Secret Societies ,An AdiYa/HarJen FF , Chapter 3 on Page 9 (14.04.18)

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Secret Societies

An AdiYa FF


Prologue

Two secret societies are operating under shadows for centuries. For more than thousand years, they are passing their ideology from one generation to generation and recruiting new people. Both of them think their end game will bring better outcome for human race.

These two secret societies have opposite ideology yet they are similar in their behavior. For centuries, they clashed against each other. Both societies lost their members due to those clashes. Yet, they are determined to achieve their goal. One society wants to find out and work on an ancient secret. Another society will do anything to prevent the revelation of that ancient secret.

An ancient past has the ability to determine fate of human race. Nevertheless, for one secret society it will be a good thing for human, for another secret society it will be worst thing for human.

Both societies functions in systematic and ruthless fashion. In their mind, any action can be justified in the name of greater good.

Normal people do not know about them, because they work in mysterious ways. Both of those secret societies are spread over the whole world. Membership of these two secret societies has crossed racial, ethnic, national, and religious, country lines and thus they operate everywhere.

2018 is the year when these two-sceret societies will clash for ultimate dominance and the result of their clash will determine fate of human kind. A clash of two points of views that is based on an ancient secret will determine the future of all of us.

Character Sketch:

Main Leads

Zoya Siddiqui

29 years old raw agent, who has already given six years to the agency. Her parents had a mysterious death in her childhood and that still haunt her. For last six years along with serving her country, she also trying to find answer regarding her parents death.

Presently she is posted in Mumbai and dealing with the cases that somehow involved with codes, mythology or ancient past.

She is an Indian patriot who loves her country and will do anything to protect it.

Aditya Hooda:

30 years old FBI agent. Right now, he is posted in Washington D.C. He works on the cases which is little mysterious and full of riddles. He is born in Massachusetts, USA. Unlike other second-generation immigrant, Aditya Hooda has no sympathy for the country of his ancestor, which is India. He identifies himself as American not Indian American.

Aditya hate his father, who still lives in India. He hates him for leaving his pregnant mother. His mother migrated to USA in 1987.Aditya's indifference towards India is influenced by his bad relationship with his biological father.

An American patriot who love America from bottom his heart and who will do anything to protect his homeland USA.

It is also the story of two people from two different countries who love their respective countries. They have different worldview. Can they able to work together to protect not only their countries but also whole world?

Supporting Characters:

Yash Arora:

A good friend of Zoya and fellow Raw agent, he is also in Mumbai. He worked with Zoya on several cases previously.

Pooja Sharma

A raw agent. She is currently posted in Pune. She has a secret crush on Yash. She is expert in operating firearms.

She is a friend of both Zoya and Yash.

Victoria Lopez:

She is Aditya's FBI partner. She has developed a good friendship with Aditya.

Parvati Hooda:

She is the Mother of Aditya. She is an independent woman who raised her son as a single mother. She struggled a lot initially in USA but today she is a respected American executive. She is proud of Aditya but at the same time, she is worried about her son's loneness.

Chapter 1:

Washington D.C., USA

"You are looking angry."A female voice remarked.

"I am not angry now Victoria, I am irritated. Today was my leave and I was planning to see my mother after one month but suddenly I got a call from hq." Aditya told

"It happens with us all the time; we are bound to serve 24 hrs." Victoria told Aditya.

" Yes, but you know why hq called me, they called me because the victim is Indian and my bleeding heart White liberal boss thinks, I should be sent there as he thinks me as an Indian American and because of that, I will understand the cultural sensibilities better than a White FBI Agent. It is another reason of my irritation, I don't like identity politics." Aditya told her.

"I think our boss also thinks that, you will be better suited to explain the things to the Indian Embassy due to your heritage." Victoria commented.

"India is just another foreign country for me Victoria, nothing else.

You are talking about explaining things to Indian embassy. If I am not wrong then I think the victim is someone important." Aditya remarked.

"You are not wrong in your assumption partner; the victim is an influential person. Victim name is Lalit Tyagi, he was second secretary (political) of Indian Embassy." Victoria informed him.

"So, what he was doing here, it's only 6 AM, if I am not wrong he was killed one hour ago which is 5 Am." Aditya told his observation to his partner.

"We don't know why he was present this street in this early morning. But after seeing his body we are assuming that, he was killed because of a robbery." Victoria told him.

"He was a senior diplomat, why he was moving alone, where his security personnel? Aditya asked Victoria.

"We don't have an answer for that Aditya. We will integrate those personnel later. Aditya our forensic team will come shortly but if you want you can look at the body." Victoria told him.

"Ok, let me get my gloves first. Victoria, do you have any eyewitness?

"We found a man unconscious near the body, it seems like he was knocked out by a punch, and if you want you can talk with him later, at this moment he is taking treatment in the hospital." Victoria informed him.

Adi nodded his head and went to inspect the dead body. The victim was middle aged. At first glance, Aditya also thought it was mugging by observing his torn cloth. However, Aditya decided to investigate further.

After five minutes of observation, Aditya stood up.

"So, what do you think Aditya?" Victoria asked Aditya.

"Victoria this man is not a victim a random mugging, it is a planned murder." Aditya commented.

"Aditya what is the reason behind your conclusion? " Victoria asked Aditya in a curious tone.

"Many...

1. If you look at the nails and hands of the victim there is nothing, if a person is fighting with another person to save his life then we can expect that, something of the attacker will get attached in victim's nail or hand, there is nothing.

2. Look at his expensive pocket watch, which is found in the pocket of his shirt. Why any robber will not take it away?

3. You told me, another person is found unconscious near the victim and he is younger than our victim is. Now, why the robber did not try to knock out our victim instead of killing him. If the attacker had the ability to knocked out a young man then he certainly could do the same thing with our victim who was middle aged.

On the other hand, if you say the robbers kill him, as they do not want to leave any witness, then again told me why they spare the young man's life who will be a certainly witness of their crime. Therefore, for me it is clear that, the attacker only wanted to kill our victim nothing else.

4. Look at the two trees in the right side, and two trees of the left side of the victim body, you will found that freshly drawnpie or golden ratio symbol in four tress. Therefore, it seems like our attacker left symbols in four trees after the killing of victim. It is another proof that, it is a planned killing.

5. Look at the wounds around the body, yes you will see several cuts, and at first glance it looks like the victim is dead because of several cuts.

Now, I am not a forensic expert but after working in FBI for seven years, I learn a thing or two about this.

You see a clear, medium size cut across the victim's belly region. Look at the way the shape of the wound, the attacker knew how the victim would die quickly in one attack; it is a sign of a professional killer not a random robber. I think the other cut was made to distract us.

Victoria it is a planned murder and the killer is very cunning, and those symbols on the trees are really looking mysterious to me.

It seems like we have to investigate this case very carefully. "Aditya remarked.

Mumbai, India

Zoya Siddiqui is resting in her flat after two sleepiness nights, her last case was very complicated and it drained her both physically and mentally.

Sometimes in her flat Zoya felt very alone. She had no kin as her parents died in her childhood under mysterious circumstance. From her childhood, she was searching for the answers that would explain her parent's death.

However, she still could not find the answers. Agency offered her better position because of her best performance but Zoya did not accept it, because she did not want to work in other departments.

Many of her fellow agents mocked her for her obsession with codes, mythology, and ancient past. However, in her six year long career Zoya realized that, her work was important. She found that clues of many current crimes were hidden in ancient past or codes or in mythology.

Zoya still had hopes about solving the mystery behind her parent's death while working on symbols or codes.

In her eight years, she worked on many cases, which involved solving many codes, decoding various symbols, finding analogy from various mythologies and recovering various relics of ancient past.

However, even after all of this a symbol still haunted her from her childhood. The symbol of pie or golden ratio

on four tress that was around her parent's dead body.

Chapter End.

Hello friends, this my first ff on AdiYa. Please tell me what you think about it.

Should I continue this?

If you want PM for update then please press the like button below.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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More character sketch will come soon.
Edited by mijanur - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks bila_a for liking this ff, it is first like for my AdiYa ff,it means a lot to me.
Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks luvpariansh, bila a for liking this ff.
It seems like this ff has lacked some depth. I will probably try to write new one.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hiii
What a great shuruwat 👏
V well written dear plz continue
Neki Aur pooch pooch 😛
Looking fwd to d nxt one 😊
Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovergirlalina

Hiii
What a great shuruwat 👏
V well written dear plz continue
Neki Aur pooch pooch 😛
Looking fwd to d nxt one 😊

Thanks for liking the concept.
I am still not sure about this ff.
I am thinking about starting a different ff.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mijanur

Thanks for liking the concept.
I am still not sure about this ff.
I am thinking about starting a different ff.


M'mm different ff like what do u thought ??
Be confident dear
Juz wanted to tell u
Continue ur writing don't give up
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start dear...seems interesting...please continue..😃.
Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovergirlalina


M'mm different ff like what do u thought ??
Be confident dear
Juz wanted to tell u
Continue ur writing don't give up

Like making a ff on Bepannaah's story so far.
Sadly I can write only one AdiYa ff at a time as I have six Prem -Heer ff to continue in kis desh forum.
Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ria.april18

Nice start dear...seems interesting...please continue..😃.

Thanks for your like.

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