Adhoora Kaam - AvNeil SS - P10, pg14 updated! Aug 22nd - Page 3

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Hello Mayur (going by your username), this is Nivedita, you can address me as Nivi. Could not resist myself from replying after reading this OS turned SS of yours. It is so much fun to see a flirtatious Neil Khanna wooing his Avni..Neilanjana. He is totally adorable in this tale of yours. Looking forward for the next chapter.

Cheers!

Originally posted by: mayurg2010

Hi Nivi,

Neetu here.. And thank you Soo much for liking it. I was never obsessed with any other couple other than Mayank and Nupur of MJHT. Neil Khanna made my heart skip a beat with his character. But I thought let's make him a little naughty 😉.

Glad you liked it. 😊

Okay Ladies.. Here I am with another update.

Hope you all like it and please do like and lemme know how I am doing with your comments.

Please do suggest if you guys have anything in mind that you want to read. I'll try to incorporate.

Part - 4

"Isse flirting nahi, romance kehthe hai Mrs. Khanna" saying this he placed his lips on hers making her powerless all over again.

She tried to push him at first by hitting him on his shoulder which only made Neil pull her closer. She finally gave up and held his collar for support and let the emotions flow in the moment. Reality stuck Avni so hard when he reached her back and started unbuttoning her blouse. With no delay, she pushed him back with all the energy she got which made him increase the distance between him and his Wifey. He did not like it. Not at all!

"Ye tum kya kar rahe the?" She asked reaching the back of her blouse with her right hand to try and undo what her hubby has done.

"Normal log isse KISS kehthe hai" he said stressing on the words where there was a requirement.

"Main iski baat kar rahi hu" She said eying the back of her blouse still trying to button herself.

"10 saal ki tadap hai. Itni asaani se nahi bharegi. Bohut mehnat karni padegi tumhe" He said without any hesitation.

"Chiii Neil. Tum itne badtameez kaise ban gaye?"

"Badtameez main nahi mera dil hai. Tho tumhe jo bhi puchna hai mujhse nahi mera dil se pucho." He said while removing his shirt and moving towards her at the same time.

Her heart started racing again looking at his nearing footsteps. She moved back while he moved forward. She moved back until she could not move any further and got pinned by a wall. By the time she understood her position, Neil caged her in between his arms.

"Tum kuch puch rahi thi?"

"Woh.. woh.. main bhul gayi."

"Koi baat nahi, main yaad dila deta hu." Saying he placed his hand on her waist and pulled her towards himself and then paved his way towards her blouse. She immediately placed her hand on his chest and pushed him back.

"Neil, tumhe ho kya gaya hai? Aise kyu kar rahe ho?"

"Main kya kar rah ahu?" He asked as if he didn't understand what she was asking.

"Ab bano mat. You very well know what I am talking about"

"What?" He asked again.

"That you came here to meet another girl and what you are doing here is wrong."

"I didn't meet her yet. So, it is NOT wrong." He tried to defend himself.

"Wait a sec, is there a girl in reality or is this your plan?"

Oh boy! Neil Khanna, you are definitely in soup now. You should've guessed that your biwi is no less than Kiran Bedi when it comes to police giri. Save yourself before she catches your bluff.

"Kya soch rahe ho? Jawab do" She demanded breaking his chain of thoughts.

"And what could I possibly be planning? To achieve what?"

"I don't know. Could be anything"

"Nahi nahi, batao, ki kya planning ho saktha hai?"

"I... I... I guess to... win... Me... back?" She tried to place her words carefully and asked.

He chuckled at her question and didn't say a word.

"Kya hua? Why are you laughing?" She asked again.

"Why will I plan something for a girl who is already in love with me? Deeply.. madly in love with me"

"What do you mean?"

"You tell me. Don't you love me?"

"Neil, please try to understand. The girl who used to be in love with you is Avni and she is dead. The girl who is in front of you is Neelanjana and this girl only lives for these kids. They are my life now. I cannot give you the love that you are expecting from me. So yes, I don't love you."

"Okay. Fine! Prove it to me and then I'll leave from this place."

"What do you mean, prove it? How do I prove that I don't love you?"

"I don't know.. In any way you want"

"I don't know how to do it" She decided not to play his game.

"You don't know because that is a lie. Because you love me and you are not accepting it."

"Then what proof do you have that I love you?" She tried to turn the tables

"Okay. Answer my questions and you'll get your proof" He challenged her.

"What questions?"

"You are saying that Avni is dead and you are Neelanjana. Fine. Out of all the names, why do you have Neil' in your new name Neelanjana'? You chose the name right? What do you call it? Co-incidence?"

"That is not Neil' in my name.. It is Neela'. My mother's name." She said without looking into his eyes.

"Oh.. okay. Let's agree to it. Next question, why does every page of your dairy says how much you love me and you miss me every day. And ya, I also found a picture of mine in it. Why?"

"Oh come on.. you are lying."

"Am I?"

"Yes you are. I never mentioned your name in my dairy and the picture is definitely not in the dairy."

"How do you know that it is not there?"

"Because it is in my cupboard" She blurted out something she shouldn't have.

"Ahaan.. there you go. Do I need to say more?"

"Dekho.. that is not just your picture. It is the whole family's. I sometimes miss them and I look at that picture." She tried to save herself.

Ek dum ziddi hai. He thought.

"If a girl doesn't love the guy and he goes near her, she will slap him tight on his face. And after all I did to you since morning, you are here standing without a saree in front of me and asking for a proof that you love me. Agar tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti na Avni, mujhe ye sab karne nahi deti jo maine kiya."

"I didn't... let... you... You did" She said with a chocking voice and tears in her eyes.

He walked towards her and held her cheeks and picked up a tear on her cheek and showed it to her.

"Ye.. Ye aansoo sabooth hai ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho."

"Nahi" She said with difficulty not looking at him.

He slowly moved his hand towards her neck and sliding it a little down her throat he picked the chain which she was wearing and pulled its locket out which was carefully hiding in her blouse. It has the same heart shaped locked which she used to wear with both her mother's pictures in it. He opened the locket and showed his picture which was in it to her.

"Tho phir ye kya hai? Iska bhi koi reason hai tumhare paas?"

She didn't say anything instead tears started flowing down her cheeks.

"Main shayad police wala THA lekin pati main tumhara AB BHI HU" he said wiping her tears with both his thumb fingures.

He could not see her crying because of him. He kissed her forehead and moved to kiss her teary eyes while she stood still without any resistance. He then kissed her cheeks which now became red because of her emotions. He moved down further and kissed her neck and just when he was about to move any further with his free flowing kisses, she held him by collar and made him look at her which surprised Neil.

"Main jo bhi feel karti hu, tumhe us se kya? Tum tho ladki dekhne aaye ho na?" She asked with anger written all over her face.

"Ise jalan kehthe hai aur ye bhi pyaar ki ek nishani hai" He said completely ignoring her question.

"Baat mat ghumao Neil. Mera sawaal ka jawaab do"

"Haan. Dekhne aaya hu. Kyunki mujhe tum pe bharosa nahi hai. Dekho aise hi harkat karti rehti ho. Pyaar karti ho lekin jatati nahi ho. Tho main akela banda kab tak kuwara ban ke phirunga? Meri bhi life hai yaar. Tum tho aane se rahi.. tho mujhe bhi kisi na kisi ladki se settle hona hai ki nahi?"

Her grip on her collar started fading out listening to him which he observed and immediately held her hands with his.

"Ek solution hai. You accept that you love and marry me again and I'll not even think about that girl. Deal?"

"Matlab tum sach mein serious ho us ladki ke baare mein?" She asked a question which he did not expect. At least not this soon.

"Of course hu. Tumhe kya laga ki main mazaak kar rah ahu? Ji nahi. Ladki tho hai.. Jeeti jagti HOT ladki"

Her blood boiled listening to the word hot' as description regarding the girl she doesn't even know about. She felt like punching him hard but she decided against it.

"Ab tumhe choose karna hai ki mujhe kiske saath rehna hai. Sexy biwi ke saath ya hot girlfriend ke saath?" He left the choice to her.

"Tum jo marzi woh karo. Mujhe koi farak nahi padta." She said sternly.

"Tikhe lekin pehle saree tho pehn lo nahi tho mujhe bhi nahi pata ki main kya karunga" He said sitting on the bed with his hands stretched out back giving him the support he need to stay in place.

She didn't say a word and moved towards cupboard and tried to open it but unfortunately it has been locked and she sighed in frustration.

"Kya hua?" He asked not understanding her problem.

"Keys sunehri ke paas hai aur mere kapde andar hai"

"Haan tho ye saree wapas pehnlo. Usme kya problem hai"

"Neil, mein saal mein ek baar pehnthi hu saadi. Practice nahi hai tho main youtube dekh ke pehnti hu aur ek ganta lagtha hai" She explained him the situation.

He chuckled at her child like antics and got from the bed and moved towards her to help her out. She raised her arm and stopped him from coming near her.

"Stop! Paas mat aana."

"Avni, let me help you." He genuinely offered help.

"I don't trust you. Help ke bahane pata nahi kya karoge"

He tried to control his laugh and offered her a deal.

"You are right. If I help you, I MIGHT do something but if I don't and you stand in the same way in front of me, then I WILL do something for sure. And am not kidding. You have no idea what I can and will do. Up to you now!"

"I have another option."

"I am listening"

"You go outside and call sunehri in here"

"Do you really think I am going to any such thing?" Like really?"

"Neil please" she pleaded.

"Okay, I will help you but I will try and not do anything other than helping you. Okay?"

She nodded in agreement because she knew that she is not getting out of this without some compromise. He carefully took one end of saree and tucked in at her waist and rolled the saree from back towards front closing the distance between them. He took the rest of the saree which was lying on the floor and started making pleats looking at eyes. Once he finished making pleats, he kneeled down and tucked the lump near her navel making her heart race again. He couldn't resist himself and place a kiss where he tucked the saree holding her by her waist.

"Neiiilll.. kya kar rahe ho?" She shouted.

He got up and hugged her with his hands on her waist. She raised her hands to hug him back just when she realized that he is buttoning her blouse which he has unbuttoned some time back. She moved her hands back to her original position. He moved back and took the other end of the saree and covered her after placing a kiss on her gunshot wound. She moved away from him the moment he covered her and started moving towards the door only to be stopped by her husband with a grip on her wrist.

"Aaj tho bach gayi. Lekin agli baa raise mujhe mili jaise ki aaj mili, tho by god ki kasam, chodunga nahi. Kha jaunga. And I don't mean it metaphorically, I mean literally kha jaunga." He warned her of his intentions.

"Acha? Vampire ho kya?" she asked with the same tease.

"Shayad. Tum risk lena chahti ho?" He continued.

She got rid of his grip on her wrist and ran from the place trying to hide her smile which definitely did not go unnoticed by Mr.Khanna.

Uff.. That is a very very long post. I hope you guys enjoy it the way you enjoyed previous parts. Please lemme know with your precious comments. I tried to make Neil Khanna as naughty as possible.