowly Siya nodded.He smiled.

Raghavendra and Siya sat together to have breakfast.

Raghavendra went to his hospital.

The doctor couple Arjun and Mishri greeted him:Good morning Dr.Raghavendra.

Raghav:Bad morning!

Arjun:Why bad morning?

Raghav:Because my life is a mess now.

Mishri:What happened?

Raghav explained everything to them.They were shocked.

Mishri:Don’t worry.This was forceful marriage without any pundit.This is illegal.Legally Siya is not your wife.So you can marry your to be fiancee.

Raghavendra:Yes.Even Siya is waiting to go with her lover.So I will marry the girl with whom my marriage is fixed.But before that I need to tell the truth to her.

Arjun:Don’t do that blunder.She may misunderstand you.She will think that you are two timing with her and Siya.So it’s better not to tell her anything about Siya.

Raghavendra was confused.

Raghavendra told Siya:Tomorrow is my engagement.

Siya was stunned.

Siya:I did’nt know that you also have a lover.

Raghavendra:She is not my lover.It’s an arranged marriage.Anyways…I need to go to my hometown for my engagement function.Would you prefer to come with me or stay here alone?

Siya:I will come with you.But how will you introduce me?

Raghavendra:My colleagues Dr.Arjun and Dr.Mishri are also coming with me.So I will lie that you are also my colleague.

Siya smiled.


Edited by jasminerahul - 2 years ago

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