FF-Hate 2 Luv U finale pg27 28/7/08 updat

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 17 years ago

Guys I Loved all your FF's and thought i would write one of my own. Hope you enjoy it

Introduction

Ranbir has just turned 30 years old and come back from America after 8 years living abroad building his business empire across the globe. He has no siblings and loves his mother and she visites him in America as he can't stand India. Family members same as in the show.

Kanya is 21 and just finished university and looking for employment. Family members same as in the show.

Part 1

(Ranbir on the phone with his Mum)

R-Hello Mum(Scared his mum is going to ask him to get married again she's always on his case)

M-Hello Beta! Tumhara Birthday ek hafte baad hain aur mein chahti hu ke tum humare saath celebrate karo. Tum India mein apne parivaar ke saath. Ira aur Ayaan bohut excited hain.

R-Mum ap jante hain ke mein India mein nahin ja sakta mujhe bohot kaam hain aur mein Birthday waha nahin celebrate karunga. America mein plans hain. Aap ke liye Plain tickets mein Bejungi aap yaha pe ajaiye.

M-Tumhe yaha aana hi hogi warna mein kuch karjaungi. Tum aat saal se America ho aur India mein sirf saal mein theen din ke liye aate ho. India ke business ko tune apne bhai ko manger banakar chala gaya.

R-Mum aap kucch nahin karenge.

M-Mein Tujse pichle chaar saal se keh rahi hu ke mujhe ek Pyaari si Bahu chahiye tu maanta nahin. Aur ek baar India mein aane keliye keh rahi hoon aur tu meri baath ko nahin maantha. Kya tu apni Maa ka kayal bhi nahin. Itna Kator hain? Tuje laad se paala hain meine meri hi dosh hain. Sirf Ek baar yaha tuje aana hi parega.

R-Mom mein nahin aa sakta. U know that. Mere millions ke sawaal hain. Ek deal hamara karobaar ke liye do million dollars finalze karne jaraha hu. Please Mom aap samaj lijiye. Mein ek mahine baad aajata hu sirf aap ke liye. Ok.

M-Agar mein maar jaungi tab aana na ek mahine baad. Maa ki kayal nahin tuje. Meri koi kayal nahin karta.(Starts crying)

R-Ok baba. Mein apna diary mein sab kuch reschedule karna parega. Aap rhona mat. Bye mom. Luv you.

M-Luv you beta.

Ranbir is thinking great.Mom bhi na. I have to inform my partners Akash, Tom and Katrina. they can handle the business and has full trust in their capabilities but i have always been part of every deal we have closed. I've spent 2 months with my partners pitching an ad campaign for our fashion range for men.

Ranbir gets the first plane out of America to India the next day dreading whats to come. Probably more of the same. When are you getting married. Waha koi ladki mili kya? Same questions. Same answers. Truth be told Ranbir has no time for Love or romance. The idea of settling down is just too much and that too with just one woman. Ranbir is into fun. Partying. The fast life. Women were just flings. He had no time for anything else

Hope you guys enjoyed it so far. Tell me if u like it or not. Plus apologies for my bad hindi.

Edited by matwamango - 16 years ago

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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 17 years ago

woohoo first to comment 😃 great intro 👏 your FF seems really interesting
please continue soon 😊

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Kiran

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Posted: 17 years ago

Nice start
The story is good and seems interesting
Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooon

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farah sharmin

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey gr8 start...do continue soon 😃 😃 😃

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salma

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Posted: 17 years ago

its so good plz update it soon!!!

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Raina

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Posted: 17 years ago

omg gr8 start
good luck
and cont soon!!!
sounds interesting! 😉

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Fatemah

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Posted: 17 years ago

sounds interesting... pls continue soon

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

I will try to update 2morro

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Zaara

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Posted: 17 years ago

hmmmmmmmmmm interesting. Just one question did Ranuu leave to america when he was 22? Kool! Continue soon yaar cant wait! 😉

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Part 2

Ranbir arrives at the airport to get his luggage. He didn't tell his mom he was coming to give her a surprize but he didn't have a car waiting for him so he will have to taxi it. On his way out he looks for a taxi stand and walks towards it when out of nowhere a big bang. Someone just bumped into him. He sees it's a girl and all her paper is on the floor.

K-Sorry. I'm really sorry. mein bas jaldi mein thi. Aapko laga to nahin.

Kanya starts to pick up her C.v. Ranbir just stares at her.

R-Next time dekh ke chalo andhe ho kya? Mera suit karaab kardiya

K-Meine sorry kaha na. Muje time nahin hain. Mujhe dher horahi hain. Next time mein dekh ke chalungi. Muje taxi mein jaana hain. Woh mere liye wait Kar rahi hain.

R-Oy miss whatever this car is mine. Yeh maine pehle dekha hain. I'm going in it.

K-look mujhe bhes karne keliye time nahin. Please i am running late. Interview keliye. Please aap doosre taxi lelijiye.

R-Tum pehle mere saath takkar ka the ho aur phir yeh keh te ho please mujhe yeh taxi de do. Yeh kaise batamezi hain. Do you know who i am . I am Ranbir Nanda. Aur mujhe yeh pasand nahin ke tum mere saath mere time barbaad kar rahe ho. Get out of my way. Hatto. Tum jaise ladkiyo ko jaanthi hu. Mere pocket to mara nahin. Haath dikha mujhe.

K-Tum kaise insaan ho. Mujhe gussa math dilao. Fine tum yeh taxi mein jao. mein waisa bhi late ho chukki hoon. Aur yeh job bhi gaya. Kaunsi manhoos chehra dhekliya hain maine. Agli baar kya main dua karti hoon tumhe khabhi na dekho. You jaanwar. Itna bethameez aadmi khabi dekhi nahin maine.

R-Who do you think you are? Shayad tumne suna nahin. main Ranbir Nanda hoon. Mere keh ne se main yeh taxi stand kya tumhe bhi kareed saktha hoon. Do kori ki ladki. Tum mujhe insult karte ho. Dekh loonga tumhe.

K-Look Mr ranbir Nanda or jo bhi ho mujhe tumse koi interest nahin. Tumhe taxi milgayi to jao na. Mere bheja kyun ka the ho. Ladki ke saath kaise baath karte hain seekh ke ao. Tum mujhe dekho ge kya. Mein tumhe dekhloongi. Tumhara shakal kabhi mat dhikana. Taxi ke liye yeh lo dus rupees. Aur pocket check karna. Phir yeh mat keh na ke maine tumhara pocket mara. Bye.

Kanya walks off really angry Ranbir Nanda. What a guy. No manners. Hope i never see that guy. Yeh job to gaye thees minue late. Doosri job doond ne paregi mujhe. Kya karu.

Ranbir stares at the girl. No manners. Down market people. Just for one taxi. I will see her and make sure she pays for this. Ranbir takes the taxi and heads towards the Nanda Mansion. Well here goes nothing.

Ranbir comes in. R-Guess who's here?

Ira-Chachu yay. Tum yaha.we thought at least another day. But i'm so happy you made it. Main tumse baath nahin karti agar tum na aate.

A-Hi Chachu so you finally made it. Your mum was very upset with you. she'll be made up now.

R-Where is mom?

A-Woh mandhir mein pooja kar rahi hain.

R-Ok mein fresh ho ke aata hoon. I'm a complete mess.

Ira-You look fine. Maybe thora mad but you look good.

R-You don't know what i've been through. I met a paagal bhilli aur usne mujhe chua hain. i need a wash. God knows what germs and bacteria she was carrying. the thought is amking me feel sick.Ranbir thinks about that girl and is really fuming. If i ever see her. So God help her.

Ranbir takes a shower and gets into his designer clothes he's bought from the USA. He also got out loads of goodies for his nephews and nieces. For his mom be bought her a nice cashmere shawl by Stella McCartney

Ranbir gets everything down Ira and Eva got some Ruby earrings. Ayaan, Shlok and Arth got designer sunglasses Gucci.

Eva-Thanks Chachu. So my colour.

S-Looking good. Thanks C.

A-Thankx.

M-Hi beta. You finally come. Ab tum pura Do mahine yaha rahoge humare saath. No Ifs and no buts.

R-R-Mein tho sirf Ek mahine chutti leke aya hu aur aap. This is not done. Muje bohot kaam hain. Woh mera business partner Akash, Tom aur katrina bura lagega. Naya deal sign ishi hafte karne parega woh be fax se.

M-Dekho Beta tum mere ek lauta aulad ho aur your turning thirty. A big mile stone. Mein chahti hoon ke tu family ke saath accha tharike se rahe. Aur India ke business ko sambhal. it's making a lot of loss. Tera Ek bhai Aditya hain apne duniya mein. Aur woh Sidharth apne biwi ko chod de rakhi hain aur khud kya ideas nikaal tha hain. Ek ke baad ek. Main bhi office mein nahin jaa sakthi kyunke mein Business ki abcd nahin jaanthi. Ayaan has only finished his degree but he needs to be shown the ropes. So tum une sikaoge.

R-Ok mom. Mujhe apne partners ke saath kuch batein karne do.

Ranbir calls his partners and they are all fine. So long as everything gets faxed on time. Akash told him finally we et some lions share of the work.. Katrina was little angry.

Kanya goes home really depressed. with a newspaper in her hand and starts looking for more jobs.

P-Kanya tuje kaam mili kya?Looks at Kanya and sees she is upset.
P-Don't worry. Aise kaam miljayegi. Thori intezaar kar. Dekhna ek din tu malkin banegi apne business ki aur sab ko hukum karegi. Hosla rakh. Ok aur rhona math.

K-Thanx D. Aaj mujhe ek jangli jaanwar mili thi aur he was so mean. Aur mujhe late kardiya. Aap jaante hain Ke employers apne time bohut keemti maangte hain. Aggar mein late jaati tho woh waise bhi kaam nahin dete. Mein kal ki paper check karungi.

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