ONE SHOT - OS -- THE WOMEN : kabir's pro. ☺️
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150712627?tid=5101517
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TABLE OF CONTNETS
1) WHAT'S WRONG WITH HER - THE CONCERN FOR THE X-ENEMY 😲☢️
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151160121?tid=5111865
2) THEN I RAN - ESCAPING HER 🤣😎
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151160369?tid=5111865
3) I DON'T - THE DENIAL OF LOVE 🥺
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151163231?tid=5111865
4) SHE IS IN LOVE - NOW LEAVE ❤️😈🥳
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151163231?tid=5111865
5) TIP TOEING AND A LINGERING QUESTION - UPDATED NOW !
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151168280?tid=5111865
6) ASSAULTED IN LOVE - (UPDATED RECENTLY - BEST PART)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151168306?tid=5111865
7) DE - JA - VU - THE ROAD TO PHYSICAL ATTRACTION ☺️😎🤗
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151168309?tid=5111865
8) OH S-H-I-T !! - THE PUNCHLINE - ( flashback romance ) 🐷
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151170522?tid=5111865
9) THE LOGIC ! - LUSTING OR LOVING ! 🤓🤔😳
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151174657?tid=5111865
10) OBSCENE THOUGHTS AND A FLASHBACK ☺️🤣
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151180278?tid=5111865
11) A SHAMELESS RADIO 😈😎
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151183200?tid=5111865
12) HE IS IN LOVE
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151199440?tid=5112922
13) WET PUPPY OR A TOWEL WRAPPED KABIR
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151230403?tid=5112922
14) HE KISSED HER
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151237615?tid=5112922
15) A MIGHTY SAFETY PIN - LIVING UP IT'S NAME
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151261696?tid=5112922
16) I NEEDED YOU THE MOST
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151287133?tid=5112922
17) WE WILL BE MAKING LOVE THEN
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151297554?tid=5112922
18) JUST NOT PREGNANT - OKAY !
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151310734?tid=5112922
19) A SWEET GESTURE AND A JEALOUS KABIR
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151346368?tid=5112922
20) A NAKED CONFESSION AND NAKED SOUL !
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151370252
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A NAKED MAN'S CONFESSION : uPdated
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151199440?tid=5112922
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WHAT'S WRONG WITH HER
- THE CONCERN FOR THE X-ENEMY
S : I don’t have the whole day kabir……
No answer. Thepoor guy has been moving to and fro since last 20 minutes but no luck. Suhasiniji already know the matter. Actually….. she has known the matter long before itstarted.
She wondershow no one else saw it coming. Her age and experience makes it crystal clear foher – THE FIRE ! - between these two souls. They are attracted to each otherlike magnets. Yet both of them are deaf to their own calling, hiding their true intentions beneath reckless excuses on which she never paid attention.
{ I want totake revenge !
I want to make her regret her mistakes !
I’ll teach him a lesson !
I willmarry her to teach her importance of marriage !
I only carefor maa !
I willbound her into this marriage !
I am doingthis out of misery ! }
SERIOUSLY !WHO THEY ARE FOOLING ! well definitely not her.
And yet she keep shut because suhashini knew them better. If she even hints them about their obsession with each other. They will laugh it away - leave the confession in depths of Arabian sea.But enough is enough. She cant see Pooja wasting her life over her childish games. Pk mittal was more sensitive and personal matter so she never interfere-but….
kabir was different. She cant let her gullible child to let go of this opportunity. Kabir is her future. Her only escape from pain and past. She liked kabir ever since he confronted her. That time he was married to bhavya so she wished for someone like him.
Strong
Bold
Just
Kind
Protective
Caring
And the LIST goes on.
But now they are married. The almighty himself compensated for Pooja’s sorrows. Kabir is a gift staight from heavens. for all the good deeds pooja has done for others.
So she needs to interfere. She already know how far the story has come. But It’s time for the interval.
S : fine ! good day then. Call me when you learn to speak.
She was about to stand up from her seat when he turned on his heels in full swing motion and ……
K : what’s wrong with her amma !
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hey everyone ! got to know the show i going off air just when it really started ! :( anyways. i cant stop myself from writting . i love these two characters. and the story have so much potential. i am a hopeless romatic fan so here is my take.
i do not claim to be good at writting but i have wrote a few. i would like to have feedback if anyones interested. thank you so so much reading. just a simple like is appreciated and an comment is welcomed with open arms. criticism is mandatory for improvement so please suggest if you want read something specific i might write a short piece. not promising.
special thanks to SANJANA who have been my knight on this forum for writting beautiful work on JABIR ! thank you so much . sorry i dont know how to tag you but ill be posting on THE STALKER THE LINK.
i love your work sanjaana i checked your profile earlier work also. i am inspired from you. you are the forth person here to motivate me to write . i wasnt able to tell the first three. so i make it sure that you know this, ..... THIS IS FOR YOU ! i am not as good as you but ill try my best .
thank you so much please review.
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