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Posted: 5 years ago
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One of the longest poems that I have written. Not same as the show but how I think the destiny might have planned things for RiAnsh ♥️

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A bright ray of sunshine fell inside the room

Making her irk at its visit

Even though she wanted to lay on the bed for a longer time

She had chores waiting in line for her welcome

She lived alone, far away from the city's periphery

At a place, where only tranquility and greenery could be seen

Up in the hills of an unknown state

She set up her home, an abode that she created with love and faith

Every morning she would go out to pluck flowers from her garden

The beautiful bed of roses and orchids that she planted with beds of pansies and tulips

The fresh air that dashed against her face would cheer her up,

Giving a satisfaction that wasn't felt while she lived amongst toxicity of her love

She would dance in the garden, shiver a little in the chilling cold

Yet, everything made her happy and joyous to many, many folds

She was free; free to live the way she wanted

A pure soul who would impart nothing but happiness

To fall in love again was never in her plan

Little did she know, the destiny charted out an excitingly different game

Far away from her perfect world, there was a different one led by a man of who stood at his words

To the ones outside, he was a ruthless and heartless mafia

But only he knew, how he craved for lovely life partner

He shouldered the responsibility of his family at a young age

But, the jealously in his family just led to igniting his rage

No one understood him neither the pain he endured

He just kept piling them up and let himself be locked

When he spoke, everyone would quitely listen

No one dared to question his orders, such was the fear that he imbibed on them

He was broken; broken from inside...the one who called his own

Betrayed him worse than the enemies he earned

Falling in love again was not in his plan either

But, destiny... it had already planned a second chapter with her

How destiny brought them together was a sight to watch

They weaved stories together through all the happiness & hurts

They might be imperfect individually but together they are the perfect pair

To cross limits in love... is something to learn from them


~ Priyasha Purkayastha ~

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is amazing👏👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

This is amazing👏👍🏼


Thaaankss♥️♥️♥️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Marvelous piece ❤️❤️

Beautifully penned down. Each lines was captivating but following few struck me:


She set up her home, an abode that she created with love and faith

Giving a satisfaction that wasn't felt while she lived amongst toxicity of her love


She was free; free to live the way she wanted

A pure soul who would impart nothing but happiness


No one understood him neither the pain he endured

He just kept piling them up and let himself

He was broken; broken from inside...the one who called his own

Betrayed him worse than the enemies he earned


How destiny brought them together was a sight to watch

They weaved stories together through all the happiness & hurts

They might be imperfect individually but together they are the perfect pair

To cross limits in love... is something to learn from them

Thanks for sharing such lovely poem 🤗🤗

Edited by Innocentlove96 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Innocentlove96

Marvelous piece ❤️❤️

Beautifully penned down. Each lines was captivating but following few struck me:


She set up her home, an abode that she created with love and faith

Giving a satisfaction that wasn't felt while she lived amongst toxicity of her love


She was free; free to live the way she wanted

A pure soul who would impart nothing but happiness


No one understood him neither the pain he endured

He just kept piling them up and let himself

He was broken; broken from inside...the one who called his own

Betrayed him worse than the enemies he earned


How destiny brought them together was a sight to watch

They weaved stories together through all the happiness & hurts

They might be imperfect individually but together they are the perfect pair

To cross limits in love... is something to learn from them

Thanks for sharing such lovely poem 🤗🤗


This means a lot to me ♥️♥️ thankyouu soo much♥️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sniper25


This means a lot to me ♥️♥️ thankyouu soo much♥️

You deserve this praise as your poems are praiseworthy.

I have read them all on twitter also.....

Edited by Innocentlove96 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow amazing and beautiful priyu dhi

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful work! 👏👍🏼❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Such a beautiful poem Priyasha!❤️👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow this is absolutely flawless.

Loved it so much.

You have caught the true emotion of Riansh perfectly.

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