Ishra ss-mera ishq deewangi,pt 11 on pg 128,teaser on 135 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb prologue
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Author's note -here I am with part 1 of this story, but before that read
prologue of this story.

PART 1

Raman was hugging ishita happily and laughing like a maniac when ishita said with teary eyes -yeh tumne kya kiya Raman, u ruined my life along with urs. Why u did so?? She said crying when he said -maine tumse shaadi ki hai koi zindagi nahi barbaad ki hai, trust me I will keep u happy very happy. Main itne din se tumhare peeche ghoom raha tha tumhe manane ke liye but tum nahi maani, toh I had to do this. Maine wahin kiya joh karna chahiye tha, he said caressing ishita's face.

Ishita shrugged his hand and said wiping her tears -manungi toh main ab bhi nahi, I will never accept this marriage.

Raman -mat maano, tum bhale hi mat maano but main maanta hoon aur mere liye itna hi kaafi hai. He said and hold her firmly. He start taking ishita to his car when ishita said -kya kar rahe ho, mujhe kahan le jaa rahen ho.

Raman -shaadi ki hai, tumhare ghar chodne ke liye nahi. I am taking u to my house, to my room, to my family.

Ishita -main tumhare saath Kahin nahi jaane wali. She said and pushed him, she ran to her appa and said -appa please, mujhe bacha lo. I don't want to go.

Raman-tumhare appa tumhe kya bachayenge, kabhi bachaya hai joh Aap bachayenge, he always let everyone insult u, but main aisa nahi hoon, I love u and will always protect u. Tum chal rahi ho mere saath ,bas. He said holding her hand and trying to take her away.

Ishita cried for help, her amma appa came in front and appa said -u can't do this,wapas chale jaiye Mr bhalla, yaa phir hum police bulayenge, we will get u arrested. U can't take my daughter away like this.

Raman hold ishita's hand and said -i am taking her, kar lo joh karna hai. He said and was taking ishita with him when he got slapped.

Raman look at the person and Mr bhalla said -what u r doing, tumhe samajh mein bhi aa raha hai. Ek apne se badi ladki se shaadi kar ke usse ghar le jaana chahte ho, yeh kya pagalpan hai raman. Meri baat maan khol kar sunn lo. We r not going to accept this marriage.

Toshiji -haan puttar, ghar chal. Chod de yeh pagalpan. Main teri shaadi bahut achchi kudi se karwaungi.

Raman -shaadi toh meri ho gayi maa, aur sach bahut achchi ladki se hui hai.

Toshiji -yeh kya pagalpan hai puttar, aisi shaadi jisme koi khush naa rahe, uska kya matlab hai. Ishita tujhe pasand nahi karti, hum ishita ko pasand nahi karte, iss rishte ka koi future nahi.

Raman -par main ishita se pyaar karta hoon, bahut. Aur ab humne shaadi bhi kar li hai, toh Aap ghar chalo aur apni bahu ko welcome kijiye.

Toshiji -main nahi karne wali Isse welcome, yeh tujhse badi, kya khushiyan degi tujhe. Tu barbaad ho jayega Iske peeche, yeh tujhse pyaar bhi nahi karti puttar, samjhne ki koshish kar.

Raman -par main toh karta hoon naa, bahut pyaar karta hoon and that is enough for me. Mera pyaar hum dono ke liye enough hai, aur mujhe kisi ki bhi parwah nahi, I love ishita aur Maine usse shaadi kar li hai, Main usse le kar ghar jaa raha hoon, Aap aa kar usse welcome kijiye. He said and hold Ishita's hand again and start walking.

Ishita start crying for help when Raman said -why r u crying, main hoon naa tumhare saath. I will never let u cry, tum bas chalo mere saath. He said cupping her face and she said -dont do this Raman, aisi zabardasti ki shaadi nahi chalti, please go.

Raman -tum kyun nahi samjhti, main pyaar karta hoon tumse, tumhe chod kar nahi jaane wala. Chalo mere saath. He said and was walking to the car when saw few cops coming to them.

Appa -achcha hua aap aa gaye inspector. Iss ladke ne meri beti se zabardasti shaadi ki hai and now taking her forcefully. Please arrest him.

Cop -yeh kya drama lagaa rakha hai, jab ladki nahi chahti then why u r forcing her.

Raman -maine kuch drama nahi kiya, we love each other and I am taking her home after our marriage.

Cop -but Isse dekh kar toh nahi lag raha that she loves u.

Raman look at ishita and said -she loves me, ishita tum batao inko that u love me just the way I love u.

Cop -boliye madam, aap pyaar karti hai isse.

Ishita nodded in no and said -nahi main nahi karti, I don't love him. Yeh mere saath jabardasti kar rahen hai inspector. She said making Raman look at her.

Raman -yeh hamara personal matter hai ishita, why u r bringing cops in between. We will sort it out.

Ishita -nahi raman, hum kuch sort nahi karenge. Coz I don't love u. Main nahi karti pyaar tumse. Mujhe nahi jaana tumhare saath.she said and pushed raman making him fall. Ishita ran to her parent and hugged appa tight.

Cops arrested raman for causing nuisance in the society and said -chalo bahut ho gayi ishqbaazi, thodi jail ki hawa kha lo. They said and was taking Raman away while his eyes was still on ishita who was hugging her father tight.

His parent want to save raman and can even save him but thought to let him be in jail for a while so that this craziness get out of his head.

Appa -chalo ishu, ghar chalte hai. Police dekh legi usse. He said and trio turned and start walking when they heard ,ishita.

Trio turned and got shocked to see the scene infront of their eyes. Raman was snatched gun from the cops and was pointing the gun towards them.

Cops get up and was running to them when Raman said -koi hilega nahi, warna I will shoot .

Toshiji -puttar nahi, kuch mat karna warna sab khatam ho jayega. Iss manhus ladki ke liye khoon karega tu ab.

Raman look at ishita and said -tum mere saath aa rahi ho naa??

Ishita nodded in no and said -please raman chale jao. I don't love u.

Raman -ok, then good bye. Jab tum mujhe pyaar hi nahi karti toh mere jeene ka koi matlab nahi. He said pointing the gun on his forehead making everyone shocked.

Toshiji -nahi puttar, aisa mat karna.

Mr bhalla -ruk jaa puttar, we will sort it out. He was saying when the gun was fired making everyone close their eyes in fear.

After sometime all opened their eyes feeling no movement and saw the gun pointing towards the sky, ishita was holding his hand upwards.

Ishita -paagal ho gaye ho, mere liye jaan de doge, apne maa papa ke baare mein nahi sochoge.

Raman -tum mere saath ghar chal rahi ho naa. He asked looking at her.

Ishita -raman abhi bhi wahin pagalpan.

Raman -tum haan bol rahi hai yaa main chala doon goli. Iss baar tum bhi nahi bacha paogi mujhe. Phir nikalte rehna goli mere dimaag se, he was saying when she said -main chalungi, tumhare saath. She said finally seeing no option.

Raman hugged her tight happily while she closed her eyes feeling helpless.

That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.next updt will be as per response.
Edited by cutieruhi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome chappy Di
Update soon Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
awsome update
raman is forcing ishita to be with him
pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
Nice update
omg raman to pagal ho gaya hai
plz update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
Awesome start!!
Raman is full to crazy about ishu..
His family is also against his marriage n wants him to leave ishu but he was admant.
Ishu is refusing to accept their marriage n go with him to his house but he was forcibly trying to take her..
Appa called cops n when ishu said he is forcing her they arrested raman.
He was about to shoot himself but ishu saved him on time n agreed to go with him.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm dii:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Superb
Raman is crazy
But I love it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing super duper storyline. Loved Raman's pagalpan. It's kind pf new. Keep his pagalpan intact it will give soul to your story. New kind of story too.Update this story fast waiting. šŸ‘
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
Fabulous start
Raman's madness is something new to see
He loved her or a kind of obsessed with her
Whatever it is i'm loving this
Will wait for updt

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