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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hope you like third part. its way shorter than last two. thank you guys for your lovely comments xx

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“Fourty inches, GK.”

“Are you sure? Last time we went to get you a suit it was smaller than that”

“Nope. We can get a tape measure if you want to check again for last 10th time.”

“Hmmm I can think of something or someone else that can help me. Let me just give her a call”

“No, she is sleeping don’t you dare wake…” and it was cut.Anuj took a sigh and put his mobile down on the counter before getting an emoji from GK on his mobile app. Some things should not have been shown to him. Smiling a little to himself, he went over to the kitchen to make himself a cup of coffee, then check on Anupamaa and see if she would like one. Two more days and this would be her house and no more tiptoeing around her or his feelings.

The scent of coffee had attracted a sleepy Anupamaa into thekitchen, where she was greeted not only by the adoring argument between a sonand his life on the phone. But also to the cup that was now being placed infront of her. “Do you take your coffee with milk and sugar?” Anuj asked.

“I never had coffee before, it was always a chai as expected from me” she stated as she glanced outside the window. Ignoring the tears that was threatening to fall on her cheeks. Stop it, this is not what I need. Why do these memories still haunt me?

Anupamaa took the cup in her and blew across the top of her steaming mug, one of the tear that she tried so hard to hold back, streamed down on one of her cheeks. “I’m sorry, should have asked rather than assumed. Do you want me to make you chai?” Taking one of the hairs that had been stuck near her eyes and gently placing it back to where it belongs. “No, its fine I like the smell of it. It’s nice”. Anupamaa no leaning her head on his shoulder just stood beside him. Feeling every heartbeat of his and capturing herself into the sounds of it, making her whole self be aware of this wonderful man’s presence. “It just two more days left now Anu, and then it’s all over. I promise” Anuj whispered in her ear before bringing his hands around her waist and caressing her back ever so lightly. “come on no crying or I will start with my shayari,than don’t say I didn’t warn you” Anuj grinned at her, his eyes twinkling with delight as he kissed her forehead slightly causing Anupamaa to laugh on his chest and wrap her hands tightly.

“Why not? How about I make you breakfast first and then youcan recite your shayari to me as much as you like, Mr Anupamaa Kapadia”

“Sounds like a good plan Mrs Anuj Kapadia and by the way.”Anuj brushed his lips over Anupamaa’s “Good morning.” Anupamaa’s entire facelit up. She was never greeted like this beforein the morning let alone during the day “ Good morning to you, too” she reciprocated the same action by giving him quick kiss that felt so natural and not forced from her side or his. Cause this comes from the heart unlike Mr Shah who.. no not going to think of him anymore

Taking a step back and getting a breather, anupamaa walked towards the stove and started to quickly as much as she could get together her items, made quick aloo parathas for them to share, along with a nice pickle that she got out of the jar. Not everyone liked parathas, and she knew it but she also knew that Anuj loved everything that is cooked by her. Serving him his portion alongside the chai she made on the side for him, she took her portion and made her plate just next to his and ate alongside. The entire meal which was spent mostly talking and laughing alongside eating made her feel comfortable, like it was normal and she cannot wait to do this forever.

Watching anupamaa acting so natural around him, taking his hand or even brushing her feet underneath the table. Drove Anuj carzy. He loved her being here in his home, waking up to see her face first thing and sharing meals and coffee or chai with her. A lot, which was not helping him right now as before he couldn’t wait for these days to be over and now? He just wants to be with her. When will these two day send?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow such a beautiful glimpse into a second shot at love and all things beautiful.

Consent, respect are very important in a relationship

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Haye kya part tha....plz cont soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Superbly written 👏🏻👏🏻 and perfect love filled morning 😍🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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What a beautiful future you have written for them…. A promise of a better tomorrow full of love for each other 💕

Simple but pure…. It’s the little everyday things that make a difference.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful story

Love the anuj is helping anupamaa overcoming her past

Please update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you so much for your reply. You guys are the best. here is my part 4, it drags a little but trying to lead it to our MaAn love story. Quick favour have you guys know any good Bollywood song for both wedding and suhag raat as am stuck and i want to use it for next 2 parts. Please can you suggest it. Hope you like this one

xxxxx

Today was the day

I heard Mummy knocking on my bedroom door. I rubbed my eyes sleepily as I caught sight of the time and the many missed calls on my phone from Anu. Shit how I have not heard it.

“Are you up dulhe raja? You know today is the day you should be up early. You can’t be walking to your own wedding late”

“I’m up! I’m up, it’s not my fault that you got me drunk last night and did not even set my alarm up” shouting while brushing my teeth and opening the bedroom door to see Mummy wearing his pale green kurta.

“My fault? It was me who insisted to calm themselves down as they couldn’t sleep in the same bed that Anu..pamaa did couple of days ago or is it that someone couldn’t sleep due to excitement of their own wedding.” Adding with a smile on his face. The smile which I had not seen before, one that was coming straight from his heart rather than his mind.

“You know you can call her Anu if you like. Don’t have to stop doing that because of me” I walked towards him and rested my hand on his shoulder. “And definitely please don’t cry today” he didn’t answer me straightaway but just nodded his head and shrugged his shoulder, a trait that he did when he was too emotional to say something. It was a big thing for him, me and Anu getting married. When we first announced that we wanted to get married, I still remember his reaction it was slightly like this but more subtle. Maybe he was hiding his real emotions from Anu or maybe he didn’t believe that it was happening for real. Just like me, thinking that any minute she will call and say that she changed her mind or even I wake up and find this all a dream... Talking about call why did she call me so many times?

Glancing down at his phone to the missed calls left by Anu,he shifted towards the desk that was admired by her just days ago and called her. All the thoughts both positive and negative flowed through his mind. What was so urgent? Did she really didn’t want to marry him or she decided that enough was enough and be with…”Hello, Anuj Papa” coming back to the reality once again he answered Samar, who was now impatiently waiting him to respond.

“ Ha bolo” before he can even ask what was so urgent for them to call him so many times, Samar handed the phone to none other than Anu. Great now it’s happening, why is it me who always have to back down? Why can’t she see how much I love her?

“Listen, Anuj I was thinking if it’s okay that tonight we don’t leave for Mumbai and wait for it couple of days. Kinjal and Nadini wanted to take us out and go for a drink.. Tomorrow or day after.. Only if it’s okay with you” I smiled, taking a deep breath, watching myself from the mirror in the corner and relaxed while leaning on the desktop. Just a normal call nothing more. Thank god. “ up to you but I was hoping that we can start our… tonight” I quickly ran my fingers though my bedded hair and try to set it in place as much as I could before jumping in the shower. “Anuj Papa.. We are all adults and you can say honeymoon ok... its ok we plan it after you guys come back” Kinjal stated from the background, I can picture them teasing Anupamaa while speaking to me. “We have to go now, after all we have to get your bride ready who is nervous yet excited” bidding my goodbyes to them and managing to say I love you and hearing it back from Anupamaa, I ran the shower. Hot steam filling the entire bathroom, the water falling on my face washing away all the doubts that I have for today. It’s going to be good and better after this morning, as Anupamaa will be with me as my wife rather than a friend. Cannot believe how life turns around. A women that I dreamt about and only saw her as someone that I wished to have, is now going to become my reality and life partner. Thank you god.

I shut the shower off and dried myself before putting the cologne that Anu had brought for me when she proposed to me. The shy look that she had given me that day in the office with the twiddling of her fingers had indicated to me that what she wanted to say was something big for her. Something that she wasn’t sure that she could say or was it that she thought I will not appreciate it. How could she even think that? Was it how she was treated all these years in the name of love? He will show what love is really like, something that is not in the name of control or abuse but respect

Quickly fastening the buttons of the dark green kurta that I was wearing which was chosen by Anupamaa herself as it was the closest matching to her sari, I got ready. Doing the hair neatly as possible but not as much as I liked it to be, I put on the kohlawari pheta that was given by Samar to me and quickly gathered all other things that I will need. Making my way out of the flat with Mummy leading the way, we welcomed the limousine that was booked for the day. Making sure everything that Anupamaa dreamt of becoming the reality of her especially today. And for once when I was safely in the backseat I felt that I could breathe again, with my heart racing faster than ever it felt like finally I have everything that I ever wanted in life. Reading through the last message that was sent by her “Jaikrishna and I love you more than you can imagine”, my head felt lighter in knowing that in few hours I would be married to her.


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aww this is soooo nice 😍😍😍❤❤ btw u can use 'in lamhon ke daaman mein 'song from jodhaa akbar movie if u wish 🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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aww thank you guys. i will deff use that forgot that one. found taare hain baraati as its 90s and i loved the song so much

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Posted: 3 years ago
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👏🏼👏🏼 Wedding day has finally come 🥰🥰

Plz continue to update soon ❤️❤️

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