The touch…Completed Final Update Page 7……My Ra4gKor - Page 5

Sumi dear🤗

Part2

It was emotional , but courageous and with serves such low fellows right moments.

Superbly written, Poor girl ,yes if trust broken,it hurts badly and the mental trauma is never an easy one to come out of.

Felt sad for Ria, inturn for so many girls who went through this situation. its really hard at heart to even think what they had gone thru or empathise it. sadly Such news we read now and then..and it just boils and make us dread at the same time.

besides the trauma, Ria accepted to do as chakor said, was ready to board van again, indeed courageous , kudis to her and chakor for bringing that strength in that girl.

the van incident was again sad but just loved how RR made the entry, was giving them non stop , in his style , even not listening to chakor's stop.

my heart was like Raghav, they deserve more, for once , not only you , my heart also dont want to listen to chakor, who normally admires her and love her a lot.. those low lifes deserve more for doing it to a child.

That smashing was giving a relief.

then loved how Ragkor took care of Ria and all the things. making Ria stay in plantation, looking for her safety and the subsequent things done, loved your details how everything is taken care of.

the final precap , again a dreading precap, whether i will be able to read through by keeping my emotions in hold..

overall

dear. kudos.👍👏

Sumi dear🤗

Part3

Superbly written with all emotions intact, each and every details making us so emotional.

entire part was written so realistically with good mixture of content.

Starting from Fb..

it was so emotional, poor Ria , the child gone thru this much and chakor state ,anyhow had to reach truth and make that fellows punished, that last question couldnt be asked fully, ria replying, and their tears and hug , i can solely imagine😔 ..

then RagKor coming up with a plan, encouraging ria to gain her confidence and insist on punishing , finally all done good.

Then the scene at commissioner office, not only Raghav, most of us cant keep.our calmness , i can totally understand hus emotions,

then chakor asking him to calm down, trying to calm him with the hug and words, he feeling good ...we felt little soothing too

then the thoughts of chakor on creating awareness, step taken towards it ..both RagKor achieving it, commissioner praise, involving boys .. all good. ya his eagle is always right. and not to forget the last eyelick❤ , i can truly visualise.

Then the scene of Ria with boys, soothing indeed. she was slowing getting back to normal and all three laughing out on Raghav's smashing, we had a hearty laugh too💕..

then finally she gave a small hug and kiss raghav on cheeks, denoting slowly the little girl has been got out of the trauma❤ so relieving it was.

Then Ragkor sitting ❤ and the boys teaching roses to tackle such situation👍👏 , protective bros, then all four hugging raghav, chakor's pouting , all was love💕.

then the scene between chakor and Arjun, mumma and son, do I have to tell you that I loved it to core..those emotions i could really visualise❤

And the final precap tease😁 really you thought you gonna be allowed to stop right there after writing happily lived everafter😜

I knew the other part has to come up😉

Sumi dear 🤗

part4

where should I start..first let me tell you, not only you are good at weaving a beautiful story with the current incidents that affects you , you add some seasonal details or points to your story too very well, like you have added chakor teaching boys in the months thats known for exams. 😎😁😁..

ok fun apart, you have written it so aptly and Ragkor had to be busy to have a delicious dinner😉.

Both at balcony, he carried her always😍 to bed,those cuddling and warmth🧡 then his birdie being vulnerable , though I love her eagle avatar a lot, I always love this vulnerable side of your birdie when she is with her love&life a lot more.

I loved how they cutely said, raghav is only to chakor and chakor to raghav..and then the talk about two touches 🙈🙈😁

I just loved how she pretend to sleep for him but he knows her better, asked for soothing her, she turned though telling not to, then he made her sleep .. thats lovable.

And the precap, I know 🙈 moments awaits😁😁

Thanks Sri for the way you loved this part

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A beautiful, soothing, blissful update😍👏as always Ragkor&AR,Aa,roses bonding was so heartwarming❤it's great tht despite d busy schedule Chakor still manages to find time to help d boys during their exams n Raghav takes care of d roses..

Ragkor's balcony moment,their subsequent conversation in d bedroom was❤❤Raghav closing Chakor's mouth when she was saying sorry..typical Raghav style response😁🙈vulnerable Chakor,d way Raghav consoled her,their cuteness overloaded convo❤😍Chakor pouting cutely&saying Rowdy Raghav is only fr me,Raghav saying sexy birdie is only for dis rustic rowdy..so cute❤thn Raghav asking I know only two touches, is it good or bad..😄🙈😉Chakor replying bad coz tht makes me forgot everything n make me crave for my rowdy more & more..so sweet & romantic❤

n last bt not d least Raghav giving cozy feeling to Chakor so tht she could sleep😍perfect icing on d cake❤❤

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Umaaa🤗🤗🤗

Each hug for each part you took all the effort to write down and do I need to say Sumi goes bonkers when she sees your gifs and those beautiful you pick aptly.

Yes we all love the eagle but the true self of her is the birdie which is brought out only with her love and life.

😳About precap,. arey to save your furnitures i asked everyone if it can be simple but all are wanting you to refurbish.... What do I do deary😉

he he I try to be logic in making their moments memorable ☺️

tranquility was indeed a solace❤️

Both saying that they are only for each other and that there should be no one like the other is choooo cutie pie...

hee hee the good touch and bad touch....my RR will never change😉

she trying to pretend to sleep for him and he knowing that she is not is again one cutie pie

last para...i am not saying anything...only mmmm bhi ahhh bhi😉

when is the next update?????

Thanks Smita for that lovely comment. Always a pleasure to read yours.

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Part 3:The flash back was too painful, I got stricken reading this update . Ria was so frightened & shattered due to this shocking incident happened with her. When she was describing the whole incident to Chakor , it was painful to listen for Chakor as it was equally painful for me to read . I got scared even imagining about this, was shivering in anger . How can a person do such flagitious act with a child. Hat's off to Chakor as the way she gave her courage, consoled her , advised her not to bow down before fear & injustice , was really commendable . I think all should be done by Riya's mom but she was not cognizant of all this as she thought it was her pretext for not to go to school, so ridiculous but may be it's natural. Love & respect Chakor even more for the way she planed everything to catch the perpetrators with evidence & the execution with the mini spy camera with a microphone hiding in a small button, was so outstanding & must be appreciated. And then the final action, furious Raghav & his anti- suppression style was always a threat to evil person but a treat to us. The entire scene of the Commissioner's office was well written , Chakor's every word was so pointful, it's important to spread the awareness to avoid & stop such horrible incident, the necessary arrangements & the every possible way should be taken. The perpetrators must be intimidated. Loved that they assured that being a minor the girl's name will not come out & she will not have to go to the Court. Loved the enraged, irritated, uncontrollable Raghav (who is controllable only by his Chakor ) and his concern for the small girl . Loved the way Chakor calmed down her angry Lion. His cupping her face, tight hug for gaining the strength from her ,the eyelock everything was perfect. It's good to see that Riya was back to normal after the medical counselling , her lovely friendship with Ar & Aa, their laughter moment was so adorable , though Ar was agitated hearing a little bit of the incident from Riya. The Raghav -Riya scene was very heartwarming, there was a time when she was scared to see him & hide behind Chakor as that time she couldn't trust anyone but now she could understand that Ragkor are her well wisher, her protector. So she trusted him ,asked Raaghav to bend down , hugged him with tears & thanked him kissing on his cheek & he too kissed her back on her forehead, wiping her tears. That's lovely.The balcony scene was so soothing. Loved the protective brothers & the way Ar was teaching the roses about the good & bad touch & when they should give a kiss and when should give a tappal tap . It's so delightful. And lastly the mother son scene where both of them thanked each other for coming their lives. The family bonding & their love, happiness was so adorable & pleasant . Over all a fantastic update, the beginning of which is painful but the end is joyful. Thank you Sumi for writing this story, I guess it's too long comment but as usual couldn't control. Your story & the ficfam made me forget that all are fictional characters as I'm too fond of this family. Let's see what will come in next part, I'm sure some hot & romantic scenes are waiting for us as I know you never ended a story without a hot Ragkor romance. It's next to impossible.

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hahhah even If I want to give a happy simple ending... its become by default with tantantanntan moments..

If I dare I know who will be the first to pull the trigger on me🤣

Smita thanks so so much for your lovely words ....

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Part 4:

The tranquality part actually gave me the solace. It's good that Ragkor's life has started to move in the old & sweet rhythm. Everyone is busy in their own task. Chakor was strict about the boys lesson & take care of their teaching, avoiding any private tuition, boys are happy with it, Raghav taking care of the roses, brought dinner, fed Chakor & the boys, reminds me of my school days, all were going so perfectly. Indeed School days are the most happy & memorable days of our lives. Loved the normal happy family moments. Then the balcony scene was so blissful , she slept off & he carried her to their bed, so Raghav babu does this everyday, that's so sweet of him. She said sorry for not giving him time & not taking care of him due to her hectic schedule & his shutting up her mouth in his unique style just wow Then her sudden restlessness, tears remembering Riya , his consolation words to her saying all men are same & the way she raised an objection & said exactly the words which I always believe & say that "wish all girls get a husband like Raghav " but I must obey to her that Rowdy is only for Chakor & as per him SB is only for RR . The entire scene was quite realistic & beautiful . Then Raghav gave her details of his known two touches which made her blushing & me too . Then her pretending to sleep , his asking for to cozy with her, the way he made her asleep was so hot & sweet . The precap is seemed very interesting. But can you finish it without a hot, & romantic dinner or dessert which make us all blushing & sweating again . Do you think you can able to escape without giving some hot & bold update?? I don't think so .

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Sumi diiii wonderful updates.. ❤❤❤

Thank u so much for wonderful updates dii..felt sad for ria😕😕it was very emotional n sad update.but thanks chakor for handled ria very well n bringing that strength in that girl.hatts off to her 👏👏👏 n loved the way ragkor took care of ria family n her safety.

Wahhh loved Raghav action avtar those punches 💪💪👊👊👊 Raghav fire 🔥 🔥n loved 3 friends 😘😘😘 finally Ria back to normal condition ❤💛💛 Aa Ar protecting n caring brothers I love them so much,😘😘

Ufff n balcony scene n their hug n kiss 😍😍😍😍😍n their soothing moments😘🙈🙈loved it so much. Hehe Im blushing blushing 😜😜

And precap uffff eagarly waiting for hot update 😍😍😍😍😍😘😘can't wait ❤❤❤thank u so much sumi Dii❤❤❤😘😘🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Part 5

The Toucchhhhh….Love making only with love….. (tantantannatan)

The morning dawned fine.. he got up early as always, got the boys ready for school, she was busy getting the roses ready… her sessions were in the noon. She was revising with them the most important questions. Giving them the tips saying write the easy ones first and then do the rest. Mumma... we are well prepared... all are easy, the cubs said. Hmm. She kissed and wished the boys good luck. Kissed the roses..... He kissed her on her forehead. She waved them all... He was driving them to school while the kids were discussing the questions. Arjun asked Daddy.. how is that mumma knows everything... she is so strong... she never fears anything na.. and he just hugged him.. thank you so much daddy for taking care of Ria and also us. You take care of us and plantation and always support mumma.. you must also be tired na daddy... you sleep after making us sleep and get up before us.. Thank you for everything daddy... Raaghav was all tears.. beta I never get tired as you all are my life... excel like mumma in everything he said.. Daddy, you are too excellent in everything.. strong and loving... we promise we will fulfill all your dreams and soon make you relax like how you take care of kaaka. Arey young man hum abihi jawan hai he said..winking.. Yes daddy, hamara daddy, handsometa and strongest......We love you daddy hugged the cubs.. Rowdy rosey stood up and said I lub you daddy and the cutie rose kissed him. Ria was picked who kissed Raaghav on his cheeks, goodmorning uncle all smiles. kissing on her forehead...good day beta... the Rover was in all happy mood.. . he was all smiles thinking about his birdie who excels in everything...still shows her true self, her vulnerable side only to him... Wishing them good luck Raaghav dropped them and returned to the Mansion to get ready for his meeting.

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She was in a simple dress a loose short top with a knee length skirt knotted her hair up… keeping the folded clothes in the cupboards.. thinking about him, the way he supports her always, takes care of everything and allowing her to fly high.. and still being innocent in many things..My innocent but Rustic Angry Rowdy....she blushed just at the thought of him soothing her to sleep..

He walked in gave a brief kiss and went to shower..She saw him through the mirror… smiled… he walked in after bath with a towel, he hugged her from behind… thanks for the sleep she said… What time is your meeting she asked. Nuzzling her…. In another 45 minutes I need to leave he said…I love you he said crushing her.. you smell good, soothing her tops caressing her twinies… wow!and plain too…hmmm kissing her in the nape. She raised her head allowing him to kiss deeper..he kissed her snaking through her short tops which was revealing her naval. He held himself with great difficulty.

He went to the dressing table looking out for the comb when he saw through the mirror, she was closing the doors and the windows and the balcony doors too… he smiled and tried ignoring her… He was handsome with bare torso, well toned long legs, his shaped waist which had the towel around him and his strong arms and biceps and his toned front packs which was seen through the mirror would make anyone go down weak on their knees. She came to him behind and hugged his bare torso… his cologne was making her dizzy…pressing herself on him she passed her hands through his side caressing his chest in the front… he grabbed her head from behind and brought her to the front locking her eyes..... She was garlanding him, when he drew her close… winking , kissing him…going close to his ears.. 45 minutes isn’t that enough for a quick breakfast she said…… whissstlinngggg…yessss his eyes was shining bright….she moved him slowly to the dressing table to sit… unknotting his towel, with her legs on both sides sat on him… … kissing his neck groping his chest… kissing his lips …

With eyes wide …holding her waist he said…. Looks like Blue Moon has come during the day…my Queen is in good mood… kissing her..

she looked at him very very seductively… crushing herself on him… … he was getting aroused… kissing her twinies over the tops …… he removed it and threw it…. she bend her head back when he held her and started playing with her beautiful toned assets with hardened peaks… sucking it, licking it both, very passionately both were going into a bliss… he removed her knot and her hair fell in front covering her assets which made her look so seductive… he pushed the strands brushing over the assets which was hardening her peaks more… He slowly soothed through her skirt realizing she was bare beneath too… looks like my sexy birdie is all set to create havoc…

Seductively smiling, she said holding his neck back..Raaghav Baabu I miss your warmth Bey!!! His voice was turning hoarse…Acchaaaa…..eyes turning dark with desire…My sexy birdie…. Yeh kaamaalhai bey…..she was kissing his neck, his cheeks while he was just enjoying her attack on him…. She was loving him in her way……her sweety inside her skirt was creating havoc on his naughty which was arousing and growing… ….circling her inner thighs…He unclasped her skirt.. she was like a sculpture ….absolutely beautiful, pink lips… hair splayed, hardened peaks, pink toned assets which were indeed big… heaving…her curves were perfect… she was inviting. she lifted herself and slowly went down on him while he was grown.. he was moving her with passionate rhythm which both were subliming into …. Love sees no time….

He was looking ravishing like the Roman sculpture, toned torso, eyes full of desire.. strong toned legs.. his biceps holding her, making her comfortable…. Chakkoooor he called…. Hmmmmm….. how come my Queen is treating me… she looked into his eyes…hey handsometaaa…. treat for soothing me sleep the last few nights…treat for not taking care of you…….hmmm… pressing herself hard on him… treat for having the best husband…. Raaaghav he was enjoying the sensation she was creating and was placing kisses on her. Is it getting late ? she asked.

He said… enjoying her boldness….Everything can wait in front of you. Brushing her cheeks and her neck ….I am not that lucky to have my romantic birdie often…so when I, I have to make best the most… he was trailing kisses…..caressing her waist and her lower behind. Pushing her strands he said you look so beautiful.. helping her with the rhythm … kissed her valley and was enjoying his dessert even before the breakfast. You are making me go crazy he said.

Crazy fellow, can we go to the bed please … she was full of love…… is the breakfast unlimited he asked?? … she kissed not today please. Not that I crib….slowly made her get up and he carried her close to his heart , Kissing her ... hugging her preciously...… they sat on their bed and for the first time she bit him and licked on his torso tips…she had found that was his soft spot during their explosion. He moaned. … making her lie down… kissing her twinies with love, sucking them with lust… no words…trailing kisses from her naval till up to her lips, eyes on her…desire and passion…. Kissing her all over, caressing her waist, kissing hard on her naval, her bulges behind down…. soothingly.. …he came up reached for his packet.

Holding his face, looking into his eyes …Do you love me ? she asked….. how do I prove? he asked…. Prove me smoothly, blissfully like a poetry she said….kissing her...he got into her warmth very very smoothly and but firmly slowly took the pace ….both very beautifully were writing their poetry … it was bliss, Raaghav she was moaning… and that was making him go all the more crazy…. Chakooooorrrr… I love you he said and than….pulling him on her she closed his mouth… invading him…taking control of his mouth ……her tongue was exploring his mouth while he was exploring her warmth … it was a soothing poetry.. subliming in love…. with sweet moanings… mingling with each other..…entwining with each other….with lots of sweet kisses…. They wrote the poetry in unison …and reached the bliss calling each others name with utmost love. She closed her eyes in reviere, while he fell on her… both heaving together… He made love to her in the most blissful way…she held him, digging her nails into him, pressing him further….just wanting him still in. caressing his back... she said thank you Raaghav and sorry i kept you wait.... he cupped her chin and closed her kissing her expressing all his thanks and love in that kiss of his, nibbling her lips...sucking all the juices from her..

He came down next to her … he brought her over him, … thank you for coming in my life he said… thank you for having the faith and waiting for me….she said…both were in bliss…her beautiful face, her innocent eyes just made him loose himself in those....

He held her chin….. kissing her softly…. My wait is worth the wait he winked …You need to leave she said….Hmmmm but I just don’t want to he said… Chalooo shesaid but at the same time she was hugging him. It was sweet love, not the fiery passion but a melody, smooth melancholy.

Raaghav …. Hmmmmm get up she said…. Ummmm kissing her hard…. He quickly showered got dressed, grabbed the Rover Keys … She showered and came, kissing her he said in her ears… be plain always in our room…. Makes it easy winking at her. Chup IR.. whaattt??? Insatiable Rowdie… oh! I don’t mind any name my dear wifey My Sexxxyyyyyyy Birdieeee……kissing her…he could not get enough of her!!!!

Thanks for the exquisite breakfast he said…. Be ready for lunch…whaat?? how about unlimited Thaali….…. Shut up she said… Today you are going to be on fast!!! I don’t mind to fast if you will be the feast!!! Goddd insatiable you are…she said….only me?? He asked…pulling her close lifting her chin, rubbing her lips… winking very softly smirking who wanted the quick chatpata bites… she blushed, going red, lowering her eyes…hmm but that was the best till now…aaahaannn feeling proud…quickly coming to sense… she said…I will kill you… I don’t mind to be killed like that. Shut up she said.. before he could say anything She grabbed his collar and gave one hard kiss on his lips and said I love you…My Rustic Rowdy. Have a good day! You tooo! Soothing his lips with his tongue… he said I love you too My Sexy Birdie.

He ran contended with a happy smile on his face……

Raaghav baabu called Girija.... Haan Mausi… aapka naastha thayyar…. He came down the stairs saying… Maassi Naastha bi hogay aur moo meetha be… looking up to Chakor who was glaring him….. hmmm smiling Girija brought his favorite aloo paratha and dahi packed in two small boxes…pathaa hai, phir bi… lo…raastey mei kaaleejiye…aur yeh Shyam saab ko dedho.. taking the boxes, He side hugged her, Mausi, falling at her feet bless me, today is a very important meeting, hope I win that for the benefit of many. She blessed him aap zaruur safal hojayengey!!! Praying to Daak Baaba…!!! please please keep my bitiya and this pure soul always happy…. Happy tears in her eyes….

He got on to the Rover looking up . With all smiles she waved him from their room window…. Exchanging flying kisses….. he drove his Rover relishing his breakfast! And looking at the breakfast which was indeed packed with love for him.

Indeed the day turned awesome for him and the children! The meeting went on well with they signing for a good contract and the boys did their exams very well!!!

They touched their souls with each other, made love with each other but making love always need not be lustful, fiery …. She loved him and he loved her for coming into each other’s lives and they did make love in the most lovable passionate way….

I was also happy way too happy for my Ra4gKor ficfam.

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The Trigger (Why I wrote this story)

Thanks all girls for supporting me in this most emotional journey as writing about the trauma of Ria I was tearing a lot….but we have to be aware of what’s happening.

What triggered me to write… just a brief…

I was starting to my work around 6:30 am when I walked down for my shuttle I saw a school auto in my premises. The little girl from my apartment was sitting inside must be around 8 years. They were waiting for few other kids to come.The driver guy was trying to play sitting beside… I could sense the girl was not comfortable… I went by very casually and said girl your uniform shirt is not tucked alright, go inside and set it right as there are CCTVs everywhere around in our apartment and the security will be watching the recording. He got my underlined message and quickly sat on his driver’s seat. Her eyes thanked me…she got down from the auto quickly.. (luckily nothing bad had happened maybe we nipped it in the bud)

I walked past…called her mom and just asked her to keep a tab… while our security was alerted to play a part in watching out… we have put up posters every where about good and bad touches in our apartment common areas and in lifts too and to shout but still kids are kids…. Fear and Panic creeps in before they can open their mouth.

The outcome: the kids wait for each other near the park near our maintenance office and then board their vans/autos/school bus together. Also any one of the parents takes turn to wait with the children.

My little drop : We have to invoke the eagle, the Chakor in each one of us when we sense trouble… Instill the fear in the minds of the predators that the society is watching them and are not silent spectators. Let’snot wait to punish rather than create awareness to prevent.

My two cents.

Truly in this journey all your words of encouragement did TOUCH my heart to write this sensitive story.

A BIG BIG THANKS TO ALL

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