ShaKhi OS: Of Pickles and Marshmallows - Page 2

The cutest ending ever! 😆 This was so adorable to read, please write more

So cute and beautiful!!

Loved it!! Pregnant anokhi is eay distant but still loved the concept!

Keep writing ❤😍

Aww this was so wholesome and cute!! I loved it! 🥺😭

God!

Kesh!!! This was so damn adorable! I loved reading every word of it OMG! I can't stop smiling as I type this ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Marshmallows and Pickles make me sick but I would take it for this adorable preggo Anokhi Sabherwal

And those self talks inside Shaurya's head are just too good! Thats exactly how I talk to myself when I am actually faking in a conversation 😆

I loved it! Going back to read it again!!!!

Wow! I loved it. ❤️

It was pure bliss.

The easy discharge of their conversation was amazing. 👏👏

After reading this, I can't stop smiling. 😆

Do write more like this. 🤗

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Cute !!

I loved it 💯

You should write more ❤️

This was amazing !

Cute , funny , romantic and adorable 🥰

I love OS describing such domestic bliss ✨💖

Thank you K ❤️

Edit : Read this again , can’t stop smiling 🥰

P.S : Will you write OS on daddy sabrawal, you had once talked about ? 😆

Let me just say I'm humbled at the speed which you UnRes here😆

Yes, yes that one too will come. I haven't forgotten about the daddy Sabherwal one.😳

Originally posted by: deepshiii

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This was such a cute OS Keshni

Anokhi’s mood swings and the way Shaurya handled them was too adorable to read😳

It was a perfect blend of cute and funny and a lot of pickles and marshmallows and mint mouthwash😆
Enjoyed reading it❤️

Do write more🤗

Ohh thank you😳

Glad you enjoyed it❤️

Originally posted by: mahiaana

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Totally loved it. It was cute funny lovely and all. And also very realistic with that oily lips part scene 😂🤣

I loved how you kept the characters on point. Shaurya being shaurya.....and anokhi my my that lil minx blackmailed him for icecream 😂🤣 that too threatening him that she will eat that mouthwash.

Lol i loved that mad sistera part..shaurya's sympathies for poor Vicky.

😂😂😂😂 my most fav scene was that about to kiss scene but he stopped by looking at his oily lips. Well dripped with those pickles oil. And that that stair scene...he's gonna finish that mouthwash fully now 😂 poor shaurya!

Loveeeed it a lot. Wonderfully done. Please write more on them. ❤

(Btw a side question if you don't mind me asking..ghum ko chor diya kya? Don't mind me please ive been knowing you from that forum na..so just curious to know whats going on)

Thank you for the kind words❤️

And No, not watching that show. The last super long post I made, was my parting note😆

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Absolutely loved it...so cute💖...was seriously wondering what was happening in the beginning...good buildup😅🤭...thnx🌹...pls do write more on them💐

So glad that you enjoyed it😳

Originally posted by: mehr05

I loved it!

Shaurya and Anokhi blissfully married and baby sabharwal on the way. loved it!

It was a pleasure reading this OS. Beautifully written.

I do hope we see such a scenario in the future

Thank you❤️