Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise,Pt 12 on pg 143 on 8/12 - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago
Fantastic Start

Raman and Ishita are in love and both Mrs Iyer and Mrs Bhalla are against their relationship
its good that both convinced their families but on the day of their engagement
Ishita's health issue gets revealed and now the marriage is called off thats awful




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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello friends back with new update .

Part 2


I- akka my Raman cannot leave me .

Vandu looked ishita at disbelief and hided ishita in herself to console her while a fresh set of tears made their way from both pairs of eyes . Ishita burst into tears and spoke " yes akka I know my Raman,he treat me as his princess ,he never let anything hurt me then how can he leave me when I need him most ".

V- Ishru kanna ,I know you trust Raman a lot but its not good to keep wrong hopes .

I- its not wrong but right ,you people don't know him but I knew him very well.

V- may be something was still left for you to know about him .

I; no akka ,I know him well . he liked me first ,he confessed his love first ,he told that our culture and status doesn't matters to him ,he convinced our parents then how can he leave me like this . I know he will definitely come .

V- no Ishu ,please don't keep wrong hope bachche ,he will not come .agar use aana hi hota ,to wo jaata hi nahi .

I- no akk please ,don't say that I cannot live without him ,main mar jaaungi unke bina .I love him so much akka ,I love him so much .

Saying so she cried even more louder and soon lost her senses . Vandu ran out and called the nurse to check ishita ,the nurse came ,checked ishita and gave injections to her ,instructing vandu to let her rest and keep her tension free .

Vandita nodded and the nurse went from there . Vandu sat with ishita for sometimes ,caressed her hairs and felt bad looking to her state ,she too cursed Raman and his family a lot, as she can see ishita is feeling more pain because Raman left her than getting the news being barren . Soon she too drifted to sleep .

On the other hand Raman's sleep broke and it took some minutes for his to realize the changes of his life . He find himself sleeping in the floor ,hugging Ishita's pic . He recalled all the happenings of last day and started panicking thinking ishita must have got back in senses and will be finding her . He looked at the time and find its 3.30 am in night ,he thought something and then got up ,packed some of his cloths along with some necessary things of him and went out from his room . In senior bhallas room ,Mr bhalla got up to have water but saw the bottle was empty ,he saw toshiji who was sleeping peacefully ,shook his head in disbelief and spoke " how can you be so inhuman toshiji here ,how can you sleep so peacefully after doing such bad with that poor girl ."

Thinking so he took the bottle and went out to take water, when he saw Raman coming out of his room with his bag. Mr bhalla saw him and asked " Raman you didn't slept yet and this bag ".

R- papa you are still wake .?

Mr bhalla - this is not answer to my question Raman .

R- papa though I came leaving ishita on ma instance but now going to my ishita.

Mr bhalla - I didn't get you .

R- papa I tried a lot but it didn't happened, i can't leave ishita in that state .ma will never accept her so I had decided to live separately.

Mr bhalla - you are saying that you will leave your parents .

R- papa, if ma didn't liked ishita she should had denied earlier and may be I would had accepted it .main manage kar leta but now I can't leave her in this state .if she would be normal may be I would had left her but I can't leave her after knowing about her disability . ye bahut galat ho jaayega papa ,then no one will able to live and trust anyone .

Mr bhalla - but puttar ,atleast try to talk to your ma ,may be she will understand.

R- no papa she will not ,agar unhe samajhna hota then she wouldn't had brought me back. She would had left me in hospital to console ishita but no she was hell bend to bring me home . but not now ,I m going to my ishita .

Mr bhalla - but puttar ...

R- no papa ,if you had loved me ever then let me go ,ishita must be looking for me .

Mr bhalla ,- will wait for you .

R- will come back in this house with my ishita only .

Saying so he hugged his father and went from there while Mr bhalla watched his retreating figure . Raman settled in car and drive towards the hospital ,after about twenty minutes drive he reached the hospital . He went inside and saw there was a pin drop silence ,as everybody was sleeping ,he went to Ishita's cabin and tried to push the door but found, it was locked from inside .He looked at the time it was 4.00 am ,he thought not to disturb them and sat in the bench nearby . He sat there and started waiting for people to woke . After waiting for about one hour ,he slept in sitting position leaning on the wall . He just had slept when ,his sleep broke listening to some sounds , he opened his eyes only to see a nurse knocking the cabins door loudly ,soon the door was opened and nurse went inside to give injections to ishita ,along with vandu and nurse Raman too entered the room and stood there . He waited for nurse to go while vandu was in sleep and didn't noticed Raman thinking he is someone with nurse .

Soon the nurse went but Raman stayed back ,vandu then noticed its Raman and shouted " tum ,what are you doing here".

R- I m here to be with my ishita .

V- who ishita ,whom you left after knowing she is barren .

R- no I didn't went knowing that rather I went just to take my mother away from here ,as she was going on badmouthing my ishita.

V- waah, that's good ,at first you go leaving her and now has come back ,what you want to show that you love her a lot .

R- no ,I don't want to show anything to anybody ,just have come here because I know my princess needs me ,she would be vulnerable without me .

Though vandu was too angry on Raman but his all statements were right ,ishita was actually in very bad condition without him . vandu didn't spoke anything and went to sit on the couch while Raman went to ishita ,sat beside her ,caressed her forehead after dropping a soft kiss on her forehead ,it seems that she sensed him in her unconscious state also ,she turned towards him and snuggled into him,he pulled her to him and held her hand more tightly .She slept peacefully in his embrace while he too slept after sometimes in sitting position itself holding her close to his heart ,vandu too slept after sometimes.

Soon it was morning ,Raman's sleep broke listening to the chaos ,he got up and saw amma appa has come and amma was saying something loudly . He straightened himself,pushed ishita a little and stood up in his place . He greeted morning to senior iyers ,Mr iyer answered him back while amma asked angrily " why you are here ,was the hurt you have given to my daughter is not enough ,that you have come again to give her more pain .".

R- amma please don't say that

Amma- don't call be amma as I m not your amma .

R- ok if you don't want ,I will not call you amma and will call aunty but please don't say that I had hurt ishita . I can't even think to hurt my princess in my dream also .

Mr iyer - but you went leaving her when she needed you most .

R- I know that's why I came back .

Amma- and what about your mother ,who was badmouthing my innocent daughter .

R- yeah you are right ,I went from here just to take her away from here ,now I m back to my ishita ,this time for always .

Mr iyer- what does that mean .

R- I left my parents house and now will marry ishita on the fixed date and will live separately in my appt. which I get from my company.

Amma ,appa both were shocked listening to this and both spoke together in disbelief " what !.

R- yes,I left my house as I know ma will not accept ishita .

Mr iyer - do you think it will be easy for you to live away from your family .

R- no its not but its impossible to Luce without ishita .I had promised her to pamper and take care of her always like my princess .

Though amma was cursing Raman a lot yesterday but today she was impressed with him .She looked at him with gratitude but before anyone can say anything ishita opened her eyes . As Raman was standing beside her ,near her head only, she couldn't see him ,she looked at door then got up in jiffy and asked " appa ,amma Raman has come na.yeah I know he has come ,I can feel his presence ".

Raman smiled listening to her and answered " I m here ishi ".

She raised her head ,saw him and opened her arms like a baby opens her little hands for her/his father ,Raman too went to her ,settled beside her and engulfed her fully in his arms while she broke into tears and complained" Raman they told that you left me ".

R(caressing her hairs )- no I can't ,I can never leave my baby .

That's all for now ,hope you like this.Enjoy reading and do comment.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome Teaser

So Raman can't live without his Ishita
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Updated new part ,have a look.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome superb fabulous update dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome Emotional update.
Raman came to her leaving his parents..
Vandu amma and appa were angry with him But knowing that he came for ishita They were silent and impressed with him.
Hope Toshiji also accept them soon.
Update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Damn emotional update
Raman couldn't live away from his ishu
And he is back
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update
Ishita ws sure raman cant leave her vandu ws pacifying her
Raman woke up at night n decided toeave home
Mr bhalla asked him to think bt he ws sure bcs he cant leave ishita ..he reached hosp n waited
Finally he met his ishi ..
Amma appa were angry bt realized raman has left his parents for ishita. Ishita woke up ..loved how she opened her arms n puttar engulfed her
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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