AdiYa One Shot: Interruption

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Sonali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

😛 loved it please write more!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: jumz86
I loved this OS

Thank You so much! 😊

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: SewwiVB
So sweet 😆 The interrupting soul at the correct time. I found Zoya's antic really cute 😃 As you say, though they haven't expressed their feelings for each other, that bonding was precious..

Thank You!

That was the whole point of making Zoya kiss the tip of his nose.. I personally love such gestures and the reaction it gets 😆

At times words really don't matter. It's not about in how many words or in what grand gesture do you confess your love. I believe, it's more about making one feel loved than just saying it.

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ikhtiyar.
Totally loved it

Thank you very much! 😊

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
Very cute OS
WAseem uncle as always kabab mein haddi...
that should I be worried was so cute? They are yet to confess but are all possessive about each other...and that peck on the nose was so so cute and how it stunned him was dreamy
nice one
Kudos!!

Thanks a lot!

Waseem acts more than a 'kabab mein haddi' at times, but anyways!

Thank You! It's glad to know that you've like the way it all rolled out. That's more than enough for me.

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Shahnaz

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Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
😛 loved it please write more!

Thank You! I will try! I will try to write more and come up with more write ups.. as random as this one though.. or maybe more 😛

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

New One Shot:

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Another one:

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saira

@sezo

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

This is fabulous. You can't end it there I need to know what happens next. Plz do continue it. It's a beautiful is but would love for you to turn it into a ff or short story.

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sezo
This is fabulous. You can't end it there I need to know what happens next. Plz do continue it. It's a beautiful is but would love for you to turn it into a ff or short story.

Thank You! Well, why not? 😆

I am not sure if you can get to know what happens next.. but you can get a Version 2.0 for this piece.

Here, there's not much after the famous intruder interrupts the moment.

Not a multi-chapter FF but another part mostly.. I am working on it already.. halfway done. 😊