OMG!!!
What a story!👏👏👏
Masterpiece...outstanding, mindblowing work Author/Nimmi(if I m wrong correct me). I m a huge Swasan fan but I was not part of IndiaForums that time. But I truly regret for missing this masterpiece! Yesterday only I found this masterpiece...trust me dear this evening only I finished it...even I (I slept 5.30 early morning just for sake of some sleep) skipped my sleep, what to do, I can't control myself!
TAKE A BOW AUTHOR/NIMMI👏🤗
Gabriel...just WOW..WOW..WOW! Powerful description and character. Sanskaar + Gabriel = Angel! Kitten's Angel. The way you described 'boy's transformation into Gabriel, his fight with Rocky and Lakah kid(😆), his nature, his outlook, his perfection, Rana and Gabriel's (may I say Sanskaar) bonding, his almost death, his bond with Kitten and her family especially with lil Ragini(awww!), his love for kitten, Madhav(😆) aka Maverick aka Maddy(oh Man! What a character..my second fav, ofcourse Gabriel is first one) and Gabriel/Sanskaar bonding, his smartness, his vulnerable side, his unconditional love...everything, everything about Gabriel is beyond perfect! I love it from the core of my heart! His warning to Laksh on that trap scene...OH MY MAATA, terrific❤️
Swara aka Kitten...intro chapter was awesome. Lovely character..innocent, beautiful, sometimes smart and brave too.
Maddy...one of the best character I ever read! Wow man, he was not perfect yet perfect! No.2 turned out No.1's brother..sole brother..unexpected twist! I don't know what to say about Maddy character..but one thing is sure that as much as this Angel FF and Gabriel/Sanskaar his Kitten is close to my heart, Maddy also equally close to my heart. He will remain of the best supporting character at least to me!
RP..yaar what a talent, best story teller! No wonder, he easily controlled Laksh Maheshwari. Brilliant villain for brilliant hero! Unexpected villain...but expected partner Rane.
DP...one of the strongest character in this FF. I don't like his selfish motive(dragged 'the boy' into dark world) though Sanskaar was right, it was his decision to stay back. Best father(second) to his son but Lucky was not actually lucky.
Rudra Pratap Rana..take a bow to this character! He knew about DP's real motive behind that 'boy', so he taught how to survive in dark world. Painful past...yet he found his child in the form of Sanskaar. Best father...best companion...best master...best friend!
Bozo, Apte, Dida, Adharsh, Pari, baby Ragini..each and every character had their own charming.
Sequel...wow wow wow Maddy's love story. Shivani character was huge surprise. In the beginning I felt sorry for Maddy, but after cop Shivani Ranawat's entry I was 🤣 like Bozo. Loved that Church scene! Best sequal for Masterpiece FF!!
Sorry for my first long comment😃 and mistakes.
P.S - Read about Angel's plagiarism. Felt like slapping that person😡😡. Because of that theif whole Angel fans and most importantly you suffered a lot. Sorry for you dear😭.
But please do not remove this story again...I wanna re-read, re-read, re-read...this story. Please...please!!!!
Edited by GayathriV - 7 years ago
