FF:pyaar ki jeet .. PG :62 Note PG : 63

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pyaar ki jeet .....

part one :

Sagar has found out about sindooras bad intentions and has decided to take vidya and sameer far away from sindoora as he did not want any risk to occur as vidya is 4 months pregnant .

it was 5 am in the morning .sagar was still rocking in his rocking chair thinking about sindoora and how she betrayed him.an idea came into his head that he should take vidya and sameer far away from her nasty intentions also was worried about vidya as she was pregnant.Time was ticking away as he was waiting for vidya to wake up as it was only 7 in da morning.He got out of his rocking chair and went toward the window because he just thought of a brilliant idea .An hour went by sagar was out of his night clothes and had already come out the bath
the curtain nets were giving out a glowing sunlight which was directly hitting vidyas face .she tossed and turned in the bed but she couldent take it anymore so she woke up and sat on the bed and saw sagar packing her and his clothes.at first she was shocked and asked him what he was doing that to at 8 am in the morning .
vidya:suniye app yeah kya kar rahe ho ?
sagar:kuch nahi vidya tum jaldi se tayar ho jao hum abhi issi waqt yaha se jaa raheh hai
vidya:lekin kyu?
sagar:kyunki sindoora di ko mujhse nafrat hai kal raat meine unko ko kehte huwe suna ke kal jab sagar office se nikle to usko katham kardo
vidya:KYA?
sagar:haan vidya iss liye mein chahta hoo ke tum,sameer aur mein new zealand chale gaye
vidya:theek hai lekin hum kahan rahenge hai?
sagar:tum bhool gayi kya? yaad hai mein tumhari liya ek dream house banaya tha ek saal pehle?
vidya:sorry hume maaf kardigiye hum tho bhool gaye
sagar:koi baat nahin vidya pregnancy mein yeah sab to hota rehta hai
sagar went on his knees and put his hands on vidyas sari which was covering her stomach and told vidya that he does not want any risk on the baby.sagar looked up toward vidya and saw her eyes water up and looked as if she was about to cry.sagar stood up and wiped her tears.
sagar:kuch nahi hoga juniour ko..!
vidya:jab tak aap humare saat hai hume koi chinta nahi
sagar:chaloo...! jaldi se tayar ho jao hume dus bhaje airport paunch naa hai
vidya:theek hai hume bas 10 minutes deejiya hum abhi aate hai
vidya took her sari out of the closet which she shared with sagar and headed toward the bath.
sagar:vidyaaa....sirf dus minute
vidya:theek hai
as vidya was ready and had come out the bath she noticed that sagar was not in the room and wondered where he had gone
vidya:ab yeah kaha chale gaye hmmm......
it had been 15 minutes she had come out of the bath but still no signs of sagar.she blow dryed her hair and got ready.she put her cosmetics on which you could hardly tell she put on and headed toward sameers room.as she got there she saw sameer and sagar packing in his little superman suitcase and were enjoying them selves laughing and
hitting eachother with clothes.vidya entered the room and sameer suddently stopped his laughing and put the clothes down which were in his hands.sagar wondered why he stopped all of a sudden and turned his head and saw vidya standing there with her arms crossed looking at him.
sagar:vidyaa....tum kab....meh to sameer ko kehne aya ta keh school ke liye mat ready hona.....aur phir....hum pa-ck-in-gg
vidya:aap aise packing kar rahe the
vidya couldent take it anymore and bursted out laughing.sameer looked towards sagar.sager did the same and they also started laughing.
it was exactly 9 on da clock .the three headed downstairs and saw no one there and headed towards the door they were stopped by someone .

plz let me nw ur opinion about this FF also if i shud carry on ... ?

good and bad comments accepted ...! 😳


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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was gud keep it up.luved it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely start, I hope they can go to freedom! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharadcandy

it was gud keep it up.luved it.

thnx for ur lovely comment

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

lovely start, I hope they can go to freedom! 😃

no worries...😳 adventure_gurl they will be free in the next update im glad you liked it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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that is great, do continue and let me know once you have, great start........ 👏 👏 👏

😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabm786

that is great, do continue and let me know once you have, great start........ 👏 👏 👏

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no worries sabm786 i will do

im glad u liked it ....😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice fanfic, wanna know kwho stopps them?plus hope nothing happens to the baby. continue soon. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: afghangirl

nice fanfic, wanna know kwho stopps them?plus hope nothing happens to the baby. continue soon. 👏

you will deffo find out in the nxt update

no worries nuffin will happen to the baby as far as i knw ...😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Sweety!

You FF is fantastic..!!
Please do continue soon..!! 😃 😳..
I'll now answer your PM's (A)..
I have all your parts nowww.. 😛 😳 ..
YEAHHHHH..
Edited by Durga_ - 17 years ago

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