FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#4 Ch-36 Pg-62 4thAug DTRem. P - Page 63

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Haan story mein to noone wears bangles. You to cancelled Menaka killing plan as well. I am so sad 😔

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Hain?? you were going to kill Menaka?? but why?? better kill her with kindness.. make her have someone in her life with whom she can start afresh..(not with RB - I know and can imagine Ankie bashing and killing me in her imagination for saying this 😆)..

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

I never wanted to kill her but humara bargaining chal rha tha and usme Menaka bhi bach gayi. So me back to killing RB.

Menaka move on karegi tabhi koi aur possible hai. Let's see Adhiraj siblings ko pyaar mjlega bhi ya nahi kabhi 😒

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Usko maar deti in exchange of RB. she can die before reaching 50. RB ko chain se jeene do..

Bachpan se struggle kiya hai becharene...shanti se coffee bhi nahi pi...😆

I think Menaka should move on and so as Adi..

Tanvi ko chaahiye thoda pyaar thoda pyaar chaahiye...😆

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Usko maar deti in exchange of RB. she can die before reaching 50. RB ko chain se jeene do..

Naaa naa 50 is good for RB..

Bachpan se struggle kiya hai becharene...shanti se coffee bhi nahi pi...😆

Ab to coffee bhi band ho jayegi warna 50 tak bhi nahi phochega

I think Menaka should move on and so as Adi..

Menaka can't not jab tak she is forgiven. Uske baad bhi karegi kya pata. She has never loved anyone but RB. Usey shayad ata nahi kisi aur ko like karna. RB help.karde to alag baat hai.

Tanvi ko chaahiye thoda pyaar thoda pyaar chaahiye...😆

Adi ke chances to hai. Par Tanvi ko mehnat karni padegi

Originally posted by: oa2019

Hey there. It's been a while. Hope all is good

hey good with me, hope you're fine too x

Yess I am.. just a bit tired after a loongg day.

first of all thank you for updating, i can understand with KSG's version of RB gone how the inspiration must have dwindled.

Dwindled??? It flat lined. It was on ventilator barely surviving the trauma. It was mercilessly killed.

lol

Trust me it was inspiration in the ICU, after what happened. GIFs were prescribed to me for some relief. It helped a little.

now for the analysis. it was a good chapter. all that introspect was needed, yes I guess, something before she gets into action. Menaka's flashbacks provide us with a different version of RB. I hope the differenciation was visible because it connects to a conversation how Rishabh turned into Mr. Bajaj. So it will only work if there was a slight differnce visible in his two versions. it really is, it'll be nice to see how he became Mr Bajaj (much needed backstory we NEVER got either )

Yayyy.. dikha dikha thoda diff dikha. Backstory will open up in parts with all thr FBs. :)

Prerna's introspect allow her to progress as a character & realise her growing feelings for RB & provide the reader with the growth she deserved but never got. it'll be interesting to see whether how she realises these feelings & whether she acts upon them. She has to act now before it's too late and not just because of Menaka but Kukki more importantly and the family she came back to Mumbai for. She needs Rishabh for all that. so true, will also be nice to see start of romance? They arr getting.into a friendship mode. So moments honge. But feelings will be one sided. Guess you know whose side that'll be :)

loved the fact that you give each character their moment to add to the story & portray their emotions well. Thank you sooo very much :)

the icu scene was written very well. Meneka's feelings are relatable, she loves RB soo much but has made a mistake that he can't seem to forgive. it must be heart-breaking to be soo close to someone you love but not be able to actually be close, the phrase 'so close yet so far' comes to mind. I wish I could sum it up so well myself. Thank you. She was closest in that moment yet soo far. She wouldn't even be there if he was awake.

i know that the end game is PreRish & we have more affinity towards P just because we know her but still heart feels sorry for M.

May be because her love at present is unconditional. your talking of Menaka's love right?

Yes I meant Menaka's way of loving.

Prerna has also become more independent & strong, loved the conversation she had with her mum. this is the progression a character realistically goes through (shame KZK never allowed her to do this)

KZK ka yaad bhi nahi karna hai mujhe.

mujhe aise wali feelings aati hai, soo glad stopped watching. Even if I watch, I skip Bajaj part. I don't know who he is Prerna ko kya progress karte. her characterisation is ye bandi has become worse. Let me not say more nahi to story.ki prena gadbad ho jayegi. Kya musibat hai...Unhone to jo tha woh bhi ajeeb kar diya. But yes here she is way more clear in her mind about Rishabh. Now she can take steps in his direction knowing he could be anything but he is not a bad person as everyone back Calcutta projected am so glad she's a fully fledged character in yours, very well written & thinking with her own mind. Thank you so much for this. She is slow but thinking for sure (I hope so)

can't wait for the next update. want to hear more of Prerna's conversation with a sleeping RB & her attempts to become friends with him once he awakens.

The conversation where it ends will continue. From a single sided monolgue (that's what i meant lol) yessss.. to proper conversation between two individuals is where we head next.

Thank you soo much for alll your time and for being so patient with me. Appreciate it

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Naaa naa 50 is good for RB..

Ab to coffee bhi band ho jayegi warna 50 tak bhi nahi phochega

Menaka can't not jab tak she is forgiven. Uske baad bhi karegi kya pata. She has never loved anyone but RB. Usey shayad ata nahi kisi aur ko like karna. RB help.karde to alag baat hai.

Adi ke chances to hai. Par Tanvi ko mehnat karni padegi

50 se thoda zyaada nahi ho sakta?? na aapka na mera 60 rakho...😆

ya coffee bhi bandh ho jaayegi bechaara jiyega kaise?? kitna struggle hai bechaari ki life mein..

(Coffee ka context pun tha.. kwk se..😆)

Menaka ko maafi dilwa do abhi.. let her get the forgiveness and Prerna will help her get that(my intuition) n PreRish help her move on with someone else..

Tanvi needs to do a lot of mehnat its not easy to make a place in someone's heart who already loved someone so deeply and intently.. karao usse mehnat Bandi toh ready hai...n Prerna bhi help karegi.. uski sandwich bhi banaao Adi-Tanvi ke beech..🤣 ( not a third wheel., but a common friend ki sandwich banti hai that kind of..😆)

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Aww mera favorite wala gif...😆

Meenu bach ke rahiyo...😆

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Arey cannula wasn't the issue. Usne time pe controp.kiya. Aur cannula tha tabhi to access tha mask mein kaise karti even she wanted to

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

😆

Is that me or Meenu..??