Let him go- One Shot Story

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: seemahujufan
ey very interesting story!!!!!poor the narator she loved her husband but she could not have him.
great story and short one 👏 i amm lovin...g it 😉

thank you so much,...did it in a hurry so thats why the narrator could not have it,,,maybe when i continue will have it different😆

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: *princess*15
heart touching story 😭

thank you🤗

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Ratree Misbah

@Ratree

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

the story is so good...I feel like crying.....Awesome works..... 👏👏...What I liked most that it was short but had superb contents....

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priya

@sweet_dreams22

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

priya tht was soooo good rilly nice!
luv,
priya!!!**

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Ratree
the story is so good...I feel like crying.....Awesome works..... 👏👏...What I liked most that it was short but had superb contents....

thank you so much dear...thank god it was short or else i doubt i could do it😳 gald u liked the content

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OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sweet_dreams22
priya tht was soooo good rilly nice!
luv,
priya!!!**

thanks namesake😳

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sangeeta

@sangeeta

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Amazing work, Priya. 👏 This is such a sweet story. The ending made me cry. I was expecting it the other way around and when I read the last line it was just unbelieveable.

Waise bhi mein thodi senti chal rahi hoon aaj kal toh jayada impact hua story ka.

Nice job. Keep it up. 👍🏼

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OodlesDoodles

@OodlesDoodles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sangeeta
Amazing work, Priya. 👏 This is such a sweet story. The ending made me cry. I was expecting it the other way around and when I read the last line it was just unbelieveable.

Waise bhi mein thodi senti chal rahi hoon aaj kal toh jayada impact hua story ka.

Nice job. Keep it up. 👍🏼

thanks a lot dear...actually i was not thinking when i wrote it ..when i read it now i see so much of changes that i need to make but as this was just written so quickly i am so glad that you liked it...i kept the ending this way as if not i would have written more😳