Fanaa - A MaAn OS - Page 2

Fire! Loved the way you write, it was captivating and so real. Keep writing.

This was lovely Angie. 🤩

Feedback, maybe Anuj and Anu's thoughts could be differentiated using different font or italics.

I like the ending, as it seemed Anu would go back to Anuj or pull him in the bedroom, but the cliffhanger was unexpected 🤪

What just amazing!!! Really nice perspective!

Lovely writeup dear...

I needed it so much today...You write beautiful beautiful.

You have a unique way of writing and have beautifully explained the inner agitation of AK.

Please do keep writing...This story must not stop here.

Truly, Ahmazing!

I was lost in the aura you created with your magic! I could visualise each and everything and this is our MaAn that I wish to see.

I wish joh dream me hua woh Anu jaake real me karti but then her realising his dilemmas were so endearing. Next time she's going act on it too. Hai na?

Lovely write-up! Do shower us with more!

It is AWESOME... Fantabulous.. Amazing... Great..

It touched every right cord.. be it their apprehensions or their longing for each other..

Their willingness to be close to each other and the restrain not to cross the boundary..

Their naughtiness to take things little far but their shyness to hold back their desires

Just loved it... keep writing and please do tag me next time...❤❤❤❤❤

Absolutely loved it!

Such a beautiful OS!❤️