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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Ganga fir that lovely insights of the women and about the ugliness of child abuse.

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Dear first of all thanks for raising n voice against sensitive topic.

Thanks for choose another social issue. Hatts of u dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏well now coming to the story.

We are living in dark n cruel world even a months n 5-6 years of girl child also not safe. Teenagers n women's even child's also facing so many problems in society ..we can't trust our relatives also. In India women's called as the epitome of patience, culture, sacrifice, forgiveness, tolerance etc

All these are said only to control her personality and enslave her.She should obey her husband and pamper his ego. She should be forgiving and sacrificing. She should think about her family first and put herself last. This is how the ‘ideal woman’ was portrayed to be for centuries.if she wears skirts/shorts post marriage, she is not homely.

If she smokes or drinks, she is culture-less.

If she is late from work and asks her husband to get food from outside, she is heartless and selfish.

if you ask someone in 50’s or 60’s in rural areas What are your dreams?She will most probably say What dreams will I have have! My husband should be happy. My children should be happy. But during her school days, she was someone who topped the class and was shown as example to the failures. At one point of time, she too would have had ‘personal’ dreams and ambitions like everyone...

Children who have been abused may find it hard to trust other people yeah but ria trusted chakor.

Chakor Handled well..every parent should pay attention to their children. It's necessary to tell good n bad touches.explained very well take a bow 🙌🙌👌👌👏

Loved Arjun smartness concern for ria.

Coming to ragkor soothing moments 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘 lovely husband 😘rowdy always take advantage hahahha😚😉😉😉😉

And u said only 2 or 3 parts not more. But please don't stop we want more from u. We need Ur stories we love Ur stories.

And waiting for next part. Sorry for late cmnt and long message.

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Thanks so much deary

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumiiiii diii 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏thanks u so much for voicing against another social issue . Thanks for giving social msg . Wonderfully written Dii . too good. Now a days little child's also abusing. Even months babies also .girl childs abused by physically emotionally sexually..it's important to tell our childrens to about good n bad..bcz we can't trust anyone...

Arjun is so smart like chakor. Loved Arjun he is so protective brother.caring n good friend. and chakor she explained good n bad touches very well👍👍 poor ria😟😟. I hate her mom😏

Hahaha I loved ragkor cute soothing moments😍😍..heheehhe he knows only one touch 😆😆😆😆Buddha never leave any chance na 😘😘😘😘😘

Waiting for next update. Bravo chakor 💪💪💪thank u sooo much sumi dii😘🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Great start.

Poor Riya, having her innocence snatched at such a young age. I wished her mom was more concerned about her sadness but unfortunately her reaction is common.

Arjun is so much like Chakor, very perceptive.

Chakor took Aananya from the guest was very firm 👍🏼, one must be very watchful about children's safety and well being.

Looking forward to the next part.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavi.Gollapudi

Sumiiiii diii 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏thanks u so much for voicing against another social issue . Thanks for giving social msg . Wonderfully written Dii . too good. Now a days little child's also abusing. Even months babies also .girl childs abused by physically emotionally sexually..it's important to tell our childrens to about good n bad..bcz we can't trust anyone...

Arjun is so smart like chakor. Loved Arjun he is so protective brother.caring n good friend. and chakor she explained good n bad touches very well👍👍 poor ria😟😟. I hate her mom😏

Hahaha I loved ragkor cute soothing moments😍😍..heheehhe he knows only one touch 😆😆😆😆Buddha never leave any chance na 😘😘😘😘😘

Waiting for next update. Bravo chakor 💪💪💪thank u sooo much sumi dii😘🤗

Thanks so much Kavi for your encouragement and lovely words. Yes its really heartbreaking to note about such predators who prey on innocent emotions and lives.

coming to story yes Arjun is RowArt (😃(Rowdy+Smart) combo.....

Raaghav 😆 is cute na... yes he is ... and Budda is very clear with his dessert in any form.

but leaving aside he is a gem.....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: nemo316

Great start.

Poor Riya, having her innocence snatched at such a young age. I wished her mom was more concerned about her sadness but unfortunately her reaction is common.

Arjun is so much like Chakor, very perceptive.

Chakor took Aananya from the guest was very firm 👍🏼, one must be very watchful about children's safety and well being.

Looking forward to the next part.

Thanks Mai a word from you means a lot.🤗

yes you are right the innocence snatched is the one cringes us... thanks for relating it as you know better.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 2

Trauma

Trust is the most important thing in life. During our various phases of life we trust many, they may not be related, friends but strangers. When trust is broken… trauma is awakened…… we fear to read certain things but we cannot be blind to the ugliness that preys on the innocence....

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Ria smiled weakly. Ok aunty I will do as you say, but…… Trust me nothing will happen to you….. Chakor said….

Ria spoke to her mom and said that she will go to school the next day .

RagKor went and picked Arjun who was waiting in his class as Chakor called his instructor that they would pick him from the class.

Mumma how is Ria did you speak to her Arjun asked… She will be fine soon Chakor said.. Thanks mumma he said.

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The day dawned. Ria was very scared but she gathered courage and got ready .

The Rover waited at the corner of the road.

The van came …. …there was a driver and an escort for the children. The next child board after ten minutes as Ria stayed a bit far away from school and also was dropped last. The driver was middle aged and the escort was a young fellow.

Ria was waiting at the gate with her mother.

The van stopped. The escort got down. The escort was happy seeing Ria, he very warmly wished the mom and said he will take care of Ria, . Ria was nearing the van. Her eyes were searching for Chakor…. She could not see . With butterflies in her stomach she got into the van.

The escort asked why she did not come for the past few days and coaxed her back saying he missed her. She was feeling uncomfortable. Though the van was empty, he made her sit near him and he tried to put his hands around her shoulder. She said bhaai please don’t touch me and don’t make me sit near you and on the lap… I don’t like it… his voice changed… he said what suddenly you are talking back, I told you, you have to listen to what I say, else I will hurt you and will hurt your parents too…. I will tell your teachers that you are bad girl and also your mother. She said no bhaiya please don’t do that. He showed her some pictures on his phone and said if you don’t listen to me or tell anything to others I will show that you are stealing from the shops, see your picture is here and tell the police to arrest you. Nooo bhaiya please dont she said. She started to cry … Jaldi rey, come and drive I shall take care of her. Come fast the driver laughed…

The bhaiiyaaa tried to hold her chin and lift… when a severe blow hit on his face. He saw stars… he got another severe punch…. The driver got scared hey who are you… how did you get into the van he said….the Rover came hounding in front and the driver rammed the brakes.

Mein!!!…. Throttling the escort in one hand,he punched the driver saying thera Yamadhooth!!!

Chakor came running and got into the van when Ria ran crying calling aunty and hugging her… she was shivering with fear…. She saw the Lion raging at the two. Aren’t you ashamed to behave like this with a small child… the child which calls you bhaai…You are a curse in the society. He punched the escort so hard with blood raging eyes. How dare you touch the child, he twisted and broke his hand, awwwwhhhh the escort was shouting with pain….how dare you make her sit on your lap one hit with his elbow broke the thigh bone..Chakor got scared… Raaghav leave them. Govind came with the police by then… How dare you even try to ki….. one punch in his face he spit blood. He throttled the driver are you not ashamed being in the age of a father you do this…

Raaghav leave them she shouted… he turned back raged, Chakor don’t stop me, my blood boils , I will not spare these… he gave a hard punch at the driver’s face….. the police caught both…. . Raaghav saab please calm down calm down he said… He left them…

He looked at the child who was shivering in fear.. Chakor just covered her and quickly took her to the Rover, cuddling her… don’t worry, everything is fine, nothing will happen to you…you are brave, youare a strong girl.. see how boldly you make us catch them she said. She gave water. Raaghav came back to the Rover and said Ria beta , you should not cry,only those who try to wrong you should cry… she very very hesitatingly went and hugged Raaghav… uncle I am feeling scared…. she cried. He kissed on her head, tears were rolling down. Don’t worry we are there.

They took her home…. explained to her mother… she was shocked… asked Ria why did you not tell me… Ria said mummy I tried to tell you but you did not believe and you said I was trying to avoid school and that bhai told me that he will hurt me and will make police to arrest me… she cried.. .. her mother hugged her saying sorry my child … she was thanking RagKor and said… but the police will now keep calling us… what if they come again and do harm to us…

Raaghav said he will take care and not to worry. Chakor said if we fear to voice out the wrong then how will such creatures be punished?? They will go on doing such crime on others. But Raaghav we cannot leave them here as Ria’s father is working overseas. Raaghav thought and said,let them for the time being stay in our plantation guest house which is safe. Ria and her mother were made to stay in one of the guest house which was within the plantation and the security was instructed to keep vigil. Being inside the plantation the workers would ensure no harm will befall. The workers were told that since Ria’s house is under renovation they would be staying there for some time. Govind was aware and he kept a vigil on them.

They both were arrested and taken in ambulance to the police hospital..due to the special works done by our Rowdy….

The driver said, we did not do anything… what proof do you have? You are accusing us? We are innocent. The police laughed you don’t know with whom you had rubbed. We have enough evidence to make you rot in the jail. But…. How????? After sometime their eyes were shocked ……

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Ria beta tell me what’s bothering you Chakor asked. The little girl shivered terribly.. spoke the ugly thing.

He makes me sit beside him and sometimes on his lap .

Did they tried to harm you what I mean is did they try to rem....ove...you..rrr

Ria just went into Chakor… that bhaiyaa is very bad…very bad…. she shivered

… how can I calm down…. Such persons should be shot dead or butchered… he was raging… poor child what agony and trauma she is undergoing.. else mark my words, if I see them in Shimla anywhere I will kill them for sure. Raaghav Chakor shouted....

How do we identify these predators who prey on the innocent emotions, traumatize them...

Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27

Thanks Sritama for the insta comment and thanks for the encouragement. 🙏

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Such a heartwrenching update Sumi di..uncovering d ugly menace of our society..child molestation.. poor Ria..was going through hell😖😖despite being so shattered loved d way she bravely agreed to help Chakor to nab d escort & d driver👏👏nd our roaring lion, our Rowdy rocked..d way took d entry,throttling d escort&d driver😍those solid punches,blood raging eyes😍was imagining Vj throughout d entire scene😍loved d way Ragkor consoled Ria nd gave her d courge nd told her not to cry👏

It's good tht Ragkor thought abt their safety bring dem to d plantation guest house..hoping to see d escort nd d driver getting d strongest punishment possible as per our law..kudos to u Sumi di for raising ur voice against dis ugly truth of our society through ur writing 👏👏👏👏

Yes obviously she was scared bt still she agreed to Chakor's plan which is brave..poor girl was getting tortured, blackmailed..n on top of tht her own mother was behaving so casually..not paying heed to her requests..felt so bad for her

As always u r acing it, nailing it Sumi di..keep writing,keep rocking 😊👍

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Ganga a lot. No words yaar the way you analyse my writing and feel honoured that you love mine. 🙏🙏🙏

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We are living in the world where we can’t trust anyone, including our friends and close relatives.

Daily we hear n read all kinds of child abuse and child trafficking in TV n social media.recently 8 mnths old baby was raped in Delhi and just a few months back an 8-year-old child was brutally gang-raped for days in a temple and murdered in the Kathura district of India occupied Kashmir..My heart cries whenever I hear this kind of news😭😭😭😭..once again thanks for choose this topic.

We can’t do everything but we can do Something to avert this danger…Every parents should know child's surroundings n their friends ... Whenever you notice a frightened child and behaving differently. TALK to them don’t ask many questions. Make him/her comfortable.

Don’t hesitate to talk, maybe your one step can save a valuable life..Make them bold, self-reliant and aware of their surroundings.

Loved Ur writing..chakor handled ria very well. Poor child😦 but she agreed to help chakor her courage 👏. Bravoo chakor 💪 loved the Rowdy action scenes.those punches 👊our 🦁 roaring high..Raghav Babu rockszzzzzzz driver devil😈shockssss. Keep writing more more 👏👏👏👏🙌🙌🙏

Ganga loves Ur writings too much dear ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤.I'm always says u deserves so much appreciation. And I don't think my words will do any justice to what I have to say. Ur deserve our love n apprection. I connected to Ur writing style.😍😍😍 I'm lover of Ur writings hahahah 😁😁😁😁😁😁

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Thanks so much. Thanks is a simple word but straight from my heart

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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Thanks Mahsa for the lovely words

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My Sumi dear, another emotional Heart tounching painful of ragkor Story, those moment of them about Concered for rai made me Cry, poor rai, loved the way when raghav and Chakor both wants to help rai, 👌👌👌 but Our hero raghav ki entry Damn 😍😍😍👍👍👍Our hero Vijay aced nailed it👍👍👍Thanksss a lot my Sumi dear for your Amazing Writting dear, you as always rocked dear, 👏👏👏👏👏keep rocking and Writting, awaiting for the next update dear ❤❤❤❤


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi fab dear.....as usual maidam and her raghav aced it..... they remind me of avengers end game 😜😜 don't ask why though!

Poor RIA..... felt bad for her and the stupid mother also in a way..... but just imagine how it must be for the ones with whom it actually happens!!! More than the physical scar it's the mental scar that remains... for some.. lifelong.... even the thought is terrible

And nowadays there are so many cases coming up... gives goosebumps

Good you chose to write about it..... doing it well... update soon🙈

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