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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear🤗

I awaited something new from you and this one is a very sensitive and much needed one. I am glad you decided to touch those areas in your story. bring it on..awaiting.😊

As always sneak peak intrigues to read more

Thanks so much Uma for your words which means a lot.

Yes the ugly side.....

Let's battle together

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The touch……………Ra4gKor

I am touching the ugly side of our society which I witnessed and felt appalled. It may not be thrill and suspense but yes we can do our bit to curb such perpetrators

Part I Trouble

Even since the Coach’s seminar, Chakor had been invited to coach the new team of girls who are participating in the National Marathoning in three months time. She was busy scheduling their practice regime and also her coaching at school, kids, helping Kaaka and Raaghav, she was swirling.

Raaghav was also busy in his new orders and also he was working with few social welfare schemes of the state government for woman and children.

Life was going on with its own challenges but still RagKor was through as the school exams were also round the corner.

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No mumma… I don’t want to go to school cried Ria, the twins best pal…

Why..is your Mam scolding you?… No she said… any friends are fighting with you? No she said …then why. Her mum started shouting at her.. You are lazy so you don’t want to go. …its been two weeks now.

Ria was very dull, mum said no you cannot refuse, I will drop you to school. She dragged her. The little girl who is now ten years like the boys was crying ok will you pick me back please, I don’t want to go. I cannot come to pick you, I have work…

Arjun and Aayansh asked her why is she very dull nowadays. Its been quite some time and she is not speaking to them properly. Is she angry or upset with them?

As the school was nearing to the last period Ria started to shudder…

Arjun asked her…why is she very nervous. She said nothing, but I don’t want to come to school… mumbling within herself

Why…..she just kept quiet… she was looking pale.

Arjun was thinking , why what happened to his best pal who was cheerful, bubbly and now she wants to stay alone always..

Aaa asked Ar what happened what are you thinking??

He said nothing… Was thinking about Ria… Aa said must be she is angry because that day I did not give her the chocolates…

Raaghav came to pick the kids when Ar was very dull, young man whats up he asked… daddy Ria is very upset… oh call her… she came with her face down..

Raaghav went down held her hands.. Ria… she shuddered taking her hands and going back slowly… yes uncle… shall I drop you home he asked. Without lifting her head she said no Uncle. The van will come…

She was crying… it was new for the boys…

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The roses were playing with their bros…

Ar was in the thinking mode.. Two staff teenage boys from the plantation came to meet Raaghav when they saw the girls they were playing with them, one lifted the girls and tried to kiss when Chakor came and very casually called the boy Deeraj, kaisey hi, Saab ander hi and took Ananya away from him.

She asked Aa to take the roses as they have come to meet Raaghav and not to be disturbed….

They were at the dinner when all had food and was together as always in the master bedroom…. The princesses were playing on their dada going all over and he was kissing them ….

Arjun,called Chakor what happened what are you thinking she asked.

Mumma,why did you take away Ananya from Deeraj bhai he asked. Raaghav was surprised… You never did that before.

Chakor smiled, she was so proud of Arjun's smarntness always . she called her boys made them sit beside her…. She said I think it’s time I tell you certain things. She started explaining to them about touches….. good touch, bad touch…. How to be aware of it. She said not all men and women are bad but we should be careful… Deeraj lifted Ananya but he was trying to kiss her not on her forehead or hands but on her lips, which is not good as one it is unhygienic and secondly a stranger should not do it. It holds good for all. She explained all the sensitive touch points and said if someone, even a known person to us or a stranger of any age try to make you feel uncomfortable you should not fear but shout and tell your parents, teacher or anyone whom you trust the most. Such act should not be encouraged.

Raaghav was startled… Kya Chakor aisa bi hota hai kya? Bachi hai he said aur Deeraj is a good guy…. She said Raaghav you are too naïve the world is filled with many types of people. Not all are like you. I don’t say Deeraj is bad but we should be aware of what’s happening. Hmm ok GD you know better… I know only one touch and that too only with…………..he got a death glare from his SB…he held both his ears.

They all kissed and Raaghav carried the roses to their beds…. Kissed them and said dare anyone touch you both with wrong intention… they will have nothing to be touched upon.

Aayansh slept off ….. but Arjun was thinking….. Chakor saw the boys room light was still on and walked in to his room.

Mumma he came running hugging her… she caressed his head, what’s bothering you beta she asked. He told about Ria. She has never been so dull and she says she does not want to come to school too.

Why didn’t you tell me earlier she asked…. You say for the past two weeks she is not alright.

I asked her mumma, but nowadays she cries a lot, and does not want to talk too.

He then said mumma can you speak about the Touches in class so that all know about it.

Sure…good night go sleep she said kissing him on his forehead. He kissed her back on her cheeks. Thank you mumma…

Chakor was pondering in thoughts about Ria……

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She was tired too she had a quick shower and changed to her pyjama and loose top…and was waiting for him in the balcony…She was chewing the words of Arjun. Something was bothering her very much…

He came and back hugged her…what are you thinking now he asked…she told about Arjun’s concern about Ria.. He smiled….have to be careful with the Chota Rowdy he said…too worried about Ria…. She smiled he is concerned too Raaghav…. Is there anything bothering that child?? She asked… don’t know, when I asked if I could drop her, that bubbly child indeed did not look up to me but refused too. Hmmmmm…. May be her mother would have scolded… don’t break your head he said…. Hmmmm…she kissed his cheek… I am too tired Raaghav she said…. Hmm he carried her to bed….

Cuddling in his warmth. He was kissing her forehead and slept. She couldnot sleep. She was twisting and turning, restless, and he woke up. Not getting sleep??? Hmmm going into him…shall I cozy you to sleep he asked….

Nothing please I am tired she said. He smiled nuzzled her… just will soothe you…promise nothing more… hmmm.. No touching he said….

He slowly rolled up her tops which was bare as she never wore any inner while sleeping… Firstly, its free and second and most important was it was his request too to have a soothing dessert at times and ofcourse only if she wishes and if he is lucky….

Raaghav no please she said.

Trust me…he slid a little low, keeping his face between her assets. They were soft, pink and beautiful…He started sucking them soothingly, very very softly with his mouth, not tingling her tips... He did not touch them as his mere touch ignites sensations. There was no lust. It was so very blissful…so soothing, kissing his forehead hugging his head she drifted into sleep though it took a long time for him to control his natural urge…. But he put her to sleep. Slowly raised himself and kissed her on her forehead. She turned when he brought down her tops slowly… Sleep my dear. He hugged her very cozily brought the quilt over them and drifted into sleep.. Not every act of love leads to lust… for love is pure…. And Raaghav’s love is pure unadulterated…. He looked at her and said, don’t know whats going in your brain now….

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The Principal was happy that Chakor took the initiative to talk to the children though they had a tie up with counselling institutes.

Chakor explained to the children about various touches and how not to fear and inform the elders.

She searched for Ria… she was informed she was absent. She checked the school register and found that Ria had not come to school for two days as she was down with fever.

Arjun was not fine and asked Chakor if they could visit her home. Ria has been with the boys since the preschool and had never ever stayed away or been dull. Mumma I feel something wrong, only you can find out and help Ria. Will you help mumma he asked her.. I am proud of you Arjun as you worry about your friend… we will find out.

They visited her, her mom was at home but was ready to go to her work which was during the afternoon. Ria was sleeping in a corner in the dark room… her mother said that she is having fever and also not talking with anyone. She was blaming that maybe she did not want to study and did not want to go to school. Ria looked at Chakor, looking up to her eyes…she hugged her shuddered and cried…. she did not speak anything … Chakor asked Arjun to go to his martial arts classes while she will be in Ria’s house. He should finish his class and return to Ria’s house so that they can go home together. Ria’s mom had to go to work and Chakor said she can take care of Ria till she come back… All the while Ria was just hugging Chakor….

Chakor looked into Ria’s eyes and said… don’t fear anything, tell me dear what’s bothering you… Nothing aunty she said. She was trembling… She hugged Ria and said please tell me I can help you. I will not tell anyone. Nooo ... after much cajoling the poor child opened her mouth and spoke, spoke the ugly side of the society…. Chakor hugged her close, cried and at the same time the birdie was turning into the eagle……She called Raaghav and spoke to him. The Lion roared….. his eyes turned red.. he spoke to his IT guy and went to pick up Chakor and Arjun.

Ria smiled very weakly…. Ok aunty I will do as you say but…… Trust me nothing will happen toyou….. she said….

Ria spoke to her mom and said that she will go to school the next day .

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The Rover waited in thecorner of the road. The van came and Ria got into the van….

oh god superrrrrr

i am dreading the van and also what would have happened till now with ria.... i hope not much

Little upset with the mother though😡very typical reaction

Love AR for his smartness and concern......full fida....and good she stopped dheeraj subtly.....didnt like it

PS....dude is dude.....no chance left😉

So let the update be quick dear😛

Thank you Mahsa for the lovely words on insta

My Sumi dear I Want to Say you I am Really Glad and Happy you Decided to Writes with your Magical Writting dear, I am Sure my Sumi dear will be always aced it 😊👍you Really made us More Happy dear 😍😍😍and like Our friends on indiaforms Said yes sensitive topic and as always full of thrill drama and full of bliss Magic, 👍👍loved those Converstion of Chakor with his Sons arjun he likes his mother Chakor thinkly Smartly👍and those romantic Magical moment of raghav and Chakor are bliss 😍😍😍those kisshead Smile more loved it dear,

Thanksss a lot my Sumi dear Amazing Magical writting dear, More Excited and Waiting for the next update dear, 😘😘😘❤❤❤👍👍👍

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Originally posted by: 77nikita

oh god superrrrrr

i am dreading the van and also what would have happened till now with ria.... i hope not much

Little upset with the mother though😡very typical reaction

Love AR for his smartness and concern......full fida....and good she stopped dheeraj subtly.....didnt like it

PS....dude is dude.....no chance left😉

So let the update be quick dear😛

Hmm let's hope not much

Yes the typical reaction of not trusting.

😜😜Chota Rowdy but my smarto

Dude 🙈🙈 you know your RR better...

Update bossy aap pehle 😉

Sumi dear🤗

you have written it so neatly and fantafab with the emotions involved there. be it Arjun's, chakor's and Ria's

Since its very sensitive topic, I was dreading too that what would have happened, how much scarier it would had been, and what effects we will go through reading the trauma of the little child.

but writing with Arjun-Chakor combo you had won me over and gave the right soothing feel thats needed to read through the ugly side of people too in story.

Poor Ria, those trembling shudders and even not talking to the person you knew , really little girl has gone through lot and in a big trauma and its realistic , hope the eagle and lion torn those persons into pieces. i really wish such persons are torned for in real too..

loved the smart arjun noticing the change in Ria, observing chakor action and relating all of it and asking chakor for help. a smarty good boy..love the mumma-son scene right from his bedroom to ria home.

chakor stopping dheeraj, i am glad, speaking in school , talking to ria, all i can visualise and typical chakor.

chakor as to come to rescue , so mom has to be like tht ..lol... but ya moms are like tht, they dont trust their little kids easily...

all are fine but among this too, Raghav babu find a way to soothe her🙈😄 ...but i found that cuddling, forehead kiss and his intention to make her have a peaceful sleep are love. Raghav and Raghkor is ❤

And raghav's lines

dare anyone touch you both with wrong intention… they will have nothing to be touched upon.

I loved it..do it raghav

Thanks Sukor123 for the lovely words

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Super duper update with such difficult social issues Thanks for writing on this social issues that became ugly truth in our society

I loved Ar smartness his concern for his friend ria Loved the way Chakor told children about good & bad touches & also she concern for Ananya & take away her for dheeraj Haha our Raghav babu always ready for take advantage from Chakor & when he said I know only one touch & that is with u aww our Raghav babu is so innocent & when Chakor gave him a death glare & he held his ears it was too cute 😍😍😍

Eagarly waiting for next update

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Thanks so so much Smita for the lovely analysis.. Also for taking the time to read and share..

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First of all thank you Sumi for voicing about such sensitive issue & embellishing it 👏👏. Only you can write it in such way & do justice to such topic . That's why I became your fan🙏🙏. It is undeniable that Child Abuseing is a complex & serious social issue which is constantly increasing & spreading in society be it upper class or lower class but it can be suppressed in our joint efforts. Need to raise awareness. Every child should be acquainted about this matter & like Chakor every parents should make their offspring realize about the bad & good touch.

I loved Ar for his discretion & sensitivity. He is not only a rowdy like his father but sensible too like his mom as he was in deep thought about Riya's strange behavior, her shuddering & crying. After hearing Chakor he realized what could happen to his friend Riya. Loved the way he hugged Chakor, told everything, asked her to speak about it in the class.

Loved Raghav for the way he made her feel easy & comfortable & calm, controlling his natural urge, let her sleep.

It's sad that Riya had fever due to dismay, even her mom didn't realize anything but finally she spoke up to Chakor about the shocking, ugly reality of the so called modern & developed society. Let's see how the Eagle & Lion will handle the matter.

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Dear Sritama thanks so much for always encouraging and supporting my stories

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Such an intriguing, hard hitting story..glad tht u choose such a sensitive & relevant subject which unfortunately d ugly reality of today's life..feeling so bad for Ria..have to say her mother's attitude is very disappointing..bt full marks to Ar for his concern, care..hats off to him.. hd way he desperately tried to uncover d truth behind Ria's changed behaviour was so heartwarming..loved d way Chakor smartly stopped Dheeraj frm kissing Anannya nd how she explained d matter to Ar in detailed..

As always our rowdy was in his elements😍😉loved d way he joked abt Ar's concern😆loved Ragkor's soothing romance💜💜Raghav babu always ready for his dessert 🙈 can't wait to see how will Ragkor save Ria& nab d culprit..eagerly waiting for d next part..as always great going Sumi di👏👏👏👌👌

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Thanks so much uma.. Loved your precise and 👍👏👏👏 as always the best line

Hmm true sometimes it's is so Ugly that we do not want to even think about but reality it is not possible as we need to deal with it.

Raaghav hehe😜 dude knows his way out

Thanks deary