My First story : Love by chance #3 Part 27 on pg 112 May 26 - Page 31

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshine_DivAn

MIMD blowing update harshi

Really this is a unique date & unique thinking just like u only u can think it
Banner was so perfect
Loved the date fully
Omggg they kissed 😛
Can't wait for next..

Thanks harshu

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: EmeraldStar

Awesome Update
Ishra on date
Both are nervous
He planned So many surprises for ishu
Ishra moments 😳
Thanks for the pm :)

Thanks dear
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😉😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhiyashah

Loved it
Waiting for next update

Glad u liked it
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Posted: 6 years ago
Part 22



Happy Gandhi Jayanti"



Ishita - Mr Lrll ..

Raman - hmm..

Ishita - kuch puchu?..

Raman - hmm ..

Ishita - WO ..

Raman - what happened jhalli why are u fumbling? Jo puchna hai bol mujhe without any hesitation..

Ishita - it was our first kiss and...

Raman - and...

Ishita - was it good, I mean you enjoyed it... I mean liked it na..

Raman immediately parted "jhalli had u kissed someone before me?

Ishita - nooo are you mad you know naa how much I love you & you are my first & only love..

Raman - then how do you know about all this aur abhi jab tune mujhe kiss kiya tab to bilkul nhi LGA that u r expert in it..

Ishita- actually I had searched in it on internet.. She said making him shocked

Raman - whattt? U googled about it but why?

Ishita - actually my friends had told me that their bf had ditched them as they don't know how to kiss & pleasure them. I didn't want you to leave me as I can't live without you ..she said cutely while her eyes welled up

He cupped her face wiping her tears "aww my baby stop crying you know you are sooo cute & adorable like a small baby. Tune aisa socha bhi kaise that I'll leave you for this silly reason

Ishita - unke bhi bf ne unhe isliye chodh diya..

Raman - jhalli do u think I'm like those boys? He asked cupping her face. She nodded in no & hugged him tightly without saying anything but he felt something more so he called her "jhalli
She hummed in response

Raman - do you trust me?

Ishita - ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai of course I do but why you asked this suddenly?

Raman - first tell me what's the matter?

Ishita - which matter? ..she asked in confusion

Raman - I know something is bothering you about our relationship so please tell me & if u still want time to think I am ready to give you time ..he said assuring her

Ishita - no Mr lrll aisa kuch nahi I'm very much serious about our relationship & very happy to have you in my life..

Raman - then why these insecurity jhalli please share with me please..he said keeping his hand on her giving her much needed strength

Ishita - actually Mr lrll I had seen so many break ups of my friends from my first year of college but it's never affected them at all. They were so casual about it but I'm not that type of person who just for sake of fashion gets into a relationship & then break it saying that now I'm "Bored. You know my friends always ask me that why I'm not getting involved with someone or if I want they can find a guy for me I mean ye koi dress ya cosmetic nhi hai Jo koi mujhe dila de (he laughs hearing this but seeing her glare he kept finger on his mouth & signals her to continue) aur main hamesha se ek aisa relationship chahti thi which lasts forever & now when I have got you I don't want to lose you..

she said looking into his eyes & both shared a beautiful eye lock

Raman - jhalli aaj toh tune mujhe shock kr diya I mean I never expected this much seriousness from you..he said trying to lighten the atmosphere

Ishita makes an angry pout hearing this & said " you are so bad Mr lrll hmesha mujhe tease krte ho

Raman - aww my baby sorry but I really love to see this cute pout on ur face & jhalli from now I don't want these insecurities between us. For me love is the smile on your lips when I just crush you in my arms ,when we tease each other and then manaofy too, I want to walk on lone streets holding ur hand ,I want to bring a beautiful smile on ur face & all these physical things come in last ..he said hugging her & she too smiled thanking murugan for sending him for her

Ishita - Mr lrll I think I should leave now bahut late ho raha hai..


Raman - no jhalli itni jaldi nahi kuch der baad chali jana yrr..


Ishita - see the time it's already 7:30pm amma appa will reach around 9 pm so I have to reach before them ..saying gets up & turned to go but he holds her hand making her stop & back hugged her


She closed her eyes feeling his closeness while he starts singing



Jab tak tujhe pyar se
Beinteha main bhar na dun
Jab tak main duaaoon sa
Sau dafa tujhe pad na loon


He bend down on his knees & holds her hand making her smiles






Haan mere paas tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Mere sath tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Woh oh o.. (x4)



Tum aa gaye baazuon mein mere
Sau sawere liye
Sau sawere liye
Haan baadalon se utaara gaya
Tumko mere liye sirf mere liye
Jab tak meri ungliyan
Tere baalon se kuch kehna le



Jab tak teri lehar mein
Khwaahishein meri behna le
Haan mere paas tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Mere sath tum raho
Jaane ki baat na karo
Woh oh o.. (x4)


Both joined their heads together & shares a beautiful eye lock



Ishra were lost in each other when her phone starting ringing breaking their trance


Raman makes irritated face "yaar jhalli tera phone na hamare romance ke beech ki haddi hai hamesha wrong timing


Ishita smiles seeing his face "sorry na


Raman - now take call warna Teri amma yahin aa jayengi..


Ishita - how do u know that it's amma's call?


Raman - I know that she is the only one who have JANAMSIDH ADHIKAR (birth's rights) to do this..ishita laughs hearing this meanwhile phone again starts ringing


Raman again asked to take it & she did same & amma informed her that they r coming in half n hour & taking food for them so don't cook ishita agreed & both hung the call


Soon Raman dropped her in time & went from their


Ishra got so many questions from Mimi about their date & they told them everything but Skipped kiss part


Next day Mihir told everything about mihika & her family to Mr & Mrs bhalla both r happy with his choice & ask her to fix meeting with her parents which he agreed & talked with mihika & she informed amma appa about this & they too agreed..



That's all for now hope you all liked it will try to update soon..


Love

Harshita

Edited by harshiidiv - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome chappy
Update soon
Wish ishra also get engaged soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy
Update soon
Wish ishra also get engaged soon



Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
surprising that ishita learnt how to kiss from Google do that raman Wont leave her.loved raman saying that he won't leave her for such a silly reason.loved raman saying that for him love is smile on her lips.song sequence was so romantic. beautiful pics
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hie Harshu
its nice you updated this one
loved it
I loved how she talked all about her insecurities and how he made her relax and made her understand that their relationship is above all those silly things
lovely part Harshu
loved the song too

continue soon

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