FF-Hate 2 Luv U finale pg27 28/7/08 updat - Page 18

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome update! that was interesting!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Nice update. Hopefully archie becomes alright. You really are amazing writer. All your ffs have different ideas and they are coming up beautifully. Now update your Estranged love and my fav ff Accidental marriage

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Posted: 17 years ago
This story will be wrapping up today. I know i haven't given any warnings but i like ending my FF on a high rather than dragging them. This will go in 6 months frwards after the preview so we know what is happening later on with Archie and Kanya Ranbir.
Heres a preview
Archie and Aditya go to AA meetings for their meetings with their problems with Alcohol and drug abuse. Kanya goes with them occasionally. She also let split about how this strange guy came to see Archie accidently. So Ranbir and his friends had the guy tracked down using FBI agents and had the guy locked up. Archie got wind of it but understood where Kanya was coming from. Over the weeks Archie began liking her sister-in-law.
Aditya bhaiya did all the chores for KAnya like if she ever craved for anything he'd get it for her. Archie made sure Kanya was at ease. While Ranbir wanted to spend all his time with Kanya which was romantic and annoying at the same time. He wouldn't leave her alone for 1 minute so she banned him during the week days to stay in the office and get work done.
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Posted: 17 years ago

great scene

yaar can u make it longer plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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continue
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soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Finale part 31

Ranbir and Kanya in India 6 months later

Kanya and Ranbir arrived in India with their 4 month old baby boys Rajveer and Ramveer who were born 2 months premature. They went Back to the Nanda house to see their family and decided to settle in India so that Kanya was never alone. Ranbir didn't like to see his jaan lonely as she only ever spent most her time with Archita and the babies. She never complained but he knew she was homesick. Ranbir too missed his crazy Big D and Mom as they were always on his case. He also missed all his nephews not so much his nieces as they knew how to tease him.

Malika was content seeing her grand children. She was dying to see them and couldn't bear to be away from them for more than a minute. Ranbir almost felt like his babies weren't his but his mothers as Kanya barely got a look in with all his nephews and nieces fighting over the babies but he loved the smile it brought on Kanyas face. He loved seeing the joy and wished she was more happy in America but he was permanently settled here while America side of business was being dealt by Tom and Kat. Kanya and Kat still didn't see eye to eye and moving away was good for all involved as Kat was nothing but trouble. She'd finally moved on with her life.

Pammi and Anand were regular visitors at the Nanda residence. Kanya loved being back. She loved the fact that Harry and Adita were all here for the new members of the family. Kanya looked at her mad but perfect family. She bever dreamt she'd be living like a princess with the man of her dreams and have such loving family to go with it. She was truly lucky and knew wherever Pooja Di was she was guarding her baby sister ad always with her. Archita had gotten over her addiction to drugs with the help of Ranbir. Rest of the family still didn't know about it and that was the way Ranbir wanted it. Akash was moving on with his life with Archita.

I-Chachi mujhe baby chahiye. Eva deti nahin.

E-Go 2 Big D and get Raj. I'm not letting go of Ram.

I-Woh deti nahin

E-Don't ask me then.

Shlok-Banje humare bhi hain. When do we get a chance.

Ayaan-Chachu apne aur 2 kyun nahin laye.

R-Jake Shanaya ki saath koi romance kar phir tere bhi ghar main chand niklega.

Shanaya-Ha Ayaan mujhe bhi ek pyare se bache chahiye. Kab laoge

Ayaan-Shut up Shanaya tumhara bakwaas phirse shuru hogaya.

Shanaya-Yeh bakwaas nahin Ayaan. Mujhe Chahiye.

Ayaan-Main jara ha hoon. Tumhare saath bache. Forget it tumse bari bachi aur kaun ho sakhta hain.

Shanaya-Main mumma se kahungi. (Cries frantically)

Big D-Oy Khote usse rulati kyun hain? Shanaya tub hi rhona band kar warna bache tujhse darke mare rho parenge. Tere rhona se hum sab khab thak bhagenge.

Rewa-Shanaya darling tum upar jao. Ayaan go make up with her or take her outside.

Ayaan-Sorry Mom i'm not on a suicide mission. I've got business to attend. Bye.

Adi-Its like we've never been away.

R-I know.

K-So good na. Tumhe kuch news dena hain Ranbir.

R-We need good news. Batao kya hain?

K-Sabke samne nahin

R-OK Kanya hum upar jate hain.

K-Abhi nahin. Raat ko.

R-Acha to madam ko romance karna hain. Abhi bhi kar sakhte hain. Yeh bache to humain disturb hi nahin karte. Mom aur Big D jo unhe adopt kardi hain.

K-Tum kush ho na?

R-Kanya jaha tum waha main.

K-Waha main waha tum! Mere lines churate ho. Koi realistic lines ate nahin kya jo tumne socha.

R-Haina par sabhi ko filmo main dekha hain maine.

K-Mere liye kuch nahin keh sakhte?

R-Aditya bhaiya se poochna hoga.

K-To mujhe romance karne keliye tumhara bhai ko kahoge tumhe kya kahe?

R-Raat ko kehta hoon na. Thori sochne ka maoka to do.

K-Lines churane ka. Fine dediya. Sab ek saath dekh kar main bohut kush hoon.

R-Jann i can tell. Tumhari chehra saaf saaf keh raha hain. Isi Hassi ko maine bohut miss kiya.

K-Main to roz hasti hoon.

R-Woh hassi mere liye thi. Yeh kushi sabko dekhne main hain. Tumhe Raj aur Ram ko miss Kar rahi ho?

K-A little bit main unhe goad me khane keliye le thi hoon tho phir unhe sulane ko. Atleast humare baby sitters ki kami nahin.

R-We need to get a place of our own.

K-Nahin Ranbir its good sab ek saath. Achi hain. In dono ne dekho Rewa ko thori phigladi. Astha bhabie ko nahin but they all love them.

R-U really R my angel. Kanya the day U came in my ife is when my life really began. The day Raj and Ram were born were the happiest moments in my life as they R a part of U and me. Our love created these miracles. When they were in the hospital their tiny hands holding mine i felt my heart in them.

K-I see tumne romance yaha kehne shuru kardi. Dekha mann laga ke socho to phir kuch bhi ahsaan hain.

R-Mrs Nanda tumhe romance karne keliye mujhe sochne ki zaroori nahin.

K-Mere saand ko gussa araha hain.

R-Tum mujhe saand nahin keh sakhte. Mere wazan dekho in bacho ne kam karwadi.

K-Tumhe kush hona chahiye. At least tu ye jaan sako g eke main kisi handsome muscular aadmi ke saath bhag nahin jaongi as tumne mere liye fit rehne ki taan li hain.

R-Uski saza tumhe dene parenge chipkali.

Pammi, Anand Big D and the rest of the family laugh at Kanya and Ranbirs playfight. It reminded them of how they first got together.

Big D-Ranbir puttar tu Raj ke nappy badal de.

R-Big D yeh sab ap karo. Mujhe meeting pe jana hain.

Big D-Khote tere beta ki nappy tu nahin badlega to phir Kanya kya karegi. Usne 7 months ke baad janam diya usse rest ki zaroorat hain.

R-Joke tha Big D. Kartha hoona.

K-Have fun jaan.

R-Mere madad to karke jao.

K-Madad i think not main dekungi kaise karte ho tum.

Ranbir attempted the nappy changing with little success. His nephews were having a field day. He tried putting on 6 nappies and kept on messing the sticky part. He finally put the 7th one on but the nappy came off and little Raj peed on his Dad. Ranbir put the next one on with Kanya helping him a little. Ranbir in revenge started wiping the pee on his nephews. They all ended up going to the bathroom taking showers.

R-Kanya ki bachi bohut hassi arahi hain.

K-Tum to joker hi rahoge. Lagtha hain tumhare bache bhi tumhe aise nachayenge.

R-Mujhe koi nahin nacha saktha got it. Aur raha bache ki well Akir bache mere hi haina mujhe nahin nachayenge to auro ko kya karenge. They need practice so start with the master. Tumne to mujhe pehle se nachakar paagal kardi. Tum mujhe kuch batana chahte ten a.

K-Raat ko.

R-Well 8pm ho chuki hain batao na.

K-Nahin.

R-To phir main tumhe chodne wala nahin.

Ranbir chases Kanya around their bedroom until he grabs hold of Kanyas dupatta and swirls her around and has her trapped against the wall. He kisses Kanyas face from top to bottom. He starts kissing Kanyas mouth with force. She responds with the same passion. He breaks off the kiss and tells her to tell him now. She refuse so he turns on the heat and really goes in for the kill. He carries on kissing her with Kanya giving in as much as she's got. Ranbir takes her the bed and kisses her until he notices Kanya holding her stomach. Kanya used to do that alot with the twins. Ranbir kisses her there and Kanya looks at Ranbir.

K-Tumhe batao kya? Tumhe do bache hain.

R-Tum dobara ma banne wali ho.

K-Well i was getting broody again and everyone loves Raj and Ram i thought why not. This time sab hain and i want this baby Ranbir.

R-This time no drama everything will be perfect. U know humme romance karne ki koi chance nahin milne wala. Par Babysitters ke waja se hum time bohut spend karsakhte hain.

K-Ranbir i don't want anyone to know yet. Its early stages and i want at least 2 months to go before we tell the family. To be safe.

R-Kanya whatever U want but iske baad no more. Mujhe sirf tum aur in teeno chahiye.

K-Well thats too bad mujhe aur do chahiye.

R-Compromise kardenge.

K-U know I will win.

R-Lets see what Raj amd Ram R upto. Archie was holding the baby last time i checked.

K-Looks like Mamma and Pappa ko thori aur intezar karna parega.

R-Kanya mera jaan I love U.

K-Ranbir I love U too.

They lived happily ever after The End.

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Posted: 17 years ago

wonderful ending👏

luved the ending
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Posted: 17 years ago
Cute ending
The ff was gr8
Continue writing
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Posted: 17 years ago
wah rahima ky aending tha.. i luv the romance yaar!
this made my day!
tankyu..!
ur an excellent writer and keep it up!
i want the other updated now!
and once again brill ending!
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG awsome end it was reli good once again BRAVO!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Good Job. Great ending to the ff. But yeh kya you didn't update my fav ff Accidental marriage. Please update that ff soon. I am really loving your Estranged love ff too.

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