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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: *Sunita*
Priya, I actually liked the ending.. I mean its not neccessay that every story has to be a happy ending...

Judaai bhi pyaar ka hi naam hai, har pyaar milan tho nahi..😳

wow, so u had this name in mind before... maybe I like come to u in furture...😆😆

ya my ending was not to change the sadness but i wanted to bring a twist...more like yashika was the doctors nurse and love each other instead of anil breaking my heart he did it this way

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ash k
omg priya!!!!!!
that was well written and sad!!!!!
i loved the way you wrote it, but the ending was sad and touching!!!!!
reminded me of saawariya, wen ranbir let go of sonam, for her happiness!!!!

write more please!!!!!!!

thanks dear...i did not see sawaariya but from i read it is made on the lines of the quote 'If you love someone, set them free.' And if they come back it's meant to be."

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Morgoth

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

Interesting concept, Priya, with the reincarnation and all.

What I do not understand is WHY did the wife let Yashika keep coming over to their place? That did not really make sense, but apart from that, the story was pretty interesting.

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Minali The Great

@Guardian Angel

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

This story gave me goosebumps. Great story Priya!!🤗

Edited by Guardian Angel - 17 years ago

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Morgoth
Interesting concept, Priya, with the reincarnation and all.

What I do not understand is WHY did the wife let Yashika keep coming over to their place? That did not really make sense, but apart from that, the story was pretty interesting.

Tanaz dear thanks for reading my story...this was a part of the amazing race assignment so i did not put much thought as time was key😉 I was just giving a short story of something that just came to mind and wrote this without any thought process.

To answer your question: I did not elaborate on the village scene ...actually thats where the main part was. In the village Anil kept doing things that seemed like he was so familiar with the surroundings. He would go to places and act like they had significance and fond memories. And those memories were resciprocated by Yashika. And when they came back to their normal life. Anil continued remembering those and I (the narrator) just let Yashika and Anil remember those times .

Don't know if it makes sense now but that was what i was thinking😳

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Guardian Angel
This story gave me goosebumps. Great story Priya!!🤗

thanks minali...glad you liked it

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

awesome story...but I'm totally confused about the ending. So many possibilities! Was this a case of amnesia? It was a good idea to leave it unclear the way you did. It really made me think.

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chandni

@*Nishi*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

yh i was wondering if he had amnesia also !! 😛 this isnt a true story is it ???? 😭 its really sad 😭 it reminded me of a zee tv serial 😳 like sindoor tere nam ka, or something like that 😕 for some reason mamta came to mind 😕 😆 😆 nice story btw !! 😃

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