SwaSan Spectrum - OS Series

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Dear Nyna,
I forgot the place I had reserved for cinereal streaks. So leaving that altogether .

The situation is something some unfortunate couples have to face... Miscarriage... If golden shade was all dreamy and heavenly, the silver shade of the spectrum was nothing less than nightmare and hell. The difference about this OS is you reflected what a man goes through after this. How women like Swara who had to stop before completing the journey of motherhood can lose her way to her home as a wife... And how after wandering aimlessly find their way into each other's arms through empathy and love...

Anyways blabbered a lot. FM is still pending. But I'm happy to be back. Missed you guys.

Love,
Dyuti

Quote

Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: iamreader
Dear Nyna,
I forgot the place I had reserved for cinereal streaks. So leaving that altogether .

The situation is something some unfortunate couples have to face... Miscarriage... If golden shade was all dreamy and heavenly, the silver shade of the spectrum was nothing less than nightmare and hell. The difference about this OS is you reflected what a man goes through after this. How women like Swara who had to stop before completing the journey of motherhood can lose her way to her home as a wife... And how after wandering aimlessly find their way into each other's arms through empathy and love...

Anyways blabbered a lot. FM is still pending. But I'm happy to be back. Missed you guys.

Love,
Dyuti

Dear Dyuti,

Welcome back, how was your trip? Hope you enjoyed yourself.

And no you do not blabber, I love reading your take.

The situation is a very tough and depressing one, I have seen a few of them in my life, among my friends and cousins, and it is never a easy time. But though I would always sympathise with the women, a part of me would always wonder, how does the father feel? The man is always on the sidelines, even if he is the father, he is not privy to every movement, every surge of emotions that the woman would feel but then he would also feel the loss of the baby, albeit differently.

And I loved the way you drew comparisons between the Gold and Silver tales😳😳😳 Reading your comment, made me do what I do when I love the comment, go back and read my own story in the light of your words🤗

Regarding FM - take your time - three parts for one chapter totaling around 20,000 words, enjoy😈 And I have yet to unres for TAFL.

love,

Nyna

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Harpreet

@preet_907

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Beautifully written Nyna.The emotional turmoil of Swara & Sanskar was very well potrayed & justified.😊

Quote

Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: preet_907
Beautifully written Nyna.The emotional turmoil of Swara & Sanskar was very well potrayed & justified.😊

Dear Harpreet,

Long time no see. 😊

I am glad to see you here and happy to note that you found it beautiful. It was indeed quite an emotional upheaval but once they realised that their love for each other was strong,they weathered the storm.

Best,

Nyna

Quote

Harpreet

@preet_907

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Harpreet,

Long time no see. 😊

I am glad to see you here and happy to note that you found it beautiful. It was indeed quite an emotional upheaval but once they realised that their love for each other was strong,they weathered the storm.

Best,
Nyna

Hi Nyna,

Sorry I couldn't be here more often was busy with my higher studies.Also it took me bit of a time to realise that our show has been shifted to the archives section of this forum after it got over &off course like you all I also miss swasan very much.But after reading some of the beautiful writings of you all my that complaint has just got sorted. Hope i can come to this forum more often now.😊

Quote

Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: preet_907

Hi Nyna,
Sorry I couldn't be here more often was busy with my higher studies.Also it took me bit of a time to realise that our show has been shifted to the archives section of this forum after it got over &off course like you all I also miss swasan very much.But after reading some of the beautiful writings of you all my that complaint has just got sorted. Hope i can come to this forum more often now.😊

Dear Harpreet,

No worries at all, just really glad to see you. Oh so this is shifted to the Archives sections (I have the Swaragini page on most visited tabs on my Google home screen, so I never noticed it😆😆 )

Addicted to SwaSan is what I am, which is why I keep writing, I am able to create worlds where I can control them and the situations,😉 unlike what happened in the show😡

Do drop in whenever your studies permit you, looking to see more often here.

Best,

Nyna

Quote

Harpreet

@preet_907

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Harpreet,

No worries at all, just really glad to see you. Oh so this is shifted to the Archives sections (I have the Swaragini page on most visited tabs on my Google home screen, so I never noticed it😆😆 )
Addicted to SwaSan is what I am, which is why I keep writing, I am able to create worlds where I can control them and the situations,😉 unlike what happened in the show😡

Do drop in whenever your studies permit you, looking to see more often here.

Best,
Nyna

Sure Nyna..😊

Quote

Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

My Dearest Nynu 🤗 🤗

I haven't been by the forum for an age, and I am so, so very sorry that its taking me such a long time to comment on this beautiful, very sensitive and wonderfully emotional take on a couple's trauma after a miscarriage, and how that shared pain can sometimes cause friction between them as well as bring them together.

Here, with your customary masterful touch; you have portrayed both----the frustration, despair and anguish making Swara lash out initially at a Sanskaar who was desperate to console her, and then the 2 months of tense reserve and the agony of emotional withdrawal that followed. The way you described their rapprochement and reconciliation was superb---note perfect with its nuance and tone. That bit where Sanskaar hesitantly asks if he could hold her----that deserved a standing ovation, for your empathy and understanding of both their psyches, their shared pain which they experienced (and showed) in their own individual ways.

I have also PMed you some personal thoughts about this very emotional fic. You are a wonderful writer and person, Nynu. The emotions you pour into SwaSan in your fics---they reflect the depth and sincerity of your heart.

God Bless, and may the muse always shine bright on your writing.

Loads of Love,

----Viji

Quote

Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

I just realized that my comment above was the 100th post on this thread. 😆 😉 I know this sounds about as mature as my kiddo...but I am so thrilled! Its like winning a prize of some sort. 😉😳

Quote

Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
I just realized that my comment above was the 100th post on this thread. 😆 😉 I know this sounds about as mature as my kiddo...but I am so thrilled! Its like winning a prize of some sort. 😉😳

Viji,

I am doubly thrilled - a comment from you and that it is the 100th post . As with all your comments, I have been reading it for quite a few times, as well as the pms too😳.

I am so excited to see your back: