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Posted: 2 years ago
#31

Thank u very much friends



Living in an illusion Part 6

Raghavendra visited Geetanjali Devi.

Raghav:I came here to ask you a very important thing.You know that Siya love Abhi.Right?

Geetanjali became dull.

Raghav:You don’t like him,That’s why you kidnapped me and made me marry her.But now I realised that there is more to it.What’s the truth?Tell me…have you seen Abhi?

Geetanjali was silent.

Raghav:You may not have seen Abhi as there is no one called Abhi.But tell me why Siya thinks that she has a lover named Abhi.Don’t hide it from me.I know that you know everything.

Geetanjali:I will tell you everything.I wanted to tell you the truth at the right time.Now it’s the right time to tell you the truth.

Raghavendra was eager to know the full truth.

Geetanjali:Abhi is not an imaginary person.He really exists.

Raghavendra was shocked:What?

Geetanjali:Yes.He is there.But he is not Siya’s lover,but her twin sister Pragya’s man.

Raghavendra was shocked as Siya has a twin sister.But he was relieved to know that Abhi is not Siya’s lover.

Geetanjali Devi remembered the bonding of Siya and Pragya.

Flash back…

Ae hatt jaa peeche

Ae dan danati

Bijlee dhaude chamchamati

Ae hatt jaa peeche

Ae dan danati

Bijlee dhaude chamchamati

Dhun dhun

Dard ward gull

Lapak lage bull

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Dard ward gull

Lapak lage bull

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Maati ishaq wali chule chali

Rapat pe rapat pe rapat padi

Chori chakori ka chakkar chala

Amma ki twinkle ne sankal ladi

Oh thath se thitholi

Hai ishq mera goli

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Oh thath se thitholi

Hai ishq mera goli

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Arraa arraaa

Itna itna jhuth jhatil

Kitna kitna ban gai gori

Bitna bitna sarpat sarpat daudi

Lapat jhapat aayi re

Nagar bhatak aayi re

Ladki ye rambha

Karti ye zumba

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Oh thath se thitholi

Hai ishq mera goli

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Thath se thitholi

Hai ishq mera goli

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Ae hatt jaa peeche

Ae dan danati

Bijlee dhaude chamchamati

Ae hatt jaa peeche

Ae dan danati

Bijlee dhaude chamchamati

Dhun dhun

Dard ward gull

Lapak lage bull

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Dard ward gull

Lapak lage bull

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Maati ishaq wali chule chali

Rapat pe rapat pe rapat padi

Chori chakori ka chakkar chala

Amma ki twinkle ne sankal ladi

Oh thath se thitholi

Hai ishq mera goli

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Thath se thitholi

Hai ishq mera goli

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Oh thath se thitholi

Hai ishq mera goli

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Thath se thitholi

Hai ishq mera goli

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

Thath se thitholi

Hai ishq mera goli

Toofan si kudi udi

Dhaye dhaye dhaye

(Atrangi re).

Present….

Geetanjali:I am sure that Siya must have told you about her imaginary love story with Abhi.

Raghavendra:Yes.

Geetanjali:But it’s not entirely true.There are some changes.Pragya is the one who fell in love with Abhi after hearing his songs.Siya was their cupid.I did not object her relationship with Abhi even though he was was an illegitimate.Because after meeting Abhi,I realised that he is a good boy who suits Pragya.But my son;Pragya and Siya’s father Manish was against it.

Flash back…

Manish stared at Pragya.

Manish:Pragya…you got only an illegitimate boy to marry?

Pragya became upset so as Abhi.Geetanjali was also upset.

Geetanjali:But Manish beta,Abhi is a nice boy.

Manish:But his blood is dirty and valueless Maa.An illegitimate person cannot be our family’s member.

They became upset.

Manish stared at Abhi:Abhi…being an illegitimate,how did you get the courage to love my daughter?Get lost.If you stay here for a moment,I will take my gun.

Abhi was shattered and went out.

Abhi and Pragya walked to the temple to get married.

Abhi:Finally we are going to be one.

Pragya:Yes and no one can separate us.

But suddenly Manish came there with a gun.Abhi Pragya were shocked.

Manish:I told you to stay away from my daughter.But you did not listen to me.You are so arrogant that you thought to take my daughter away from me.You deserve death.

Abhi-Pragya were shocked.

Pragya:Papa..please don’t do that.

Geetanjali and Siya came there running.

Geetanjali:Manish,please don’t kill Abhi.It’s too much.

Manish:Why Maa?Murdering is not new for our family.

Geetanjali:But we kill only bad people.Abhi is a nice boy.

Manish:He became bad in my eyes after eyeing my daughter.

Siya:Please papa..leave them.Let them live peacefully.

Geetanjali:Yes beta…please spare Abhi.

Manish pointed the gun at Geetanjali in anger.

Geetanjali:Manish…what are you doing?Have you gone mad?

Manish:Yes,my own daughter and her lover made me mad.Don’t come my way.You know that you can’t change my decision.

They became upset.

Manish shot Abhi.

Pragya screamed.

Abhi fell down unconcious.Pragya sat down hugging him tearfully.

Pragya looked at him:Abhi,open your eyes.You promised to be with me.You can’t leave me.

Slowly Abhi opened his eyes.

His lips shivered:Pragya!

Pragya was relieved.

Manish pulled him up from Pragya’s lap forcefully.

Pragya:Papa!

Manish pushed Abhi and Abhi fell off the cliff.

Pragya cried loudly.

Manish smirked.

Manish:Now he can’t take my daughter with him.

Pragya:You will never get me papa.I will go with Abhi as I decided.

Pragya jumped off the cliff shocking everyone.

Geetanjali Devi:Pragyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Siya cried bitterly.

Manish was numb because of the shock.

Geetanjali slapped Manish.

Geetanjali:You did a crime to keep Pragya with you.But because of your deed,your daughter died in front of you.You are a cursed life Manish.

Manish burst into tears.

Present….

Geetanjali:I lied to you that Manish lost his mental balance after his wife died.But the truth was that he lost mental balance because of guilt…he can’t bear the truth that because of him only he lost his daughter Pragya.Seeing Pragya dying in front of her,Siya too lost her mental balance.She forgot that she had a twin sister like Pragya.But her subconscious mind did not forget Pragya’s life.Seeing Abhi and Pragya’s photographs,she started imagining herself as Pragya.She thought that she was the one who was with Abhi in the photographs,so she considered Abhi as her lover and imagined him everywhere.

Raghavendra:But why does she imagine you in place of Manishji when manishji is the one who was against Abhi and Pragya’s relationship?

Geetanjali:Because after that incident Manish disappeared from her eyes.Since Manish lost his mental balance and became completely mad,he was admitted in your mental hospital.After that Siya has not seen him.Later Manish passed away due to heart attack.So she forgot Manish completely.I sent goons to bring back Siya when she tried to elope with Abhi as there was no person like Abhi in her life.I forcefully got you married to Siya as you are a nice psychiatrist.I wanted you to find Siya’s mental issue by yourself and cure her.I also felt that you are a nice guy who can love Siya.So that she will forget Abhi completely.

Geetanjali:I know that I used you for my selfish intentions.But being a grand mother I had to do this for my granddaughter’s well being.Please forgive me.

Geetanjali wept.

Raghavendra:Don’t be sorry.Because now I feel that you took the right decision to do our forceful marriage.

Geetanjali was relieved.

Geetanjali:Tell me…do you love Siya?

Raghavendra:I love her a lot.Maybe she also loves me.

Geetanjali was surprised and happy.

Raghavendra:May I see Abhi and Pragya’s photograph?

Geetanjali:Yes.Pragya looks just like Siya.

Geetanjali showed Abhi-Pragya’s photograph to Raghavendra.

Siya was searching for Abhi in the house.

Raghavendra:What are you looking for Siya?

Siya:Abhi is missing.He is not seen anywhere here.

Raghavendra smiled.

Raghavendra thought:Medicines have started showing effect on Pragya.That’s why she can’t imagine Abhi near her now.

Raghav:That means Abhi has gone away from your life.

Siya was shocked.

Siya:What are you saying?Where is Abhi?

Raghav:I will show you where Abhi is.

She was surprised:You know where Abhi is?

Raghav:Yes.I will take you there.

She was relieved.


Edited by jasminerahul - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#32

Ok Nice Twist.

But Pragya Died

😢

And Abhi?

What Happened To Him?

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Posted: 2 years ago
#33

That was interesting

Poor Abhi & Pragya

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
#34

Part 6

Startling update.... greatly written

Edited by khwaishfan - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#35

Thank you very much for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scenes,fav jodi,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

Living in an illusion Part 7

Raghavendra took Siya to a hospital.Geetanjali Devi,Arjun and Mishri were also there.Siya was shocked to see Abhi and Pragya lying unconscious on the bed.


Raghavendra:Abhi is here with his love Pragya.Abhi is your own sister Pragya’s lover,not yours Siya.

Siya was stunned.

Raghavendra explained Abhi and Pragya’s tragic love story to Siya.Siya’s eyes got filled up with tears.

Raghavendra:I showed Abhi and Pragya’s photograph to Arjun and Mishri.They told me that Abhi and Pragya are the coma patients of Arjun’s dad who is a doctor.After falling off the cliff,both were saved by some people and took them to Arjun’s dad’s hospital.Their lives were saved.But unfortunately both slipped into coma.I informed your dadi and she also came here to see Pragya and Abhi.

Geetanjali:Siya beta…you are not Pragya.You are Siya.Your man is Raghavendra,not Abhi.

Raghavendra:Siya…till now you were living Pragya’s life.Now please identify yourself and live your own life.

Siya looked at him emotionally.

Siya:When I was with you,I was Siya,not Pragya.That’s why I fell in love with you even though my mind was drifting apart.

Raghavendra smiled emotionally.

Dil Thoda Jazbaati Hai
Bhar Jata Hai Baaton Se

Arjun-Mishri were surprised.

Mishri:Siya loves Dr.Raghavendra like we wish.

Arjun:Ya Mishri.This is what God wanted and that’s why he created so many awkward situations.

Mishri:Ya.

Raghavendra cupped Siya’s face in his hands and looked at her emotionally.

Raghavendra:I always wanted to tell you this.But I could’nt say that.Now I am telling you.I love you Siya.

She closed her eyes emotionally.

Ye Phir Chhalke Yun Aankho Se
Ho Jaise Rait Zara Si

Slowly she opened her eyes and said:I love you too.

Haath Mein Teri Khushboo Hai
Sach Poocho To Ab Yun Hai

They embraced each other emotionally.

Tu Chehre Pe Mere Thehra

Ho Jaise Ret Zara Si!(

Arjun,Mishri and Geetanjali smiled happily.

Geetanjali:Earlier you had an incomplete wedding.So I want you both to get married again following all legal procedures.

They smiled.

Raghavendra and Siya were so happy that they came closer joining their foreheads together romantically.

Tu Chehre Pe Mere Thehra

Ho Jaise Ret Zara Si!(Atrangi re).

Siya and Raghavendra got married.

Arjun:Wish you both a very happy married life.

Mishri:Enjoy guys.

Raghavendra and Siya smiled:Thank you.

Siya-Raghavendra were having icecream in a street shop.

They were surprised to see Akshara with a boy there.

Akshara was surprised to see them and went near them.

Akshara:Hi!

Raghavendra:That day you did not believe us though Siya and I were not in love with each other.But I thank you for calling off our engagement.Because of that I realised that my soulmate is Siya.

Akshara:That time itself I knew that you both were saying the truth.But I pretended to be not believing you as I wanted our engagement to be called off.Because I was in love with a man named Uday.

Raghavendra and Siya were shocked.

Akshara:Thinking that you betrayed us,my mom thought that her choice was wrong,So she allowed me to choose a man for myself.Thus she accepted Uday as my man.Sorry for hurting you both.

Raghavendra:It’s ok.Glad that like me,you also got the love of your life.

Akshara smiled.

Akshara called Uday to come near them and introduced Uday to them.

Akshara:This is Uday;my husband.

Raghavendra:Nice to meet you.

Siya:We wish you both the best.

Uday-Akshara smiled:Thank you.

After a year….

Geetanjali Oswal threw a party.There were not only Raghavendra and Siya to make the party colourful,but also Abhi and Pragya.Because a few months back Abhi and Pragya recovered from coma miraculously.Geetanjali Devi got them married.

Abhi to Pragya:Pragya…I thought we got separated forever.I can’t believe that we are together.

Pragya:Yes Abhi.Our love is pure and divine.That’s why God blessed us specially and united us.

Abhi pecked her forehead

and they embraced each other.

Raghavendra to Siya:Earlier your heart was deeply wounded by the tragedy which Abhi and Pragya faced.But now Abhi and Pragya are living happily in front of us.Are you happy now?

Siya:Yes.I am very happy for Abhi and Pragya.I am also happy that I got a man who stood by me in my worst phase of life.You are my everything Raghavendra.

He smiled.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Raghavendra-Siya and Abhi-Pragya enjoyed the party together.

The end.


Edited by jasminerahul - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#36

See Both Couples Got Married Iam Happy Because In Kum Kum Bhagya Abhi And Pragya Never Got Their Happy Ending

😔 In Your Story They Did

Well Done.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#37

Part 6


Shocking , Awesome and Fabulous Update

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Posted: 2 years ago
#38

Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful part👏✊👍

All well that ends well

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing✍️✍️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part 7

Incredible update..... beautifully written

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Posted: 2 years ago
#40

Part 7


Fabulously Awesome Update

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