fatejo ff: love entwined with revenge at its best ch 4 updated

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Chapter 1

Index

Chapter 1 and 2 on pg 1

Chapter 3 pg 2





Haunting memories


Rohan closed his eyes and took a deep breath. It took everything within him to not grab this man standing before him by his collar and push him against a wall strangling his throat till his eyes popped out of their sockets.

He reminded himself about what he was here for. He then opened his eyes and pretended to smile. Just as he was about to speak he heard a squeal and a girl threw herself at him and gave him a bone crushing hug. Ajju veerji how are u? Do u even know how much I missed u? I am so upset with you? Uve not been picking my calls. Did u bring the chocolates I had asked u to bring for me when u had been on a trip to Amsterdam last month. I know u did as u never forget to get anything that I asked u for. As I know u love me the most even more than bhabhi. Of course I did baccha how could I forget he replied sarcastically when u had pestered me with calls while I was attending a business meeting . Without giving two hoots about the fact that u're calls would have costed me a bomb. Almost leading me to lose that contract worth millions. Had it not been for ur bhabhi who handled it at the last minute. I was doomed for life.

Watching them banter the person before him annoyingly asked as if he was jealous of their closeness. How do u know him? As Mahi was about to open her mouth to answer he quickly stepped in and exclaimed. Her best friend is my wife. Ohhh said the man as if not satisfied with his response. Mahi looked up at him questioningly and he signaled her with his eyes to remain quiet.

Before he could be bombarded with more questions that would leave him baffled. He said so mr Fateh Singh Virk the name tasted like poison in his mouth leaving behind a dangerously bitter taste, the deal is final and I will invest in ur business and academy .Hope this partnership works in favour for both the parties. He then looked at Mahi who was still clinging on to his arm and said see u tomorrow evening at the welcome back dinner party I have hosted at my house.As I've returned to my pind after years of living in Noida. See u there as well Mr fateh he said shaking hands .I'll take ur leave.

The moment he stepped out of the villa he let out a huff loosening the noose of his tie. Had he stayed there any longer he would have died of suffocation. As he walked towards his car memories of the haunting past flashed before his eyes. Memories that made him shrewd and ruthless leaving behind the ever joyful, prankster boy that he had once been.

He wheeled his car back into the driveway of his bungalow. After the meeting he had driven himself to a bar just on the outskirts of Moga. As he sat sipping his poison for the evening flashes of the fateful night that had changed his life again began surfing and plunging and soon he began travelling back down the painful Memory Lane.

2 years back .........

He was walking back home after his regular drinking sessions with his buddies. He saw her standing below a lamp post. She stood there lifeless, her dupatta lay there tattered on the ground. Her makeup was smeared, her hair all over the place. It seemed she had been crying for hours. He walked towards her worried and scared . When he got there he tried calling out to her but it seemed she was lost spaced out. He then shook her out of her trance. The moment she realized that it was him she let out a sob .Seeing her broken he engulfed her into a hug pulling her into the warmth of his arms. It killed him to see her like this. It's me it's OK cry all that u want. I'm here don't worry I'm not leaving u. He assured.

He wanted to know why and what was she doing in the middle of an abandoned street past midnight but knew it was not the right time. Now what she needed was a shoulder to cry on. He looked at the girl in his arms and his eyes welled up. He wished he could free her off all her pain.He was dying looking at her broken as pain in his chest mutilated with each passing minute. But he knew he had to be strong as at that moment the girl who meant the world to him was hurt and she needed his support . Had she not been crying in his arms he would have grabbed a sword and cut down every single person who had caused her this pain.

Why me ajju she sobbed, why is it me each fcking time. Am i so easy to fool and manipulate. Am I so vulnerable as a target that makes it so easy for everyone to make me dance to their tunes. All my life I have sacrificed my happiness and well-being just to see my family and loved ones happy but what did I get in return of my kindness betrayal and undefined hatred. I loved him so much then why did he play around with my feelings as if I was a game a mission than needed to be conquered and won. She fell unconscious proclaiming her love for a man who was not even worth it. He knew there was more to the story but now she laid there passed out in his arms so he picked her up in his arms and began walking back towards his house.

As he walked back with each step he swore and made a promise to the girl he loved and to himself that he would make them all pay and would make them shed blood for every teardrop that had escaped her eyes. That was what he was back for and had intended to do ever since that fateful night. Only then would he be able live in peace knowing he had hunted down each of her perpatrators.


To be continued........

Next chapter will be posted tomorrow till then enjoy. I have a request how do I post the next part on the next page instead of creating a entire new topic each time. The content is not mature as of yet but once it does get mature I'll place a warning.

I am new to writing on forums so I don't know how to do that. If anybody could help please reply.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Love it so far! Very intriguing concept. Looking forward to reading more.

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Oooh this is amazing...continue soon!

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Yes I'm posting a chapter in a few hours so don't worry. U won't have to wait long. As I am currently in a good head place because of the current track, there is alot angry and frustration in me which is motivating me to write so I'll probably post two or more chapters today.

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love it. excited to read next part

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Chapter 2


He walked into the house to be greeted with darkness and silence. I guess she is asleep he whispered as he tiptoed into the bedroom. He quickly stepped into the shower to grab himself a moment of peace before he began to strategize and plan for the next day. After a hot shower he decided to go to the kitchen to make himself a cup of coffee. Just as he was about to make coffee he suddenly felt a hand at the small of his back .He smiled turning around and said I thought u'd be asleep .

Oh really she said how can I sleep knowing that u 've not eaten yet .Wait let me quickly fix u something . Oh God she and her obsession with food he muttered under his breathe. Did u say something? she asked as she stood there making a cheese sandwich for him .

Nothing sweetheart just recalling how hectic my day was. Hmm she responded knowing that he was lying but decided not to press any further. Here u go she said as she passed him a plate of sandwiches, quickly giving him a peck on his lips before heading of to bed.

He looked on at her as she headed of to bed. They had come a long way since that fateful night. They didn't have a "normal" relationship . They teased each other,play hit each other ,they called each other names but underneath that anybody could see how much they cared because if u listened closely every joking shut up had a hidden I love u inside it.

He wondered what are the chances u would ever meet someone like that ? Someone who u could love forever and someone who loved u back? He knew she loved him, loved him with every cell and dripping pore in her body but he also knew that a part of her was lost in her past, a part so badly wounded that despite the love and care he gave she could never truly heal.

He wished he had confessed earlier, he wished he had not given up so early thinking she was happy in that sham of a marriage. Just how he wished but despite wanting to he could never go back in time and change the wrongdoings.

He had always loved her, even when they were kids barely old enough to decide what they wanted from life. He had moved to Noida with his parents right after school in the hope that one day he would come back worthy enough to ask for her hand. The day did come when he felt he could go profess his love only to come back and realize She had been wedded of to some boxer.

He had been shattered broken devastated cursing the heavens . But he knew he had lost sacrificing his God damn soul in a battle that was never his to begin with. It took him days to be able to stand up again. To be able coax himself to breathe freely again. Telling himself it was never meant to be. Despite all that he tried his heart never really truly gave up. There would still be days when he would for no specific reason at all think about her and what she might be doing. Wondering what she might be thinking at that exact moment at that exact second....

Sometimes he dared to hope that she was thinking of him too. That somehow -in someway they were connected to eachother by nothing more than if not may the thought alone, and that though he might never know for certain if that connection was for real or imagined what he knew for real without question was the overwhelming love he felt for her.

Their love was unlike others different if not unique in itself. Love they had failed to recognize and profess , love they thought ceased to exist, believeing it to be mere affection .Leading them to becoming one brought together by destiny if not by choice in the most faltering conditions.

He picked his plate and placed it in the sink after he finished. As he switched the lights off and was about to walk towards his bedroom that he received a call from an unknown number. He picked it up knowing who it was and said just coming right there and headed out with his cars keys in hand.


To be continued

Chapter 3 on its way. Will post at the latest in the afternoon.

Pls I request again could somebody tell me how to post a chapter on the next page instead of creating a entire new topic each time, which will make it easier for everyone else to access. If there is anybody who can help plz drop in a message.

Thanks in advance.

Edited by Shraddha6789 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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You can post in the same thread. Just edit the title when you update latest chapter and add page no to it.


On Topic- This is nice FF, something different then the usual. Looking forward to next update.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome Story 👏👏👏👏

Loved it 😍😘😍😘


P.S. You can post a new chapter on the same thread by clicking on the "REPLY" button on the upper left corner.


After this you can update the name of the thread too by editing it.


You can edit the first part to add index of the further parts.


If you have any doubts please feel free to ask....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

Yes I'm posting a chapter in a few hours so don't worry. U won't have to wait long. As I am currently in a good head place because of the current track, there is alot angry and frustration in me which is motivating me to write so I'll probably post two or more chapters today.


Have you made a different topic? You can click on the green button that says 'reply' and then post on the same topic again.

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Amazing! continue soon...in the topic you created for the first part I have included instructions for you to be able to post in the same topic again.

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