Let him go- One Shot Story

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: living.doll
Loved the story. indeed a very touching one. 👏

mummu thanks for reading dear and happy that u liked it😊

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swathi

@lrllike

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

hey priya dear gr8t love story yaar...it touched my soul.....evesum climax sweety....waitin for summore...gud show keep it up 👏 😛

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: armaan*luv*ridz
very cutee...storry..
the endin was reellii 😭 😭
keep up the gud work...

sorry dear...did not want to let u cry...but thanks for reading it

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: LadyZaib
awesome story priya welldone, touching indeed liked the ending as much it pains is brave to let go 👏 good luck with the contest 😃

thank u so much dear😊..ya i wanted it to end differently but due to time constraints ended it here...aww thanks and pray we win

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: rashi85
omg...what a sad end 😭

she actually let him go

lovely priya..very touching 👏 👏 😳

ya i was actually thinking on the lines of the quote if u love them let them go and if they come back then he's urs...but did have time to continue😳

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Fighter

@AmazingHuh

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

Priya, I actually liked the ending.. I mean its not neccessay that every story has to be a happy ending...

Judaai bhi pyaar ka hi naam hai, har pyaar milan tho nahi..😳

wow, so u had this name in mind before... maybe I like come to u in furture...😆😆

Originally posted by: priya.nair

thanks sunita....did not know how to end...i could have done lot better but time was key...ya that was the alternate name had for my daughter😳

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Alishba

@*Alishba*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

Awwww Woww👏👏

Awsome,Lovely piece of wrriting

Very Well Done👏

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asha

@ash k

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

omg priya!!!!!!
that was well written and sad!!!!!
i loved the way you wrote it, but the ending was sad and touching!!!!!
reminded me of saawariya, wen ranbir let go of sonam, for her happiness!!!!

write more please!!!!!!!

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Sam

@Naughty_n_nice

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Posted: 17 years ago

#39

Hi Priya 🤗

A very very interesting story line. Extremely creative, as it's not something you come across too often. If you hadn't written it in a hurry, and put in a more detailed style of writing, it could have been simply amazing, coz you already have the potential to do that!

But on the whole, WOW!

-Sam

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: lrllike
hey priya dear gr8t love story yaar...it touched my soul.....evesum climax sweety....waitin for summore...gud show keep it up 👏 😛

thanks dear for taking the time😊 i guess i should have all my replies and more at this rate😉

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