moh moh ke dhaage part 10 posted

Heelo peeps. i have attempted to make a fanfic of my favourite couple MaaN. its my first attempt ever to make a fanfic so please spare my horrid writing. let me know if you want more ( was thinking of doing 3 part on this). let me know please 😊

Ye moh moh ke dhaage

Teri ungliyon se jauljhe

Koi Toh Toh na laage

Kis tarah girah yesuljhe

Anuj opened the door to his house with anupamaa leading himinside. The house, although it was his home never felt like one before Anupamaacame in. The house which had a similar setting as her old one and was furnishedto the minimum, had now started to look different and more homely than coupleof hours ago.

“Your house is nice, simple but nice” Anupamaa commentedwhile walking towards the pictures that were stuck on the wall, observingeverything and touching every detail through her eyes.

“It’s up to you now to make it as fancy as you like it orjust leave it simple yet beautiful like you” Anupamaa looked at him, littlecuriosity and little smile playing on her lips and moved forward. Humming underbreath and observing every corner of the house as much as she can, beforereplying in whisper, enough for him to hear but not loud enough for anyoneincluding the walls to listen.

“shayad, I have to mark my territory and identity right?”she took hold of the photo that was placed in the cabinet with her and Anujduring the engagement ceremony. “I didn’t know you took picture of us, thoughtwe are not making a deal about it”

Hai rom rom iktaara

Hai rom rom iktaara

Jo baadalon mein seguzre

Anuj ducked his head and fidgeted with glasses, ‘cute yetsexy’ Anupamaa thought. Surprised by the bold thought she just had and hopingthat she did not think it loud as she does in front of him nowadays. “Anu, doyou want something to drink? Chai or limca? I think GK kaka has left somenimboo paani if you want that”. “Limca is fine thank you.” Although the idea of chai sounded so temptingand better choice, due to giving her excuse to stay back little bit longer thanshe needs to be here, the chai will lead to moments and feelings that shecannot handle at present.

Tu hoga zara paagal,tune mujhko hai chuna

Kaise tune ankahaa,tune ankahaa sab sunaa

Tu hoga zara paagal,tune mujhko hai chuna

When he first entered in her kichda that her life hadbecome. With kavya taking every opportunity to defame and insult her, anuj cameas a ‘johnka hawa ka’ and took her out. He had shown her that love was notmaking you look weak and stupid that Mr Shah had done but to give you enoughrespect to act and behave the way she wants to. Not question her character oreven her mistakes, had made her fall in love with him more. ‘Love’, a fourletter word that has been used by many but not felt, like she did with anuj.

Tu din sa hai, mainraat

Aa na dono milljaayein shaamon ki tarah

Anupamaa explored the living more freely, while anuj went tofetch the drinks that he offered. Touching and feeling the every corner of thespace that she soon be making her reflection, strolling her finger through thebookshelf that had taken its place in the corner. Hidden away from thelimelight and forgotten among the paintings in the room. Like she had been tillnow, a furniture that was taking the burden of all types of feelings, whetherit be tears, smile or even heartbeat but was not as valued as pictures that hadcolours but no depth or story.

But not anymore. Now she has become like fragrance that stayson the skin once applied and becomes part of the memories of that person. Isshe like this? Someone that Anuj identifies with just her smell? Hey kanha jiwhat has happened to her? ‘Anupamaa you are acting like a teenager girl whojust found out that her crush has noticed her’. Since when has she become like this

Ki aisa beparwah mannpehle to na tha

Chitthiyon ko jaisemil gaya

Jaise ik naya sapataa

Ki aisa beparwah mannpehle to na tha

“See anything youlike?” Anuj asked for third time. He had been standing in the background forlast couple of minutes. Observing how Anupamaa has been inhaling every detailof the room, which has only been used if someone comes and visits GK. But notfor Anupamaa. Things that everyone does not seem to be interested in or don’tgive importance to, she finds it more interesting and values it.

“Didn’t know that you were reader. Which one is yourfavourite?”

You. All of you. Anujthought but its not the time to say cheesy things like this. It has to wait.Few more days and when she becomes his completely than he will tell her. Tellher everything that he has been feeling and showing all the love that he hadkept for her. 26 years he waited for this moment, what two more days? Seems like thousand years. His heartspoke

“Depends on the mood im in and the memories that is hauntingme at that moment” for Anuj reading has never been about killing time andchoosing a book or novel that touches him. But is an escape route for him,which allows him to run away from the feelings and memories that have beenhunting him. Not anymore

“Oh! Thought you could have guided me in which I should readafter we get married. Oh well, might have to read all of them” Anuj grinned,like he has never done before. “Sounds like a plan but I think reading is goingto come at the bottom of my list after we get married”. Handing the drink toanupamaa and pouring himself a glass of wine, he sat down on the couch, makingspace for his future wife to join next to him.

Khaali raahein, humaankh moonde jaayein

Pahunche kahin tobewajah

The couch had two long cushions and a small one in themiddle, so anupamaa decided to sit in the middle. Keeping little distance fromher and Anuj but not so much that she misses the little reactions he does whenhe is talking to her or even when he is in her presence. Get used to it! There is more in store for you Mrs Anuj Kapadia. Aname that send shivers does her spine, but also glow like a moon that has comeout in full moon night. “So wine is only when you are staying at home?”Anupamaa asked while taking in how he drank from the glass.

“yup”. Anuj who was sitting on the other cushion, less inthe middle and bit closer to Anupamaa moved little bit more, stretching his armout so he can linger his fingers on her back slightly. “I like to have drinkonly when im on my own company, not too much but a glass or two. Depending theday and situation I have to deal with in the office. I hope you are not thatbothered with it”.

“Why should I be? I think is a good practice if only youdon’t go beyond your limit. I really admire the work you have to do and thestress you have, so if it helps you to relax than I see no issues”.

“Thank you Anu, but I hope that i won’t be needing this tohelp me release the stress but time with you would be enough” Anupamaa lostherself into the fantasy, an acknowledgement of herself in his life and theimportance he had given her, was something that she had never experienced withMr Shah. That was past and a mistake.Anuj is your present and future

Ye moh moh ke dhaage

Teri ungliyon se jauljhe

Koi Toh Toh na laage

Kis tarah girah yesuljhe

Without knowing, anuj and anupamaa both had shifted closeruntil both of their shoulders were now touching and their knees brushing. Everypart of the small contact that was made while talking about everything and yetnothing,made anupamaa go into a world that was so strange to her, yet sobeautiful. She had become like a child in the paani puri stall, who was fullyet wanted more of the spicy and tangy snack.

It was getting late, and despite of the moment that theywere enjoying, their eyes were drooping. Anuj slowly got up and took hold ofAnupamaa’s hand and led her to the bedroom, which he will be sharing with herin couple of days “Something tell me that I don’t think we both would be ableto stay awake till I drop you home. So why don’t you take the bed and I takethe couch” Just a wall between us, howwill I be able to survive this night? Should have just dropped her. Anuj, youare grown men and will be getting married to her in couple of days. Grow apair.

“Thank you” Anupamaa replied and made her way to the roomthat she has been yearning to see since she got here.

“Not a problem, I’ll just get myself a pillow and blanket. Thanthe room is all yours”

You are an amazing writer and created a beautiful episode to unfold before my minds eye. Loved every fine detail you have conjured up from the placement of cushions to the song lines and words expressed or felt.

The difference between being Mrs Shah and being Mrs Kapadia, the beverage preferred and moments spent together adds a very distinct flavour to your story telling.

Well done

Loved every bit. Pls do continue with the other parts 😊😊

Loved it! No other words for it! Please dm me when you update it x

Om my god. The scenes literally flashed in front of my eyes. Very well written 👏🏼👏🏼

Plz continue soon. Eagerly waiting!

Wow so beautiful .. respect care and communication all came thru

Thank you guys for lovely response. You all are so amazing. so here is my part 2, its little bold as i added some stuff that we will never see Anu to do but hey ho its our imagination. so why not? here we go 😉

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Anupamaa studied Anuj a beat, then walked towards the deskthat was situated in the corner of the room. The furniture apart from the deskwas less outstanding compared to the living room: there were some shayari booksput in the shelves of the room and the surfaces, which had some figurines ofmovies that they have watched in their childhood coming to the surface in back.All things that reflected the persona and love that Anuj had within himself,and it was intensely adorable. Everythingabout him is adorable

Ishq bulava aave jabaave..

Main ta kol tererehna

Main ta baitha koltere..

“Your room is nice.. Not as much as the living room but itis nice,” Anupamaa stated as she sat on the chair while looking at the deskthat was staring right back at her. “This is your corner? Which has beenmentioned by Kaka so many times?” she peeped towards Anuj now, who was nowfiddling with his glasses. A nervous mannerism of his that she has started tofall in love with more and more. Wish foronce he just takes them off and let me look into his eyes, find all the answersthat I need for my unfinished questions

“You speak about me?” Anuj asked while looking at everythingexcept Anupamaa. This made Anupamaa smile a little bit more than she should this guy is so innocent. “Of course, youour one thing that connect us and anyway shouldn’t we? Thought I should knowmore about my other half”

This time Anuj looked straight towards her and did not evenplay with anything. Stared right to her while taking slowly steps towards whereshe was sitting and knelt down. Enough that he can feel her breath on his cheekbut far enough to hear her fast heartbeat. Ifthis is madness than let it be, she wants to be mad all her life now

Tainu takda ravaan

Baaton pe teri hansdaravaan

Pagal main khud nubanaanda ravaan

Tu hansdi rave, mainhansaanda ravaan

Tenu takda ravan...

“Guess, I always thought that I would be the last person youspoke about to everyone. Also I would like to know what my other half isspeaking about, behind my back. What you say? Mrs Anupamaa Anuj Kapadia”Anupamaa didn’t know what to do with Anuj just few inches away from her. Allshe has to do is lean bit forward and her lips would touch Anuj. How does his lips feel? Soft or rough?

“You know, I’d always had dreamt of this moment and how itwould feel like if I just kissed you and never let you go” Anuj who had hisleft hand placed upon anupama’s thigh while his right hand was taking everyinch of her face, running his fingers on top of her eyes than nose to her lips.“ Wanted to always feel those soft lips on mine and have my fingers runningthrough your hair while let you moan into my mouth”

Heart squeezing with delight that was never experienced inher 25 years of marriage, Anupama leaned a little forward and cupped Anuj’swarm cheek and draw them more closer than they were. The confidence that shewas showing now by imitating the first step was very anew to her. Everythingshe now does sexually or even normal things reflects the new confidence thatshe has got. All thanks to her Anuj

Ajeeb rangaan di tuhai badi

Lage alag hi jahaandi

Ae to nazraan nazraandi gal ve

Tu vi sun le zaraa

Closing her eyes as her lips brushed over Anuj’s, a softtouch that was hinting more than a proper kiss would but also setting up the pacethat their relationship was heading towards. It was shy and questioning. Anujpressed more firmly, insistent on the assurance that the kiss was giving toAnupamaa while also giving chance for her to chase the answers that he hadgiven silently to the questions that were asked though her kiss. With slowlychasing each other back and forth in the tender kiss, playing and exploringevery part of the intimacy that was forming and relationship that wasdeveloping until Anupamaa moaned a little, making them both jump.

Main taa kol tererehna

Main taa rehna koltere...

Tainu takdi rawaan

Naina 'ch tere mainvasdi ravaan

Anuj stared at Anupamaa and squeezed her thigh again, andthen he pulled away. Her eyes was beaming, and her lips were wonderfullykiss-damp, and he was in war with himself. With her looking like a child allready to jump into the adventure that was unfolding between them, without acare what the outcome would be. All he needed was to take her towards the bedand let the chemistry which was raging between them, it would be so easy andgood to. No No you can’t do this. Youshould not do this.

“Thank you for a wonderful time Anupamaa. I don’t rememberlast time I had so much fun and cannot believe I will have this for rest of mylife in 2 days’ time” Anuj whispered. “Goodnight” kissing her forehead, hewalked out of the room

“G’night.” Anupamaa called out while the door of the roomshut and then took a deep breath. Remembering every second of what has justhappened and gaped at the closed door, her lips tingling with the essence ofwhat had just happened. The guy who a year back was just a work colleague, hadnow left his mark on her that not only left her confused but excited. The tastethat he left on her mouth was unique, just like he was

Paagal main khud nubanaunda ravaan

Tu hansdi rave, mainhansanda ravaan

Tainu takda ravaan

Ishq duaavan jaanekab aave

Ishq duaavan aave jabaave

Anuj sat on the edge of his bed, technically a sofa but itwas his bed for the night. Willing for the emotions that was erupting insidehim to chill out and his entire body which was all excited to calm down. Thisgorgeous lady who was in his home which soon will become there, was like a raretreasure that was not to be hurt in any form. The kiss that they just shared, longand tender had been the most amazing moment whichwill happen every day if he could help it. No one had touched him like thisbefore and he cannot wait it to happen over and over again. When will this two days end?

Main ta kol tererehna

Main taa baitha koltere...

Tainu takda ravaan

Baaton pe teri hansdaravaan

Pagal main khud nubanaanda rawaan

Tu hansdi rave, mainhansanda ravaan

Tenu takda rawan

Very amazing SS. Loved every bit of it. In the show such days will not come for at least a year. Sigh! 😀

Nycc Story dear Both Part Are Awesme plz continue next part soon

Beautiful tender and very romantic very much a mature lov story of people drawn by beautiful heart and mind