~~ Yours Kaneez~~ || Akshan FF || Chapter-1 updated on pg -3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's a completely different story from the show.

Prologue-

Akshat jindal lost his wife while she was conceiving their little girl Pari 12 years prior, however the affection that he felt for her when he looked at her surprisingly is still there. When they got hitched Antra was a divorcee with a 13 year kid Angad from her first marriage, yet her past had no impact on him in any capacity.Akshat and he is as yet living with her memories and his home is to a greater degree a gallery which has Antra composed everywhere. Anyhow his life takes an unutterable turn when he is compelled to wed his servant's little girl Guddan who is a large portion of the age of his and is uneducated. In the wake of concealing his conjugal status from the family he needed to let them know and face their inconvenience.

Character Sketch

Akshat Jindal- A business tycoon who loves her first wife alot and doesn't love her daughter because he blames her for his wife's death

Guddan - Daughter of Akshat jindal's servant

Pari- Daughter of Akshat and Antra

Angad- Step son of Akshat jindal

Revti- Elder sister of Guddan

Krishna Rawat- Mother of Antra Jindal who lives in Akshat's house.

Ambika- Akshat and Antra's common friend

Let me know,if I should continue or not??🤔

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Continue it partner

Aur if possible update the first part today itself plz😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Continue it partner

Aur if possible update the first part today itself plz😃

I'll try partner😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Neki aur puch puch....

Continue soon dear

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Posted: 6 years ago
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seems quite different plot

m surely interested to read this one 👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: TC_FA

It's a completely different story from the show.

Prologue-

Akshat jindal lost his wife while she was conceiving their little girl Pari 12 years prior, however the affection that he felt for her when he looked at her surprisingly is still there. When they got hitched Antra was a divorcee with a 13 year kid Angad from her first marriage, yet her past had no impact on him in any capacity.Akshat and he is as yet living with her memories and his home is to a greater degree a gallery which has Antra composed everywhere. Anyhow his life takes an unutterable turn when he is compelled to wed his servant's little girl Guddan who is a large portion of the age of his and is uneducated. In the wake of concealing his conjugal status from the family he needed to let them know and face their inconvenience.

Character Sketch

Akshat Jindal- A business tycoon who loves her first wife alot and doesn't love her daughter because he blames her for his wife's death

Guddan - Daughter of Akshat jindal's servant

Pari- Daughter of Akshat and Antra

Angad- Step son of Akshat jindal

Revti- Elder sister of Guddan

Krishna Rawat- Mother of Antra Jindal who lives in Akshat's house.

Ambika- Akshat and Antra's common friend

Let me know,if I should continue or not??🤔

Isn't this a kind of Anupama ...of Sharmila Tagore n dharmendra...but yes..there was no other woman in father's life...

I remember that movie very well...n the song yadil ki suno duniya walo...

Would love to read the story ... update sooooooooooon...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Continue karo 👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good story and characterization

Please continue

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice start

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats partner for becoming stunnerz🥳

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