fatejo ff: love entwined with revenge at its best ch 4 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yes I'm working on it I was to post it in the afternoon . I had it in mind to post two more at least but ended up running errands bcaz of a family emergency so I'll post in 2 hours at Max if not then tomorrow morning.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is just wow! I for one am definitely glad to read something different than Fatejo. Tejo is undoubtedly the IF's favourite character. And you definitely did justice to that. I for one surely know she could have made her marriage work with any guy. And somehow even in our fanfictions, with Fateh there's Jasmine tagging along. So your fanfiction was definitely a refreshing one. And your writing style is the cherry on the top. I can already say for sure I am gonna keep coming back to your Fanfiction and reread it a 1000 times. Great going! Hoping for more fanfictions to come from you.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks alot it means alot. I won't disappoint u. I'm posting another chapter in probably an hour.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

Thanks alot it means alot. I won't disappoint u. I'm posting another chapter in probably an hour.

You better upload it. Coz now I am gonna keep checking when you post another chapter simultaneously while I do my work.😂😂😂


btw do you have a wattpad account? If you do please share this fanfiction there as well.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chapter 3


She had seen him walking out of the house through the window and wondered where he was going . She hoped he was not in some kind of trouble. Ever since they had come back to Moga he had been acting weird. She knew this place did not hold many good memories none that had not been washed away by her haunting past .She felt scared to be breathing in the same air where ghosts of her past had been buried but she knew no matter what she couldnt give in to the demons that wanted to hold her back. she had to stay strong if not for herself for him at least. The man who had gathered her broken pieces and put them together and had had left imprints of soft kisses on her wounded soul but somewhere in the process of helping her he had lost himself. Gone was the Rohan who always had a smile and a notorious twinkle in his eyes. Who knew just how to woo people and spread positivity all around. Today what was left behind was only an faltering image of his old self.

The bond they shared had been special. He had been her safe haven. The place she had called home but his departure had torn them apart .She had begged him not to go to stay by her side but he said he needed to go only to return to be worthy of her hand. He promised to be back. She hoped her wait wouldn't be long. She had cried for days after he left , counting days till his return. But with time her wait turned into resentment and her love into hatred. She believed he had failed to keep his word. For that she refused to forgive and punished herself for believing a foolish childhood desire could ever come true.

How she wished she could have held on not losing hope and had fought for what she believed was hers. Had she done that today their story would have been different with them not so broken.

Even though she believed she had moved on her heart always reminded her of what she had lost. She wondered how two people could be so desperately in love even when they had not spoken or seen each other for years. It was incredible how despite the distance their love remained.

She had learnt alot in these past few years ,leant that things don't turn out the way u planned or the way u think they should. She had learnt that not all broken pieces could be picked or put together the way they were before. She had learnt that somethings remained broken.She learnt that u get through the bad times hoping for the better ones.She knew all that u needed to move ahead was that one helping hand.

Broken and shattered she had learnt to getup and fly. To live to soar again in the crystal clear sky.

She had failed once at not choosing him and had lost him only to be brought back at a point where she had almost died but now that she had him she had chosen to be wise. This time she hadn't fallen in love with him but had walked into love with him. With her eyes open, choosing to take every step along the way.

She did believe in fate and destiny but also believed that u are fated only to do things u would choose anyway.And now that she had chosen him she would choose him and only him in a hundred lifetimes ,a hundred worlds , in any versions of reality ,she would find him and choose him and make him hers.


Chapter 4 to be updated tomorrow.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yes I do but havenot posted anything there just a reader. I'll post there once my exams are over until then I'll continue posting one chapter at least on IF every day.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Gosh! This was so beautiful. I can’t wait to read the other parts of this🥺♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I'm posting a chapter in a few hours don't worry but before that I'm going to post an os about amrik and khushbeer singh virk. I have already completed the fourth chapter but like the suspense to remain so that it becomes more intriguing....hope ur in for a roller coaster ride the journey has just begun.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it! Can't wait for the next part!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chapter 4

He whizzed through the empty streets , harsh winds blowing with trees trembling. Dogs howled as if to announce the arrival of a storm unknown, he hissed in annoyance as his car almost skittered down the slick road. He wondered if the path he was about to take would it unravel the knots of the hounding ghosts of the past. Where there more grey streaks to it then he had viewed. Would he be at peace if he had his revenge or would he dive deeper into the sucking pit.

He took a deep breath and decided it didn't matter even if it meant digging his own grave for he was ready to travel the extra miles for revenge.

As he reached his destination he stepped out of his car walking into an abandoned bungalow that had once belonged to his maternal grandfather. He entered the house to be greeted with a bat screeching by as it flew out the door. God this place he muttered. He then looked around for a place to sit not that there was any as the house had been locked for years because of which it was no longer a place for humans to stay without getting suffocated because of the pungent smell of wet furniture and chipped walls. He wondered if the ceiling was leaking as a drop of water fell on his cheek. The air was filled with dust making it difficult to breathe just then he heard muffled voices at the door . He turned around and walked towards the switch board hoping there was at least one functioning tubelight.

Thank God he said as there was one tube light that still worked even though it kept flickering every few seconds. This will do he said. Rohan are u there ? called out the voices at the door, coming he responded as he rushed towards the door not wanting to keep them waiting out in the cold. As he opened the door there stood two men covered head to toe with scarfs and jackets. U didn't have to cover-up so much u know even a small mask would have done ur job. Trust this idiot on making things awkward. I told him it wasn't necessary but as if he listens sneered the taller one. Oh please said the younger one in a raspy voice brushing Rohan aside as he walked in its not everyday that u get to play a spy. Stop it and get inside its too cold outside. He closed the door as both got in not wanting the cold breeze to enter the house.

So did u get the documents I asked u Amrik? oh yes here they are he said as he handed over the papers to Rohan. Good I'll check them when I get home. Abhiraaj I hope nobody knows ur here oh no they think I'm over at my friends house good and u Amrik don't worry they think I'm partying at some club not that they care. But what's ur plan ahead what do u plan to do with these papers . Nothing as off now let me go through them first. Till then I'll keep ur brother hanging around believing I'm the new investor who'll save his business and academy from dipping. I need to win his trust before I play my next move so till then I have to play cool. So what about the party oh that will obviously take place. I want to enjoy the look on his face when he finds out that the person he and his family wanted dead is alive. It's time to bring the virk empire down and sling mud on the sandhus political career. I didn't wish to do this but they have left me with no option. Its not going to be easy Rohan, I don't care I don't do easy anyway ,for Tejo I'll rattle the doors of hell if I have too. I can't forget her state that night I almost lost her and for that they must all pay. His eyes darkened with anger and hatred as the lighting stroke taking him back in time to the place where his life drastically changed. What exactly happened that night u never really told us beyond where u found her. Listen if u must and he began the tale of betrayal.... To be continued in the next part.


Chapter 5 will be updated tomorrow . This chapter isnt that great I wrote it in a hurry as I accidentally deleted my original piece.

Edited by Shraddha6789 - 4 years ago

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