Adhoora Kaam - AvNeil SS - P10, pg14 updated! Aug 22nd

Hello NK Fandom!

I was a silent reader of this forum and an ardent fan of the show or should I say AvNeil? Whatever the case may be, I am a fan! Crazy fan of the AdiZa and AvNeil with no order of preference.

Coming to what am doing here now, I am kind of tired of waiting for AvNeil scenes on the show and have been waiting for some good scenes from quite some time. So, I decided to write something instead of waiting.

Do read and lemme know how it is.

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2 - Page 2

Part 3 - Page 4

Part 4 - Page 6

Part 5 - Page 8

Part 6 - Page 9

Part 7 - Page 10

Part 8 - Page 10

Part 9 - Page 12

Part 10 - Page 14

Adhoora Kaam

"Please Neil, listen to me once. I am not asking you to forgive her because I can understand what you must've gone through all these years but I am just trying to make YOU understand what she has gone through"

"Really Sunehri? What she has gone through? Do you have any idea how hard it was for me to live without showing my grief all these years? Do you know how I felt when I thought that I couldn't save her and how I lived all these years carrying that guilt? And now I get to know that she had to do all these things because she didn't trust me enough that I could take care of vidyut on my own. I was a Police officer for god's sake. That was my job to take care of such things. Why couldn't she understand such a small thing?" Neil blurted out his anger on sunehri on phone.

"When she knew that she didn't kill Juhi, she still had to go to Jail because Vidyut was pulling strings all along and when Neela aunty died, Vidyut called Avni and told her that the bullet that killed Neela aunty was fired from Prakash Uncle's gun. Now you tell me Neil, how could she not believe him that he had the power to send uncle to Jail? How could she underestimate him? He has already done that and he had the capacity to do it again. She went to Jail and forgave you when you told her the truth, she accepted you again even after spending 6 months in Jail. She started coming out of grief of Neela aunty's death. She lost her Ayesha maa, her brother Aman and she still survived. But she couldn't watch you and your family in danger. She left everything for you Neil, everything. She killed herself to save you and your family."

"But 10 years Sunehri? 10 bloody years?? What crime did I commit that she punished me?" He asked with pain in his heart.

"What can I say? You didn't fall in love with a normal girl. You fell for Avni Ayesha."

"I am not changing my decision. I am not coming back. She did not want me in her life and I will not come after her now. I have moved on and yes, you are right! I did a mistake when I fell for Avni Ayesha. I am now going to find a normal girl for myself and settle with her and never look back again". He finished without any hesitation.

"Okay Neil. I will not convince you any further but just wanted to let you know that Neelanjana is going to file a police complaint on the person who has been making blank calls from the past one month. And ya, Mowgli has been banned to use Moblie phone because he was clicking pictures of everybody and has been sending them to somebody else. Sorry for the extra information but thought you might want to know what is happening in sukoon house."

"I got to go" He immediately disconnected the call and went to KK to get a brief of the next scene that they were shooting.

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It's been two months that Neil has left Kashid and one month since Sunehri last spoke to Neil and still no sign of him anywhere near Avni. Everyone got back to their routine except Avni who is still lost in Neil's thoughts and still looks at their picture before going to sleep. Before Neil coming to Kashid, all she used to think was about the kids and their safety and now all she could think is Neil' and nothing else. Every time someone knocks the door, she opens with a hope that it could be Neil.

She came out of the washroom wearing a Pink saree with the same color blouse and started drying her hair with a white towel in her hand. She moved to balcony and hung the towel on the rope in balcony and she started removing all other clothes which were dried by now still lost in Neil's thoughts. She is not able to forget the night that she spent with Neil after 10 long years on Holi. She tried to come out of the moments by concentrating on the work that she is doing and finally she came near another saree which was on the rope and said "Neil Khanna! You corrupted me" by holding the saree tight trying to control herself when she heard "WHAT??" not far from behind which made her come out of the trance.

She immediately turned still holding the saree right which still is on the rope and lost her balance and fell on the person in front of her along with the saree on the rope which made them fall and roll on the ground. Avni is on top of the person on whom she fell they both got wrapped in saree so tight that they could not move an inch.

"Tum.. Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?" She asked with a slight hesitation and shock in her voice.

"Meri chodo.. Tum kya keh rahi thi?"

"Main kya keh rahi thi? Kuch bhi tho nahi" She declared.

"Really? You said that I corrupted you! What do you mean by that?" He asked with a glint in his eyes and a grin on his face.

"Neil, Please.. Let's try to get out of this thing first." She tried to change the topic.

"Why did you wear a saree? Is there something I should know about?"

"I think we should call someone. We won't be able to get out of this by ourselves"

"You still look hot in saree. Not bad.. You maintained yourself" He teased trying to get her attention.

"Taraaa.. " She called out loud ignoring her husband's taunt plus compliment.

"You call someone one more time and they will witness something they should not", He warned her with seriousness in his tone.

"Matlab?" She asked turning her face towards him.

"I will tell you but tell me what do you mean by 'You corrupted me'?" He asked again.

"Nothing" She shrugged it off.

He rolled over making himself on top of her.

"Great! Do that again, we might get out of this without help" She suggested to which he chuckled.

"What happened?" She asked again.

"Do you think I rolled over to get us out of this?"

She gave a what-then' look to which he moved closer to her ear and whispered "Answer my questions and I'll let you go."

"What if I say no?" she asked

"What choice do you have?"

"I can call someone" She gave the best possible solution that she can think of.

"I told you already. Call someone and they'll see something that they should not" He warned her again.

"What do you mean by that? We are already in a compromised position. What could they possibly see other than this?"

"How about a liplock?" He asked without any hesitation.

"WHAT?? Have you lost it?"

"Nope! Absolutely not. I told you. Answer me and I'll let you go"

"Okay. Fine.. I was.. was.. I was thinking about the night we spent on Holi"

"What about it?" He probed further.

"Nothing... Just random thoughts"

"Your wish! I will not leave until I get the truth

"OKAY.. Ziddi kahi ke.. You.. y.. you tried to kiss me" She said closing her eyes.

He was happy to see her like that, like a love stricken puppy after all these years. It felt like he got all the happiness he needed. It felt as if the void has been filled. He liked the way she is getting affected by him. He kissed her many times when they were together and she is still feeling shy even by his attempt to kiss her. The very thought of him being near her has corrupted her. 'Not bad Neil Khanna, your charm still has the same effect on her' he thought with a smile on his face.

"That's it? I kissed you so many times. Why are you behaving like this just for a kiss?"

"Not on cheeks" She said still not looking into his eyes.

He understood what she was trying to say but still decided to get it out of her.

"Then where?" He asked with a husky voice.

"You know where.. "

"How will I know? I wasn't in a conscious state"

"Neil please.. lemme go.. koi aajayega"

"Tell me where"

"Near the mole"

"Kaunsa wala? Jo hoton ke pass hai woh ya jo tumahare kamar pe hai woh?" He asked with a serious look on his face.

"What?? Kamar pe? How? When? Matlab... "

"Abhi dekha maine jab tum towel sukha rahi thi" he answered her incomplete question.

"You are impossible!!"

"Now tell me where?" He asked again.

"You tried to kiss my lips. Happy?" She said it finally.

He immediately rolled along with her multiple times and they are finally out of the embrace. Both stood up and Avni started setting her saree while Neil stared her with all the love in the world. The only thing his heart is saying at the moment is to 'Kiss her'.

"Super Mannn" Mowgli screamed looking at Neil interrupting his plans.

He started running towards Neil and hugged him with his little hands. Neil immediately picked him up in his arms and got him up to his level to have a chit chat.

"I missed you sooo much Superman" Mowgli hugged him before giving him a kiss on his cheek.

"I missed you too tiger. I wish I got the same welcome from others as well. But kya kare.. thode log sadu ke sadu hi rehte hai" he said looking at Avni.

"Main sab ko bata ke aata hu that you came" He got down getting very excited to which Neil obliged.

Avni didn't say a word and was about to move but something stopped her in her tracks. He slipped his hand on her waist from behind and pulled her towards himself. Her back hit his chest making her go weak on her knees.

"Apna til tho dekhti jao' Saying he pulled out his phone from his pocket and showed her the picture of her waist along with the til' which he clicked right after he came.

"What the Helll!! Delete this" she tried to reach the phone to delete the picture but he was fast enough to remove it out of her sight.

He flipped her towards himself and pulled her close. She tried to stop him from doing whatever he is doing but her body didn't co-operate. He immediately placed his lips on hers without wasting a moment. At first, she got lost in the moment but pushed him away from her the moment she realized what he was doing.

"Woh kya haina.. mujha koi bhi kaam adhura chodna acha nahi lagtha" He said when she looked at him expecting an explanation with a smirk on his face.

She ran into the house without saying anything and locked herself up in her room trying to regain her senses.

That's it folks. I have no idea how it turned out. I just hope that you guys like it. Please let me know even if you didn't like it.

Please forgive me for mistakes. I did not proof read.

Beautiful chapter dear...their moments were very beautiful nd loving...plz do write more os...i loved it very much

Hey this was awesome I really enjoyed it both the realisation scene and then Neil's return back to his ladylove followed by his naughty antics this os was damn cute and do write more would love to read

It was beautiful,sweet and Avneil-Delicious 😊 oh! i wish you send this to yusuf ansari sir if possible. may be we get to see this play out.😃 do write more you are natural.👍🏼

Awww this is so cuuute, I really cant wait for flirty Tillu to return and claim his wifey

Okay folks..

Am glad that you liked what I have written.

I have never written second part so fast ever in my life. And you must be thinking that this is my first time that I am visible in this forum but ya I used to be an active member back in 2010 when I used to watch MJHT for my favorite MayUr. You guys might know the show but it was a cult back then.

Anyway enough of my nonsense and let's see what Mr.Khanna is upto 😉

Part 2

Avni ran as fast as she could and locked herself in her room and placed her hand on her heart trying to estimate the speed of it and also to try and calm it down. Her stupid heart never races so fast but IPS Khanna' can make it race so fast that it can beat Ussain Bolt. It might look like exaggeration but not for Avni who is still lost in Neil's world. It took several years for her to forget his touch, his feel and his presence and lead a normal single life looking after the kids but here he came! Again! Making her melt like snow.

She could not forget those few hours that she spent with him on Holi night even after 2 months and now he has kissed her!? How should she survive after this? How on earth should she forget this? It will take her whole life to forget this. Why did he do this to her? How could he? Kyu khel rahe ho Neil mere saath? Kyu? And she heard some voices outside her room. She leaned in on the door to hear what's happening.

"Arey Sunehri.. kya kar rahi ho? Kyu laayi ho mujhe yahan?" Asked Neil who did not understand why sunehri was dragging him to a secluded place.

"Neil sach batao, Avni ke liye aaye ho na? Main bohot kush hu.. Us pagal ladki ko tho main samjha nahi sakthi but tum tho samajh gaye. Am so happy today", She could not contain her excitement.

"No Sunehri. I did not come for Avni. As I told you earlier, I came to meet another girl whom my mom has chosen for me. Anyway, Avni is dead right? The girl who is here is Neilanjana right? So, I have no relation to this girl. I came here on a purpose and I thought I'll meet kids along because I will missing them. But if you want me to leave, then I'll leave." He said with anger and hurt in his voice.

Avni's eyes filled with tears listening to that. She left him forever but still she could not bear the fact that Neil is moving on with another girl in his life. She knows that it is the right thing for his life. Moving on and getting married to somebody else because she herself has chosen this life and left him to live his life without her. How can she be sad now that he has finally moved on in his life? She wiped her tears and tried to smile thinking about Neil being happy in his life even though with somebody else. All she wants is for him to be happy, no matter what.

She went to washroom and washed her face to wipe out all the tears and all the sadness from her face. She came out with fresh thoughts and happy thoughts in her mind and moved to hall where all kids surrounded Neil and are targeting him with questions.

"Bhaiya, Is there any special reason behind your visit?" Sayesha asked.

"Yes my dear, there is and that is.. "

"He is getting married" Avni finished his sentence.

"Woww!! Really bhaiyya? Am so happy for you" Sayesha hugged Neil while Neil tried to decipher Avni's expressions.

Though he could not completely understand what she was feeling right now, he could not stop himself to check her out. He looked at her without blinking and got lost in her beauty. She looked like an angel in pink saree with matching blouse with no jewelry. But why did she wear a saree when she doesn't like wearing one? Just then it stuck him that it was their anniversary. A smile crept up his lips. He decided to tease her a little and a khurafaati plan came in to his mind.

"Waise, Miss. Neelanjana, main aapko kis naam se bulau? Kyunki we never really got chance to meet properly right?" He asked

"Aur kya bulauge? Jaan didi bolo, hum sab ki tarah?" Mowgli replied innocently.

"Mujhe nahi lagtha ki tumhari didi mujhse badi hai. Kyu Sunehri? Sahi kaha na maine?" He asked.

"Offo Neil, ek naam ke liye itna confusion? Tum use Jaan bulao." She smirked saying that.

Avni stood near door which divides Hall and Kitchen and trying to compose herself and not get stuck in Neil's trap and Neil's eyes are all on her from the moment she came there and stood in front of him.

"Jaan... Jii... Aap waise hi saree pehnthi hai ya aaj kuch special hai?"

She didn't reply and looked everywhere but Neil.

"Hamari Jaan didi, aaj ke din har saal aise hi saree pehnthi hai aur mandir bhi jaati hai. And you know what hum sab log every year ek din cake cut karke celebrate bhi karthe hai. Without any reason. Just like that", Samrat answered.

"Acha? Aur woh kaunsa din hai?" He probed further.

"21^st February"

Neil smiled when he realized that it's his birthday that they celebrate every year.

"Hmmm, acha hai. Waise Jaan, tum is saree mein bohot cute lag rahi ho" He said making all the kids shock and on the other side, Tara, Sitara and Sunehri tried to control their laugh at his open flirting.

Avni couldn't help but blush at his compliment. Before he could melt her completely, she immediately turned around and made her way to kitchen. Neil smiled at his own antics.

"OH.. MY.. GOD!!! What just happened?" Sayesha exclaimed.

"What happened?" Neil repeated her question.

"I saw Jaan didi blush for the first time in my life." Sayesha whispered in his ear.

"In that case, please don't her didi and me bhayya. Okay?" He whispered back.

It took few seconds for her to understand what he was trying to tell her and the second she understood, she could not control her happiness and hugged him immediately. Neil became happy looking at his Mishti all grown up and still behaving like a child. He could never forget her innocence as a kid. How she used to play cupid between him and Avni. How she made Avni kiss him and how she made them hug each other when they were fighting over Juhi.

"Does that mean what I think it means?" She asked him for clarification and he nodded in agreement.

"Awesome!! Jaan didi ko thoda life mein chill karna chahiye. Hamesha pareshan rehthi hai. Aur main aapko jiju tho bula nahi sakthi. Tho main aapko kya bulau?" She asked with excitement.

"Kuch bhi.. Lekin bhaiyya nahi." He said twitching his nose.

"Mowgli ki tarah Superman bulati hu, okay?

"Okies" Neil said with happiness.

"Aur haan, meri jaan didi meri angel hai.. Use hurt mat karna. Okay?" She warned him with a serious look on her face.

"Kabhi nahi" He said heartfully.

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Neil made an agreement with kids that he would stay with them in their house for a couple of days until he finishes the work that he came here for. They also gave him a bedroom for his stay.

Avni came home after visiting temple and was going to her room just then she heard a mobile ring and she didn't find the owner of the device anywhere near it. So, she decided to check it up. It was Sayesha's and it was her friend Tina' on the other side. She took the device and went to sayesha's room to hand it over to her and found that she was inside the washroom bathing.

"Sayesha.. tumhara friend ka call hai."

She didn't get any reply but she could hear shower running. She closed the door and called sayesha again.

"Sayesha.. sharmao mat.. bahar aajao. Koi nahi hai.. bas main hi hu" She said folding the clothes which were thrown on bed and sofa near it. She heard the lock open and turned around to hand over her phone to her only to find her husband shirtless except a towel around his neck. She lost her words looking at him like that and stood still without blinking her eyes.

"Bhala main kyun sharmaunga?" He said moving towards her removing his towel around his neck and throwing it off on sofa.

With every step of distance closing in between them, her heart started racing more and she started making her way towards door the moment she realized what he is upto only to trip and fall in her husband's muscular arms. He wrapped his left hand around her bare waist and bent a little towards her and removed the tresses on her face which were blocking his view.

"Iraada kya hai? Jaan lelogi kya JAAN?" He asked stressing a little more on her name.

She immediately stood up, moved a few steps backwards and paved her way towards door only to be stopped by her husband. He caught the end of her pallu which made it slip from her shoulder. Even Neil was taken aback a bit knowing that the pallu was not pinned but didn't regret his actions either. Avni just covered her bosom with her hands not knowing what else to do. Her husband is in no mood to make her feel comfortable instead he is hell bent on making her go weak in her knees. He moved closer reducing the gap between them which made her move back until she hit the wall and he then held her hands and released them from their duty. He then covered her with her pallu and placed it on her shoulder carefully. Mind you! He did not stop there and he has no intentions to stop. He cuddled her saree which was lying on her left arm and placed the lump on her shoulder making her waist reveal. She tried to move out from right but he was quick enough to block her from placing his left hand across the wall. She moved again to her left and again got blocked by him in the same fashion. He inched closer making her close her eyes.

"Neil.. Please.. jaane do mujhe" She pleaded with her closed eyes.

He placed his right hand on her waist and pulled her closer and ruffled his hair making the water droplets fall on her.

"Pehle ye batao ki tumhare hont itne laal kaise hogaye? Lipstick ki laali tho nahi lagri. Wajeh kya hai?"

Flashes of their kiss from morning flashed in front of her eyes. She pitied herself. She cannot even blush because it will only fuel Neil and she cannot afford that any cost. She tried to push him away from her which irked Neil and he pulled her even closer and placed a kiss on the nape of her neck where a water droplet was resting and lingered his lips longer than required. He moved away from her neck slowly and slipped the pallu on her shoulder showing its way down the floor. He slowly moved down till her waist and placed a wet kis on her 'Til'. Her nails were scuffing his shoulder which made him smile. She is getting effected by his closeness! Big time! He decided to end the play by claiming her lips and stood up making his way towards her lips just when he heard a bang on the door.

"Neelanjana tum ho kya andar?" Asked Sitara.

Neil was about to answer but Avni closed his mouth with her hand and replied instead.

"Haan Sitara.. Main yahi hu.. Aa rahi hu. Do minute" She said with her hand still on Neil's lips.

He kissed her hand without any second thought and she immediately removed her hand as if she got a shock. She pushed him back and placed her pallu of the saree where it belonged.

"View kharab kar diya" Neil whined.

"Neil.. tum itna besharam kab se hogaye?" She asked with a shock on her face.

"Jab se tum mere saamne aayi ho tab se" He said looking into her eyes.

She broke the eye contact and escaped the place opening the door. She went out and checked her hair and saree before moving further. Neil came out wearing a shirt and leaned on the edge of the door looking at her disappearing figure buttoning his shirt all the while with a contended smile on his face.

Sunehri witnessed the little charade outside the door and approached Neil with a question mark on his face. She tapped on his shoulder in order to get his attention to which Neil raised his eyebrows asking 'What?' With his looks.

"Ye kya hua tum dono ke beech mein?"

"Batane mein mujhe koi problem nahi hai lekin tum sun nahi paogi. Age tumhari marzi" he conveyed what he wanted to say.

Sunehri closed her ears trying to control her laugh.

"Samajh gayi.. ab aage kuch mat kehna. But mujhe ek baat batao. Tumne tho kaha tha ki tum move on kar chuke ho, ladki dekhne aaye ho and all that tho phir ye sab kya hai?"

"Avni se mein move on kar chuka hu lekin ye Neelanjana ke paas meri jaan atak gayi. Wahi lene aaya hu." He replied with a smirk on his face.

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That's it for now guys. Hope you like it. Please do drop in your comments, good or bad. Anything is appreciated. 😊

Awesome!!! Can't the CVs follow your story for few episodes... I wish..
great work dear. I hope there's a part 3

Wow beautifully amazing chapter 👏👏...loved it very much...neil khanna bahut besharm ho gya hai 😉...nd their romance was oh my god ...i m glad u updated part 2 nd now i m craved for more 😃...plz plz plz update next part plz...its a request 😳

Read Both the parts at once . Awesome ! Aankhein taras rahi hai dekne ke liye. That whole cloth drying sequence was so hot followed by another hotel update . Neil has made his mind to give her sweet torture 😆 Avni toh tubelight ki tubelight hai 🥱 Sunheri is on full tease mode and Neil has become shameless 😆 Neil and his fascination for Til 😆 He is totally focused on them .