Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise,Pt 12 on pg 143 on 8/12 - Page 24

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part-1

Emotional update di

Ishra were working together and fall in love to each other and Raman talked to her parents. His mother was never happy and when they got to know of her disability, she took away Raman. Ishita was shockled and more than her condition, she was sad as Raman left her. She is waiting for him. Nice. update soon di

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Posted: 7 years ago
Emotional teaser do
Please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice teaser di
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update
Raman finally left his house for Ishita
Amma is impressed with him
Waiting for toshiji reaction
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome and Tensed Teaser

Ishita wants Raman to move ahead without her
while he too is adamant to stay with her
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Posted: 7 years ago
emotional update
loved it
beautifully written
superb
ishita is so cute
raman is so loving
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update di
Raman left Bhalla house for Ishita. He met Ishita and consoled her. He assured Iyers that he will be with Ishita. Emotional
update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Emotional teaser di...
Ishita don't want to marry anyone...
She asked raman to leave her alone
But raman told her he won't leave her n will be with her
Do updt soon di
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello friends back with new update .


Part 3


I- Raman they were telling that you left me .

R- no I can never leave my princess , where I will go without you .

She snuggled more into him and spoke " Raman please don't go leaving me ,you know your ishu will die without you ".

R- I m not going anywhere sweety . (wiping her tears )- now stop crying , jaldi se theek ho jaao ,phir ghar chalo ,you know na our marriage date is approaching fast .

Recalling the marriage thing she recalled the incident then the news of her disability . She teared herself from him and asked " Raman but that doctor told that I will never become mother ".

R- arey at first let us get married then will think about this .

I- but they told that you left me because I can't be a mother .

R- nothing like that sweety ,just went to drop my parents ,had dropped them in their house and come to you .

I- but you were not there yesterday .

R- I came back but it was late ,you had slept ,ask vandu she saw me .

Ishita looked at vandu ,who nodded in affirmation ,Raman teared ishita from himself and spoke " now enough of your questions ,chalo get up go and get freshen up ,had something ,till then doctor will come . After meeting him we will go back ,ok . "

Ishita nodded like a obedient kid and tried to get down of the bed ,when she lost balance due to weakness and tumbled a bit ,Raman held her in nick of time and spoke supporting her ,chalo I will come with you ".

Vandu was about to interrupt but amma stopped her ,while Raman took ishita to washroom ,she went inside while he was standing outside waiting for her . Amma went to Raman and spoke " I m so sorry Raman ,I thought very wrong about you ,but what can I do ,ishu was so broken and venerable without you . She not only loves you but you are her life ,glad you come back either we don't know how we were going to handle her".

R- no need to thank me Amma.. sorry aunty..

A- no no you call me amma only .

Raman smiled and spoke " no need to thank me amma as I also love ishi ,the same way she loves me .so I was also in same state like she was ,its just that I was ok and she was sick."

They were still talking when Ishita opened the door ,Raman held her and bring her with him to bed ,she lays on bed and amma opened the tiffin she brought for ishita . Ishita inhaled the aroma and spoke " the best sambhar in the world ".

She was happily opening the tiffin while Raman is looking at her with weird expression ,she too looked at him and spoke covering her idlies " Raman don't look at them with these greedy eyes ,I m not going to give you any , Amma has brought this for me moreover I hadn't eaten anything from yesterday ".

R- to Maine kaun sa thoosh thoosh ke khaaya hai ,buddhu I too hadn't eat anything moreover I think you forget ,I liked you because of these yummy idlies only .

I- jhoothe you told me that you liked me from the very first sight .

R- I lied so that you agree and become my girlfriend ,matlab ki I liked you in first sight but more after eating these idlies .

Ishra were busy in fighting childishly over idli while iyers were looking at them with amazed eyes wondering she is the same girl who was all lost and mum yesterday ,they silently send prayers to murugan for sending Raman back for ishita . They saw Raman was lovingly feeding ishita while she was keeping an eye on him so that he cannot eat all smiled at her kiddish act while appa told " Raman is actually taking care of her very nicely ,that's why she loves him so much ".

Soon Ishita was done with her breakfast, amma took the tiffin from his hand and kept it . Raman washed his hands and amma gave coffee to him which they brought from home and spoke " kanna I didn't know that you too were here ,I brought bf only for ishu ,you go and have something ".

R- no amma I m good ,I will drop you all after ishita's discharge then only i will go .

Appa - where to your new house .

R- no ,it will take two three days for me to shift in that house as I have to collect keys of flat ,then get it ready for living them only I can shift .Even I have to buy everything new for the house ,almost a new household .Till then I will take some hotel room .

Appa - why you will take hotel room , you will live with us in our house .

R- but ..

Appa - no arguments .you are coming .

R- ok .

Soon ishita was discharged and iyers returned home along with ishra . On the other hand toshiji was shouting and cursing ishita after knowing that Raman has left house and went to her .

T- how can you even do this bhallaji, why didn't you stopped him ,why didn't you wake me .

Mr bhalla- I did ,what I felt right , Raman loves ishita a lot and its not her fault that she cannot bear the baby then why she will get the punishment .

T- what are you saying ,at first you let Raman go and now supporting his wrong decision .The girl who cannot be a mother ,how can I let her marry my son ,hamara vansh kaise sage badhega .?no ,I will not let this happen , ishita is not perfect for Raman.

Mr bhalla - may be ishita is not a perfect girl but she is perfect for Raman because both love each other a lot and toshiji we have romi too ,Raman ke nahi to romi ke bachche honge, what's the big deal .?

T- bhallaji you don't talk these rubbish to me ,ye pyaar vyaar sirf baatein hoti hai ,the truth is once you get married without thinking and then will regret all the life .

Mr bhalla - Jo bhi ho ,I thought Raman was doing right ,thats why I let him go . Now don't argue much .

T- you just wait and watch ,I will not let this marriage happen .

Mr bhalla - toshiji please ,don't create any fuss in their life ,let them be happy .

T- aise kaise happy ,badi aayi mera puttar chinne waali ,I will not let marriage happen .

Like this they argued for much time without any result . In iyer house ,ishita was recovering fast while ishra marriage date was coming closer . Raman has taken the keys of new flat,then went to ishita . She was sitting in her room ,he went to her room and spoke " ishi guess what ".

I- what ?.

R- I got our new flat ,chalo get ready ,we are going to shop for our new flat .

Ishita got up from her place and spoke
" Raman I m not coming with you ".

R- kyun tera mood nahi hai kya ,look at me ,main abhi tera mood theek kar deta hoon .

I- that's not needed ,I m good . I just wanted to inform you that I m canceling this marriage .

R(shocked )- what !

I- yeah ,this marriage is not happening .

R- ishita have you gone mad ,are you even listening to yourself ,what are you saying .

I- yeah, I know what m I saying but I want you to go back .

R- tera dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai ,I m not going anywhere and will marry you on the fixed date only .

I- but I don't want to marry you ,actually not only you but I don't want to marry anyone . everyone just leave me alone,I don't need anybody .

She almost shouted on him thinking , he will go from there angrily as per his nature but instead he got up ,walked to her and asked cupping her face " do you really think that I will go by listening your rubbish talks ,I know what you are trying to do but listen to me sweety ,I. M .NOT .GOING .ANYWHERE.

He spoke stressing a every word turning her eyes moist ,she let the tears fall and spoke " please Raman go away from me ,I m not your worth ".

R- you don't have any right to decide your wortg for me ,that I will decide and had decided that no one is as perfect as you for me .aur kisne boli ye sab faaltu baatein tujhse .

I- you all treat me as kid but I m not ,main bachchi nahi hoon Raman ,I understand everything . please go away from me .

R- wahi to ,you are not a kid but a fool ,pagal hai tu .

I- don't call me mad .

R- to kya boloon ,I have seen your condition when people told that I left you and you are talking about living without me .

I- that time I was traumatized but now I m ok ,Maine sambhal liya hai khud ko ,I can live without you .

R- but I cannot ,ishita I really love you.

I- I too love you a lot ,and you will be my first and last love but I cannot ruin your life by marrying you.

R- why do you think that you are ruining my life by marrying you .?

I- I cannot give any happiness .

R- what happiness are you talking about baby .

I- yeah ,I will be feeling guilty all my life ,if I marry you .

R- yaar that was doctors report .how can you rely on it .waise bhi you can be treated .Ishita baby can be because of love but baby can't be the reason of love . And if you want baby ,at first get married ,we will try naturally if that will not work ,there are many ways to get babies medically .Now stop this rubbish and get ready ,I don't want to listen you bakwaas anymore .

I- but Raman.

R- bol liya tune Jo bolna tha ,Maine sun liya and answered also . Now if you don't agree then I m going to be monk .

I- monk ,why ?

R- kya karoon , if you will not agree to mujhe to sanyaas lena padega na .

I(smiling )- kuch bhi .

Raman pulled her more to him and spoke " I have another idea ".

I- what .

R- if baby is base of marraige ,we should try first and will marry once you become pregnant .

I- chee besharam .

R- what besharam ,you people are assuming before trying then what should I do .dekha because of your baseless talk ,you spoiled my mood ,now cheer me up .

I- how can I .

R- madam did you remember ,when you kissed me last .

I-(blushing )- Raman we are in my home .

R- thats why I came to take you with me ,but you are talking all baseless thing and wasting time .will you come now or should I go ?

I- you wait ,I just come ?

Sating so she turned to leave when Raman turned her to him and took her in a bone crushing hug ,she too closed her eyes and hugged him back . He pulled her from him and spoke kissing her temple softly " I live you Ishita and please don't think this rubbish again ".

Ishita nodded and went to change .

Thats all for now friends ,hope you like this ,enjoy reading and do comment .

PS - 185+ likes and nice comments for next update .
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