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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Fabulously written!

Their feelings, hopes, dreams and desires captured so perfectly!


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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Superbly written. Anuj is such a gentleman but naughty one too😀 plz continue with part b and next morning scenes. hopefully you will include some teasing by Devika, Dolly, GK or kids 😀

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Nice one. Hopefully their married life stays blissful in your story. With VanYa and Baa around, there is no telling 😀

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Nycc Part Dear I want Anuj & Anu Got married in show...plz update next part soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Heyy love it ❤️


Please update soon 🤗


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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Hope you guys like my short version

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Anuj woke up to blinding sunshine in his eyes as he rolled over to his side to cuddle the warm body that was sleeping next to him. The bed next to him was cold and empty jerking him to sit up and search around the room. Many questions popped into his head as a fear filled up in his heart.

Why was he alone? Did Anu regret what happened last night or did he disappoint her? Looking around the room that was now filled with the clothes that they had worn before their love making and found her sari still scattered all over the floor alongside some of her jewellery in the bed. This relaxed his flash of panic. Not that he doubted that Anu was the type who flee in the middle of the night without considering his feelings, but the years he had spent hoping for a day to come when he could wake up and see her first thing in the morning. Rather than wait for the hour.

The scent of chai and something sizzling in the kitchen eased him even more. He got up and making sure that he had some clothes on for the sake of GK’s eyes and heart, padded into the kitchen on bare feet. Watching the sight of GK sitting on the stool and listening to Anupamaa speak while she was cooking at his stove, making his heart beat little bit faster. This is the sight I be greeted upon every morning.

“Morning, Anu and GK,” he said before walking towards his wife and placing a small kiss on her shoulder that was little on show under her salwar kameez that she had put on.

“Good morning.” Turning around Anu gave him quick kiss on his cheek as she put the hot paratha on GK plate as he got up in rush and walked out of the kitchen. As he was walking out, he quickly gave a wink to both of them and shouted that he would be unavailable for the day. Soon as he left, Anu turned around giving him her full attention and a quick kiss. “I hope you don’t mind that I got up this early and started the chores of the kitchen. I always wake up early and now I know what time GK Kaka wakes up, I preferred to surprise you both with breakfast rather than him doing it.”

Peeking over her shoulder at a plate of parathas and a curry that was placed in the bowl. “You made my favourite paratha? Or GK’s favourites you know we both like different flavours.”

“Yes I know. This is the reason why I made you both your favourites rather than only one. But I have used all your aloo though.”

“Hmmm that’s an issue. Think you might need to pay up for that Mrs Anuj” leaning over and trailing a warm kisses across her cheeks to her neck while biting gently on her neck that ticked the spot that he remembered from last night. “Do I now? I think I know ways I can do that but now.. Help yourself to chai which I have slaved over to make you.” Taking the lead that was given to her by her husband since they have met, Anu moved away from the embrace that they were captivated in. If she would have stayed any longer in his arms with him kissing her like he was, she was certain that they would have repeated the last night again in the kitchen. God, it excited her yet made her scared. Why? She didn’t know the answer to and if she could help it did not want it to end.

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The lovely simplicity that had been played in the kitchen wasn't being unnoticed by GK who was sitting in the lounge listening to the sweet conversation and husky whispers being made. Both Anuj and Anupamaa being separated for so long had acted like they were married for many years. Cooking breakfast after spending the night together and then being greeted in the morning like they could not wait to see one another was something that was so beautiful and romantic. Like it was just a normal thing for them. Kanha ji please don’t’ ruin it

Taking his last bite out of his paratha and placing his plate on the small coffee table that was in the middle of the living room, he walked out of the flat. To meet his buddy and his daughter’s father and give him the details of the scene that just unfolded in front of his eyes. For the first time in his old life, he felt happy and assured that everything will be all fine

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Thank you for all your lovely comments and i'm so happy that you guys like my first attempt of smuttiness as i know it be no issue of me writing some more.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Such a perfect morning. Simple and sweet 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Thiss part wass the sweetest, cutest, soft(est) and the loveliest❤️Dil khush ho gya ❤️Btw, mithas se diabetes ho gyi. Hayee.

On a serious note, I really like the way your writing flows. The ambience you paint is one of simplicity and grace. Love it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Lovely Morning Such a Nyccc Part plz cont soon

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