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Chapter-1

A tall man standing in front of a portrait, admiring his wife, lost in the memories of her.Its been 12 years Antra , you had left me alone. Still it feels that you are with me. Why did you do this to me?? Why did you leave me? Didn't you care about me just ones?? I still can't forget that night when you left me.

Flashback**

In the hospital

Doctor- Mr. Jindal, your wife is very crictical. We are trying our best but we can only save one of them, whether your wife or your child.If we save your wife, she can't be a mother again as there are complications due to her age.

Akshat- Doctor, please save my wife,Please(having tears in his eyes)

(He had always dreamt of his own child with Antra but now this can't be possible🙁)

Doctor- Okay Mr. Jindal, just sign these papers and we are ready to operate.

In the operation theatre**

Antra- Doctor, please save my child. Don't listen to Akshat. I want this child for him. Don't worry about me. Just save my child please 🙏

Doctor- Mrs. Jindal,it's against our rules but if you want this,then we will do it whatever you say.

Antra- Thank you doctor.

(Akshat outside the OT, waiting for doctor)

Operation ends**

Akshat- Doctor, how's my wife?? Is she fine??

Doctor- I'm sorry Mr. Jindal, your wife wanted to save your child and we did what she said. We couldn't save her.

Akshat- No, how could she do this to me?? How will I live without her?Antra yeh tumne achha nahi Kiya 😭

Flashback ends **

Akshat- You are very selfish.You didn't even think about me that I would be able to survive without you.You had just gone leaving behind your Akshat.

Okay, tell me what do you want today as you know it's our wedding anniversary. Happy wedding anniversary wifey. We have completed 13 years of togetherness.Its a special day for us and we need to celebrate it

(Akshat went downstairs and and called his servants)

Akshat- As you all know that today is mine and Antra's wedding anniversary,I want everything to be perfect. All the arrangements should be done properly.

Servants- Okay sir,as you say. There will be no complain about it and left from their.

(Akshat went to his MIL for her blessings)

Krishna- Aao beta. Saalgirah ki bahut bahut shubhkaamnayein.Bhagwan tumhe saari khushiyaan de. Aur ek achha jeewan saathi de Jo tumhe sambhaal sake. Aakhir main kab Tak zinda rahungi. Kabhi na kabhi toh Chali jaaungi.

Akshat- Yeh aap kaisi baatein Kar rahi Hain maa. Aap jaanti hain Meri zindagi mein Antra ki jagah koi nahi le sakta toh aap mujhe aisa aashirwaad kaise de sakti Hain. Aap jaanti hain yeh mumkin nahi aap jaanti hai phir bhi .

(Then pari comes to him for wishing him for his anniversary)

Pari- Happy anniversary papa and hugged him. He didn't reciprocate and left from there leaving a hurt pari over there.

Pari- Nani,why does papa always behave with me like this?

Krishna- Chup Kar Jai Meri Jaan,sab theek ho jaayega. Tumahre papa tumse bahut pyaar karte Hain.

Pari- Nani, mujhe aisa nahi lagta. I think he hates me.

Krishna- Nahi beta,aisa nahi kehte. He is your father and he loves you alot and now stop crying.

Akshat- Raghu gaadi nikaalo, mujhe office ke liye late ho Raha hai.

Raghu- Ji sahab,abhi nikalta hoon. (On there way to office , Raghu asked for leave because it was his daughter Guddan's marriage). He hesistantly asked Akshat - Malik mujhe 2 din ki chhutti chahiye,kyunki Meri beti ki shaadi hai aur main chahta Hoon ki aap iss Shaadi mein aayein.

Akshat- chhutti toh main aapko de doonga par aa nahi sakta.

(Raghu requested Akshat again and again, and finally Akshat agreed)

Akshat- Theek hai Raghu main aaunga but thodi der ke liye,bus mubarakbaad dekar Chala jaunga.

(Raghu gets very happy)

On the other side, Guddan is waiting for his baba.

Guddan- Maa baba kab aayeinge. Unhe pata hai na ki Kal hamari Shaadi hai

Gud. M- Beta tu chinta mat Kar Tere baba raat Tak aa jaayeinge. Woh jahaan kaam karte Hain woh bahut hi bade log Hain,unhe bahut se kaam hote Hain, shaayad isliye tumahre baba ko der ho gayi hai.

(Guddan is very nervous as she is getting married tomorrow and much to this she hasn't seen her groom yet. It was just a compromise marriage. As they are very poor,her father just wants to fulfill his responsibility. She wasn't excited for this marriage at all)

Suddenly revti comes there and started teasing Guddan.

Revti- Kya soch rahi ho,apne hone wale dulhe ke baare mein.Bolo bolo.

(Guddan got irritated with her teasing but she can't say anything to her as she is elder sister)

Guddan-Didi aap bhi kaisi kaisi baatein karti Hain. Aapko toh pata hai Hume iss Shaadi see koi umeedein nahi Hain ,hum yeh Shaadi sirf baba ki Khushi ke liye Kar rahe Hain 😕

Revti- phir bhi Tere kuch toh Armaan honge Shaadi ko lekar,kaisa pati chahiye tumhe?

Guddan- Didi Hume toh bus aisa jeewan saathi chahiye Jo Hume samjhe,hamara khyaal rakhe aur humesha ek dost ki tarah humara khyaal rakhe. Aur aisa saathi Hume milna toh bilkul namumkin hai.

(Meanwhile, Guddan's father reached home)

Guddan- Baba aap aa Gaye,hum kabse aapka intezaar Kar rahe the.

Raghu- Bus beta maalik ke kuch kaamo ki wajah se phas Gaya tha,isliye deri ho gayi. Tumhe ek Khushi ki baat bataoon,Kal Malik aa rahe Hain hamare Ghar tumhe badhai Dene. Bahut bada Dil hai unka.

Guddan- yeh toh bahut achhi baat hai and she gets excited to see Malik for the first time.

In Jindal bhawan**

Akshat and Antra's anniversary party going. Everyone was wishing Akshat. It was a very beautiful party and decoration was just too good. Akshat was very happy to see it and also gave some baksheesh to his servants for such beautiful arrangements.

Then they cut the cake.Akshat fed cake to his MIL and step son but didn't offer cake to pari. She again got hurt by Akshat's behavior. After this Akshat went to his room. Pari was crying. Angad came to her and consoled her. Angad loved pari alot .pari was like a daughter to her. He took pari with him and went to their respective rooms.

Day of marriage-

Guddan getting ready for her marriage, she had worn a lehnga, she was looking pretty too)

Revti was also helping her to get ready.

Guddy- Didi hum theek toh lag rahe Hain na.Revti replied that she is looking very pretty.

Here comes the baraat.

Revti got excited and went to see the baraat.

Guddan was sitting in her room alone, having so many anxiety attacks within her mind.

End of chapter 1.

Precap- Akshat Jindal on his way to attend wedding. Some goons are following him.What will happen next??

PS- Mujhe likhna nahi aata.Achha lage toh like kariyega,nahi toh joote chappalein bhi welcome Hain 😆

Wah first chap to majedaar tha

Dusra chap v jaldi update krna plz 😛

Thumbs up of this chapter

Nice Update

Plz continue

Nice update

Akshat is really hurt after losing Antara and Guddan is getting married to someone else seems interesting

Hain Kon bola that tumhe likhna nahi at....

Lai jara samne??

It was nice update...

Continue soon...

P s:- I don't know how someone be so attached to dead person like a 12 years... hurting other alive people....mujhe to yeh pasand he nahi at...ab Jo Aya he wo jayega he and it's a face use koi change nahi Kar sakta ..aur Jo Gaya he wo chahe kitna b apna q na ho usk liye kiss jinda insan ko hurt karna is very bad...Jo Chala Gaya he use Dil me yaad bana Kar rakha Karo q usko jinda rakhne ki koshish me khud ko b taklif pahochani aur dusri ko b....

Sorry this are just my thoughts agar kisiko bura lage to dilse sorry....