FF-Hate 2 Luv U finale pg27 28/7/08 updat - Page 5

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omg yaar y would u leave us hanging like that! Continue soon!
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Part 8

After an hour upstairs with Ira kanya got herself cleaned up. Ira got out one of her Sexy outfits for Kanya to wear. Kanya is still a little shaken up but Ira tells her not to let the girls get to her.


K-I can't wear this Ira. It's kind of you but i will be ok. I wasn't upto coming to this party anyway.


Ira-Look Kanya it's not your fault woh ladkiya tumse jaldte hain. Tumhe bahar jaana hain aur sabko dikao that you are not bothered by it all and at the end of the day you have a right to be here just like everyone else here.

K-You're so sweet. You're just like my Di Pooja. She always knows what to say to cheer me up.

I-Now you said i remind you of your sister then we shake on being friends and as my new friend i want you to try this outfit on and knock everyone for six. Especially my Chachu.

http://www.caynboutique.com/product_info.php?products_id=203

(The outfit is sexy and classy but not too revealing)

K-Ira i don't like your Chachu. He's too controlling and very strict and has a temper that sits on his nose.

I-For someone that doesn't like Chachu you're very defensive anyway come lets go down.

Kanya and Ira come down and some of the guys were in awe of the vision before them kanya in her beautiful outfit that Ira gave her. One person that was taken back was Ranbir who couldn't take his eyes off Kanya. Ira prodded kanya showing her to glance towards Ranbir and was happy at the response she got from him until she saw Kat lingering around him which made her frown.


I-Kanya don't look at Kat she has a tendency to be so clingy. Notice how Chachu is still looking at you. Now go to him and show him who has who round their finger. Act now Kanya.

K-Ira tum bhi na. I told you mein tumhar....... Do you really think he likes me. He doesn't seem to be fazed at all sometimes.

I-Kid yourself all you like but Chachu is a sought after bachelor aur unki nazaar tumpe hain act on your feeling warna tum kabhie khushi se jhi nahin sakho ge. Trust me. Chachu needs a good girl jo unko pyar karna sikha sakte hain. Trust me. mein niece hu unki. Chachu thore bhuddu hain ladkiyon ke department mein. America mein woh rehke jo aye hain. Is desh ki ladkiya thora hadke hain seekh jayenge. Tum sikhaogi Kanya. Ab jao.

Meanwhile Ranbir still too busy staring with Kat beside him and Akash.

A-Kat you are needed by Tom at the bar. Go quick you know he doesn't like waiting.

Katrina goes away telling Ranbir she'll be right back.

A-Ranbir. Earth calling Ranbir. Hello. Koi jawab nahin dehta. Its rude to stare yaar. I know Kanya is looking a million dollars but its your Birthday and you haven't danced with Kanya or even said two decent words to her.

R-Sorry Yaar. I kinda got lost.

A-I can see that. Dekh agar tu nahin jaata to tikh hain. Main uski saath dance karta hoon. Before is party ke saare ladke uski paas chale jaaye.

R-No tum nahin jaoge. Koi nahin jaega. Mein sabki haath thor dunga.

A-Tum nahin jaoge. Mein nahin jaonga. Sabke haath kat loge par Kanya ko bhuri lagega agar tumne ehsa kuch kiya. Luck tumhara chakkar kya hain. Maine Kanya ko kahata aur usne kaha ke tum sirf uska boss ho. So i thought mein tumhe bata dunga aur agar tumne yeh jawab di ke tumhara beech kuch nahin to mein geya uske paas ek date ke liye.

R-Look i don't know what i feel. Ok. Har ladki mere liye ek passing fling hain but Kanya. She's different. Mein uski feelings ke saath you know i respect her too much.

A-Tum jaate ho ya mein. Look if i don't go kitne mardo se lado get um. Look one of them is already heading towards Kanya.

R-Fine i will go asks her to dance with me after we get the cake cut. Happy.

Finally the cake is there in the middle of the huge hall. Ranbir closes his eyes and thinks of Kanya and blows the candles out. He cuts the cake. He feeds Big D, his Mom Malika, Ayaan, Aditya bhaiya who is heavily drunk and just muttering things that aren't making sense and to the rest of his family. He goes towards Kanya and gives her a piece. Ranbir makes a speech.

R-Hi guys i am glad you could all make it to my party. I want to thank my family without them i don't know what i would have done. I love you guys dearly. I know i get a little too crazy at times with what i do and say and might not show it to you but I love you guys. Thats enough Mushy feelings for me but i thought you guys should know that. To everyone else i am not soft ok. I AM RANBIR NANDA. In meetings and other events you will see the serious guy that takes nonsense from nobdy. I also want to thank my Business partners Katrina, Tom and especially Akash for trying to show me something. Now please enjoy the rest of the night. Eat and Drink and dance till you drop as it's a Nanda party and we love party people.

M-Beta that was a great speech. I never knew mera Beta uske parivaar se itna pyar karta hain. (She gives Ranbir a kiss on the forhead)

R-Mamma stop it na Sab dekhenge. But i do Love you a lot. Aggar tum na hote to you know its a party. Lets not talk about the past. I love you.

M-Go enjoy yourself Bata. Kanya ki saath ek dance karna. Bechari kisi ko jaanti nahin aur Pooja tere Party ki coverage kar rahi hain. Akash ne uski kayal rakha tu ja uski paas.

Ranbirs thinking i want to kill Akash. Great friend but what does he see in Kanya and why does everyone keep on saying take care of Kanya she's a big girl damn. Saw some guy headed towards kanya. Ranbir runs as fast as he could to Kanya and extends his hand to Kanya. Kanya accepts and they both dance to. Pehle nazar. Both seem hypnotized by eachother. Both see nobody else.


Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan & nbsp; Both swaying side to side
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you … so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
I love u
I love u so
Baby i love u   ;   ; Both hugging each other

After the dance is over Ranbir takes kanya outside where they can have a nice chat. They both don't understand what is happening between them but both feel that maybe they should take a risk and see what might be. Kanya is already in too deep but wants to see if maybe she can change Ranbir and hopefully he will Love her as he gets to know the real her.

Hope you guys liked it so far.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great update
i hope they realize there love soon!
please update soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was brilliant...
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its soo good plz write more soon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 oo continue soon yaar!
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Part 9

Recap
Ranbir and Kanya dance at the party and start feeling for one another.

Ranbir decides to let Akash, Tom and Katrina take over with the business training which seems never ending but he knows that his friends will drill these Nandas into shape. Knay was excused from this session as it was all about managing employees and Kanya's role did not entail this in her job description so Ranbir thought it would be a great idea to take Kanya out for the day. Somewhere of her choice. Ranbir wanted to see what Kanya is like in her own comfort zone.

R-Come Kanya hum gumne jaate hain. Long drive pe jahaan tum jaana chahte ho.

K-Like a date?

R-Yeah i guess this would be kind of like our first date. Le chalo jahaan tumhara mann chahe.

K-Ok to mein tumhe ek mela pe le jati hoon. I have lots of fun there with my family tumhe bhi maza ayega par tum shayed in melo mein nahin gaye ho.

R-Theres always a fiest time for new things. Yeh kar ke bhi dekhlenge.

K-Hummein itna door nahin jaana parega. Are sure tum jaana chahte ho.

Ranbir took Kanya to the mela where they both just had fun. Ranbir for the first time had fun which did not involve lot of money. Ranbir loved the way Kanya smiled she had this innocence but yet had this cheeky side to her. They went on rides a roller coaster. Kanya held Ranbir's hand and screamed whenever they reached to the top. Ranbir just had his eyes closed also grabbing hold of Kanya real tight. Ranbir felt sick with fear. The emotions overtaking him were a little overwhelming. He had never experienced all this and accidently opened his eyes and found he was enjoying himself but he was feeling quite dizzy. Kanya and Ranbir gazed into each other's eyed and the Tumse hi track came on. Both lost in each other. After the ride finished Ranbir went to the nearest bin and puked his guts out.

R-Tum log yeh kaise enjoy karte ho. Mein height se dartha nahin par itna fast jab jar aha tha aisa laga mera jaan hi nakaal jar aha tha.

K-At least tumne enjoy kiya. Besides we had each other. Ao hum jake paani puri kathe hain aur Candy Floss.

R-Kanya tum kao. In sab cheeso se mera allergy hain. Mein Sirf top quality food kahta hoon. Bahar ka food order karta hoon top restruants se. Na jaane yeh logo ne haath do ke kaam karte hain ya nahin. Look at the hygiene aspect agar mujhe food poisoning hogaya tho. Mera lakho ka nuksaan hojayega. Waise bhi India ki business itna achcha nahin ho rahi hain. Mujhe apna saheth kayal karna hain.

K-Sir ap bhi. Main ye sab cheez itne saalo se kha rahi hoon mujhe kucch nahin huwi hain to tum ko bhi nahin hoga.

R-Tum kehte ho to kah leta hoon. Pehla date hain to karleta hoon.

Ranbir tries a Pani Puri and makes these funny faces. His trademark smirk and said its ok lekin mujhe yeh foods mere Punjab ki ffods se behtar nahin hain. After that they both go and get some Candy floss and both enjoy the taste.

R-I really enjoyed myself Kanya and felt that this day i will remember for a very long time thanx.

Kanya leans in to give Ranbir a kiss on the cheeks but Ranbir turns his face and the kiss lands on his lips. The kiss lingers on for a while and both look at each other realising what just happened. Kanya blushes and Ranbir looks at kanya with an even more confused look. At first he thought she was a great worker, and then he thought she was sweet now he's thinking he really likes her and is getting scared of his feelings. Last time he felt like this was a long time ago. Could he ever trust another woman ever again? All the other women he'd been with were like passing ships to end those lonely nights, they were meaningless flings but Kanya had one thing none of the other girls had. This control. This need to please her and make her feel like a princess.


Kanya started getting scared of her feelings for ranbir before she really liked the guy but now she knew she loved the guy. She had no idea how to make Ranbir love her. At least he was trying t please her. She didn't want to be another notch on his bed even though she was she knew ranbir didn't know that. Kanya decided that she would risk it for love as it is better to have loved than never been loved. Ranbir will see the love that she wanted Ranbir to notice that she had for him.

They both gets some ice-cream. Kanya gets chocolate and ranbir gets vanilla. Kanya decides to take some of Ranbirs Ice-cream and licks it. Then Ranbir starts sulking with his cheeky grin he tries to get Kanya's ice-cream but she won't let him have any. Teasing him. Then kanya decides to shove some on Ranbirs face and he goes chasing after like little children.

R-Kanya. Lets go home now. I mean back.

K-Come on then. Next time tum mujhe ek special place le jaana jaha tumhare liya special ho. Not some restruant.

R-But then you won't get to see me smooth talking you.

K-I've seen those sides to you. Mujhe sirf tumhe dekhna hain. Expensive things nahin. You decide.

Kanya and Ranbir give a long lingering kiss and bade farewell.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow great part luvd it


update soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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update soon!
where will there next date be?
probably a place where ranbir can see kanya laugh, so probably somewhere she would also like!
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i have a question though remember the treat ranbir gave cuz of the success,......... at the bar and ranbir and kanya got drunk and stuff and ranbir couldnt remember anythign the next day.....so did kanya forgive him?
Edited by pinkfly716 - 17 years ago

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