The touch…Completed Final Update Page 7……My Ra4gKor

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Touch……………My Ra4gKor (a sneak peak)

No mumma… I don’t want to go to school she cried ….

As the classes were nearing to the last period she started to shudder…

Mumma,why did you take away Ananya from Deeraj bhai he asked. Raaghav was surprised…

she was sleeping in a corner in the dark room.. coiled… she is having fever and also not talking with anyone.

how can I calm down…. Such persons should be shot dead or butchered… he was raging.

the harsh ugly reality......

can voice be raised against it....

Can the eagle and her Lion rise again and raise Hell!!!

Lets see!!!!

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Something hit me hard today morning…..and thought to pen it down….

a Short Story ..... in few parts .....

many was fondly requesting me saying they are missing the FicFam... Yes me too but as you all know I can write only when I connect as I am not a good story writer....

Part 1 - Trouble Page 1

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Part 2 - Trauma Page 4

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Part 3 - and Part 4 Truth (though Ugly) and tranquility Page 5

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Final Part: The Touch and Trigger Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I'm happy you decided to pen a new story.

Intriguing sneak peek, the topic is very sensitive but I'm sure you'll do it justice.

Eagerly waiting for your update.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yes dear sumi like mesh said... sensitive topic... very relevant too......I am sure you will ace it......

Waiting for the update...sneak peek is very good.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: nemo316

I'm happy you decided to pen a new story.

Intriguing sneak peek, the topic is very sensitive but I'm sure you'll do it justice.

Eagerly waiting for your update.

Mai 🤗🤗

A smile when i see nemo.. My favo orange cutie 🐠

Yes sensitive let me try touching the ugly one.

Thanks for your encouragement. Means a lot

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 77nikita

Yes dear sumi like mesh said... sensitive topic... very relevant too......I am sure you will ace it......

Waiting for the update...sneak peek is very good.


Nikki 🤗🤗

Thanks a lot dear...

Hope i do justice atleast in my writing.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sri a lot

So intriguing nd interesting sneak peak .. seems like a very hard hitting relevant topic..super exited to read it..so glad nd happy tht u started writing again😊😊

Ur writing give us, d heartbroken MeeJay,Sukor,Ragkor fans d much needed solace, happiness..so pls continue writing whenever u will get some food for thought to connect nd write👍👍😊😊

🙏🙏🙏🙏

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Smita

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Interesting preface. May be some soul stirring incident happened. Some ugly reality, I think I can guess. I'm anxiously waiting for the update.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sukor123 for your words

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Thanks dear for consider our request sneak peak is intriguing but I know u gave full justice to the story eagarly waiting for next part

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks all for the lovely encouragement. Yes ugly truth i am trying to twine.

Not more than two or three parts. Hope i can meet all your expectations and feel satisfying in writing it.

Will update tonight

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear🤗

I awaited something new from you and this one is a very sensitive and much needed one. I am glad you decided to touch those areas in your story. bring it on..awaiting.😊

As always sneak peak intrigues to read more

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